[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

res

unres

awesome update

luv virat in this

like manvi's punishment vry much

precap seem interesting

continue soon

thanke for the pm

Edited by nisha_virman - 12 years ago

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Cheating.. m waiting for your update on fb lol.. 😛
Its fab.. I already read dis.. 😊

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: nisha_virman
res

Hope u unres soon :p

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: ShivRajput
Cheating.. m waiting for your update on fb lol.. 😛
Its fab.. I already read dis.. 😊

Ahah that will be next week :p cuz I'm not updating until I finish part 8 😉

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Awwwsum...update..
I reallly enjoyed it!!!
Nd d punishment which manvi hv given to virat my god
He can do anything but dat...lolzzz
i hope virat shud also no dat manvi is his bhai' saali sahiba..
Update asap

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

God! I loved this update it was amazing 👏! Manvi was gonna leave 😲 but my Viru stopped her awww . 😊 Oh and when he was feeling guilty that was so cute 😳The explanation - 🤣. Itne detail mein explain karne ki kya zarurat thi, hum samajh gaye ke use laga uska rape ho raha hai 🤣😛 . Awww it was so cute. Thanks 😳

The ending was adorable, he told the driver she was his gf 😆. AND when you write THE END ! I was like WHAT!? Thanks for continuing 😉

Hawww? The precap => Bheege hont tere? 🤢 *DEAD* . How can you give such an amazing precap and expect me to be patient 😭😛.Jaldi update karna cuz I can't wait 🤗THANK YOU! LOVE UR UPDATES ❤️