[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 9

Originally posted by: SNTG

fariaaa u r sooo funny and entertaining lol...in between update or u can say during whole update i was just laughing at ur cracked up lines when u add ur point of u but seriously if u ask u are the first writter who is not so serious about story but passionate means u want to do it from ur heart and for ur satisfaction right, and that makes u different faria...u are seriously sweetheart and yes ur story is fantastic and seriously this was very long update haan but don't worry i did not sleep as i said it is full of entertainment myyy god the lines which u aad by urself or we can say ur point offview is seriously life of ur updates , that's what i think don't know about others :p...and this is what i felt , u said u want honest replies right sooo sorryyy if u get hurt by any of my things above and one thing i have never commented this much long in any of the story but u made me do this...okay now enough byeee

Originally posted by: vamps1996

omggg

i still cant believe it u wrote this seriously!!! are u fariaaa???

what u did to our faria goshh girl give her back rofl 🤣

the update was super doper long not to mention grrr anyone can see that lol 😆

im so gona make u embarass hehehehe u seriously wroye that romantic part 😲 cant get it off my ming its all ur fault pshhh

i was roflinggg in the first two parts hahahhahahahaha he's such a jerk and flirt but his answers nake me laugh my ass off and hawww u asked for bada comments... i already comment bada na 😉 forget it but dont u dare make a tragic ending i dont trust ur evil brain girl 😳 hehhehe

dammm enjoyed reading it was a full on midnight treat :-p

Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

Dude!
Faria is that seriously u? No i dnt thnk so...hehehe was just joking bt kahan chupa k rakha ta itna talent u wrote amazing baby!
N omgsh tis is indeed maha epi type chapter 4 post for one chap aqlause for u great job
n we lovd it simply frm beginning of the update to its end

p.s u better post the banner soon or i'll ask damon salvatore to compel u n make u do banner!
Vampire diaries rocks baby btw!

Originally posted by: Faria12345

hahah thnkans but U DID NOT FINISH READING!!! scrool down n read more.. n unress ur comment wen u r back cuz or else u not getting any update

Originally posted by: Menzena

Don't worry I read it trust me 😉. You know when bheege hont tere started playing , I played it in the background to get into ''the mood''. 🤣 VirMan make me besharam 😛

AFter reading this maha update three words...

You are awesome !! 🥳

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Phewww let me breath...hashhh...goddd...this girls r spoiling my lill, innocent mind...dont worry i m 18+ n very much besharam...lolzzz

it was freaking HOT, sexy n romantice updt...just superb...u nailed it...no need to hide ur face...there is nothing too much fr which u need to go hide somewhere...it was very mature n clean intimate scene...nothing over exaggretion...nothing dirty or ugly...just a pure romatice scene...n i loved that...

My b they feel its mistake but their this mistake will change thire entire world upside down...their life, feeling, behavior will change after this poit...it will b intresting to c who will find this change 1? Who will fall in love 1st?...hmmm excited

loved their witty fights...its just treat to read their convo...lovely

n thnx alot fr this very long updt...but excellent...keep it up...n updt soon...n pls pm me next time