[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Just for ur satisfaction wanna say u will cry, laugh, kill me, pull ur hair n do everything :p
Wat u all think I am?? A serial killer?? Do u think I can kill my boy?? No rite but thn my evil mind can do anything... 50-50 rofl I feel like jallad now hahahaja shah but no worry u won't be sad at the end I think not sure though :)

i know you are not evil enough to kill ur boy though you are evil enough to make Manvi pregnant wid other man's baby >.< maar dalungi tujhe aisa kiya toh evilia 3:)
anyways... Njoy ur Eid and write soon 😊

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: shona_virman

i know you are not evil enough to kill ur boy though you are evil enough to make Manvi pregnant wid other man's baby >.< maar dalungi tujhe aisa kiya toh evilia 3:)
anyways... Njoy ur Eid and write soon 😊

U know me well :p I actually thinking about it u know :) let's see how it works? Posting a teaser now :p
N u too enjoy ur Eid ^____^

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#913

TEASER!

V- leaned his face beside her ear n whispered in a husky voice "if you really wanna hurt me, then hit me on the spot where I can see the scar n feel the unbearable pain. However, you can do that ONLY if U give me the pleasure n honor to explore you explicitly, until than keep trying maybe once in a blue moon I'll be hurt" then kissed her earlobe n tighten his grip on her abs.

Hope u all had a great Eid!!!! May god bless u all. Live happily n spead love!!!!
For update I don't know when.. Just pasted whatever I wrote long time back lol :)
Thinking shud close the rape case in one chapter or spread in half? Wat to do ? But u won't get 15 pages ok!!! Lol

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unknown

@anu0555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

awsome teaser !!! loved it..!!!

plzz cntnue soon !!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

just cloese the rape case kuch ziada hi lamba ho gaya hai :p
update soon

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#916

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

yipee me first
superb update..
loved manvi and vihaan

ohh its varun.. I thought you will make Jeremy as manvi s present
ya I'm having doubts about manvi s pregnancy
waiting for next update...
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Superb part awesome
thank u for pm
too good dear
great work

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unknown

@anu0555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#919

it was very very very good..!!!

awsome..!!!

great...!!!! superbly written..

loved it to the bottom of my heart...

loved virman scene..

tooo guddd as always...

marvellous update...

thnk u for PM..

waiting for nxt one...

do contnue soon...!

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#920

it was sucha nice part n u calling it boring...haw...

do I need to say it again dat I like dis kiddo...hehe amazingly written , the part of manvi n vihaan...I luvd it a lot...n amazingly written Whr virat tries to bring manvi true feeling for him infront of her...though in a mischievous way...

I liked the whole part a lot...

thank god u ending the rape case...n yeah did I mentioned dat I am eager to knw abt manvi getting n reading virat dairy...her reactions n everything...hehehe...

update now...hehe

Edited by surbhi.sur - 12 years ago