[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 81

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Finaly.

Fariaaa

This has to be your best update ever. I think your going soft😛

Loved the concern Virat had for Manvi when he thought he was going to lose her and the speed chase you don't stop at anything do you.

But now we have to wait again to figure out how Manvi realises her feelings for Virat because although she says she doesn't she has them alright.

So glad that you made MAnvi say that Virat didnt do anything I think our boy has had enough torture.

Amazing update. and just because you write a bit of concern from the boy to the girl doesn't make it lame.

pshhh your a weird one never want to give us a happy and sweet update. But i get where your coming from all happy shappy is sometimes too boring whereas your story we never know what to expect and i love it.

Ok I'm blabbering so over and out ..

👏

Nush

There is no Gain without pain di... Just trying to prove that! & yes I will give u unexpected stuff so don't wish for anything cuz u will get some but in my way n u have to wait for it :p
Just so u know he is my boy n will make him crazyyy!!!! ^____^ thanks for reading n commenting

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Am I making him a good guy? 😉 What u think?

i dnt kno
im actually getting scared now
aapke evil dimaag mein aakhir chal kya raha hai
that only you kno
and we can do nothing except wait n see ufff 😕

Originally posted by: Faria12345

There is no Gain without pain di... Just trying to prove that! & yes I will give u unexpected stuff so don't wish for anything cuz u will get some but in my way n u have to wait for it :p
Just so u know he is my boy n will make him crazyyy!!!! ^____^ thanks for reading n commenting

Originally posted by: NushIsh

I know its best not to expect with you because if you think we're getting too comfortable you do a 180 degree turn around.😉

I know your going to make him crazy that's your forte but just to be clear Kushal is our guy😛

Virat from OM is yours😛

😆

Kushal is real VIRAT is fake! Believe in reality bit fake one can decorate :-)

Originally posted by: Huma0301

i dnt kno
im actually getting scared now
aapke evil dimaag mein aakhir chal kya raha hai
that only you kno
and we can do nothing except wait n see ufff 😕

Itna darte kyu ho jaanemaan!? Do I look like a hitler? *cries out loud* lol I'm a good soul in hitler avatar :p wats Coooking in my evil brain? Ummm pizzzaaa <3

Shollyyy fr the late...*kan pakadke*

goshhh...this is called a 'chummeshwari' updt...yeah thats the perfect word...dont u think...lolzzz...jokes apart its a fab updt like as usual...

My my...the car driving scene was like i m planning GTA vice city...zoommm...awww poor raj i feel pity fr this boy...*virat ki dosty ka mara*...hmmm frdshps a dangerous sometime...but again *har ek frd zaruri hota hai*...lolll

1 advise to u viru boy...c i always believed that India has so much talent...n u r so talented man...y u r wastaing that in rash driving n being caught by police...shyaaa...u can give tough complitition to michael schumacher...come back...*virat India ka naam karega*..lolzzz

last part was my fvrt...manvi words broke his heart...awww...bad girl...ohh hoo so virens got some slite idea abt virats unknown feelings...ahh haa...lovestory is going to start now...hopefully...bcs i cant trust u fully faria...

Btw i missed my vihu baby...i want vihaan scene next time...humphh...cont soon soon soon

It's way tooo early to give u a teaser but b4 I change the plot just thought of sticking to this! :) so here it is...

TEASER

Driver- "u guys r really cute... How long have u been dating?"

M- "we are not dating" said bitterly, gritting her teethes

V- "who said we are dating? It's just she is carrying my baby inside her womb, so I'm taking care of her like a good father" answered smartly, had that confidence look on his face with a sweet smile curving his lips.

M- " :O wat the hell." Looked at him in disbelieve, burning in flame

V- did a "muaaah" expression n grinned more

M- tighten her fist, anger was reaching to its peak

Driver- aaa... Congratz! How many months?
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V- "it's time to take my drunk ass home, I drank all ur whiskey... Hicupp n my money's all gone.. So here I'm sitting all alone cuz I don't how to get back home :/" giggled n drank the last sip of that left over whiskey
(eee saying thanks to Luke Bryan)

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Shollyyy fr the late...*kan pakadke*

goshhh...this is called a 'chummeshwari' updt...yeah thats the perfect word...dont u think...lolzzz...jokes apart its a fab updt like as usual...

My my...the car driving scene was like i m planning GTA vice city...zoommm...awww poor raj i feel pity fr this boy...*virat ki dosty ka mara*...hmmm frdshps a dangerous sometime...but again *har ek frd zaruri hota hai*...lolll

1 advise to u viru boy...c i always believed that India has so much talent...n u r so talented man...y u r wastaing that in rash driving n being caught by police...shyaaa...u can give tough complitition to michael schumacher...come back...*virat India ka naam karega*..lolzzz

last part was my fvrt...manvi words broke his heart...awww...bad girl...ohh hoo so virens got some slite idea abt virats unknown feelings...ahh haa...lovestory is going to start now...hopefully...bcs i cant trust u fully faria...

Btw i missed my vihu baby...i want vihaan scene next time...humphh...cont soon soon soon

Ur last wish will be granted :p thank u for te feedback! N no sorry for late psh u may give anytime u want :)

aww that was naughty and cute virat...update sooon