[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 8

Originally posted by: Ankzmishra

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#cc3366">faria the update was just amazing 👏</font>

</div><font color="#cc3366">loved it to the coreee.. ❤️
manvi was all set to go that to in that time 😲
and ur self-explanation abt molesting i was just laughing at the line when u said Explained enough?thought so 😆
OMG he said everybody that he kissed her late at night 😉
he is all dead 🤢😆


u know when u said the end i was like what such a chota update 😆then i saw its not the end (i was thru phn na therefore)😛
virat was sitting with her in the car and also forcing her to sit with him lovely 😃
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he again got frustruated OMG 😲bt atleast he controlled it

and<font color="#cc00ff">M- took a deep breath n said.. OK... But u don't follow me nor touch me.. Least can u do is stay away from me.. N thn u will be forgiven..

V- looked at her with a sexyyy cute smile n said "yes ma'am as u say!" <font color="#ff6633">this part was awesomeee...</font></font>

<font color="#cc00ff"><font color="#ff6633">and what did he say to driver my girlfriend 😉kya baat hai 😆

and the precap seems damn interesting 😉

by the way when is virat gonna know that manvi is jeevika's sis

so update asap 😃
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Part 7: MAHA EPISODE

Hello wonderful girlies! How are u all?? Hope all is good with you all...here I am back to bore u with my not so good story... I wonder how u r even liking it? *go see a doctor*


Ok jokes apart! Just to let u know this is my MAHA CHAPTER!
This chapter is so damn long that it worth's as much as 3 chapters combined! WHAT! I know I know .. U will be bored.. Trust me, I almost slept reading it ... Psh its long , funny n... I guess...

So DO READ it SLOW cuz there Is a lot of things going on.. By the time u reach the middle u will be like what happen on top lol...

Oh yes my Pg 13 readers DO NOT READ after u see the WARNING sign. N my FB friends buhahahahah I know who u r so I will kick ur ass! Just don't read ... I'm embarrassed right now I have no idea what the hell I wrote.. So don't make me more embarrass ..don't u worry it's not that good u will fall asleep anyways so don't even bother

And ha don't think I'm a psycho or do cuz u will see me talking by myself n to u guys lol. Old habit :/

OMFG I so felt the pain of CVS script writer! Gosh it's hard to continue >.< we all demand too much *runs b4 u all hit me for praising CVS*
But if I can write that in 2 days than CVS ko toh money milte hai! Psh screw that u guys read n I stop my bak bak

Thank u hope u all have a sexy day!

Recap:

virman had their 2nd kiss (bedroom one). Manvi wasn't happy with his action and decided to leave NYFA, but he apologized and convinced her to stay back. Her punishment for him was to stay away from her. Do u think he will follow her warning? And did she really forgive him? well ...figure it out 😉


Throughout the journey manvi didn't say a word..virat was messing with her.. Sometimes gave her wink and dashed on her purposefully..By the time they reach the Campus parking rain started to pour


V- Aah see angels r also crying... do u know why? Cause u r doing Ignorance is a bliss

M- gave a fake smile n turned her face toward the window
V- Oh come on, don't be so heartless.. I mean it was just a kiss rite.. He came closer n said "I didn't even do the fun part yet and u r already avoiding me" gave a mischievous wink

M- hawww... You... Jerk pushed him hard n got off

V- ouch.. jungli billi..He got off too..
Hey I was just kidding..

M- started to take out the luggage from the trunk.. both were drenching in rain

V- "don't worry I got this" he said holding her luggage..

M-don't touch my stuff n stay away from me..

V- really.. Y so attitude ? I thought u forgave me..

M- well I changed my mind.
V- O I see... Hmm then I don't have to be nice too rite? *wink*
M-who told u to be nice?
V- no one did, but if u don't like me being nice to u, then I can be the wild one which is more fun..leaned against her ear n said "trust me girls love my wilder side and I'm pretty sure u will love it too"

M- was fuming in anger! First this boy annoyed her like anything n now he is saying those cheap cheesy dialogs n flirting with her... (Haad hai... Bandar sar pe charraha hai)

How cheap of u vadhera...apne yeh 3rd class dialogs kisi aur ko jake sunana..

V- I know right... All SRK's fault he used those boring yawning dialogs n people consider it so cool n all but OMG, I shouldn't have used it >.< ab hogaya na bad impression

*no offense to SRK fans and I love SRK too so don't pounce on me*

M-u r saying SRK' dialogs are boring n stupid? Then y u r using it? Cool dude have no brain to use his own line?
V- ah not like that, I always select specific lines that suits people *wink*
M- u r calling me boring n stupid
V- did I? *chuckled*
M-u r unbelievable ..
V- then believe me na...
M- urgh just go to hell..
V- before that I will take u to heaven (said under his breath)
M- did u say something?
V- no, did u hear something? Probably ur heart saying "oh he is so hot to resist"

M- hot my foot n she dropped the luggage on his foot..
V- ouch!!! What's up with you? Jab dekho pair pe hit karti ho... Planning to make me paralyze?? If so then I will make sure u are present in my service till I last breathe *wink*

M- u wish! saying that she walked away..
V- I don't wish baby I make it true.. He said it loud enough to heard by her..

M- tried to answer back but she slipped n fell on the ground cuz her 4 inch hills wobbled due to the water flow.
M- ouch...
V- he ran after her.. Hey r u ok?
M- yah I'm fine..
V- give me ur hand..
M- no I'm fine.. She tried to get up but failed.
V- his hand was still there for help..
M-with no option left she forwarded her hand to hold him but my bad boy rejected n stood up..
V- sorry but I offer help once n if u reject me, I return back too.. So help urself.. Saying that he walked off dragging her luggage to the girls hostel

M- idiot jerk.. Have no manners. How stupid I am to think that since he is a Vadhera, he will be polite screw him. She stood up n walk toward the hostel

V- "if u r a wild cat than I'm a tiger..
And u will know how WILD this tiger can get" mumbled on the way

CONTINUE BELOW

Front of elevator
Jenna- viraaat. Did u bring her back?
V- aisa hosakta hai ke virat kuch chahey or vo pura na karsake? Of course I brought her back..

J- Aur Vo maan Gaye?? Itne jaldi?
V- jungli Billi asani se thori na maanti hai... But no one can resist the charm of Virat Vadhera..
J- yah yah... No one can...btw what formula did u apply.
V- mmm that's a secret
J- u r such an evil one
V- kya kare yeh dil hai hi batamiz..
Aha.. Here u r wild cat..

J- welcome back manvi! Thank god u r here... Or else badi problem hojati Now go and change .. U rlooking Soaking wet!
Virat mmm... U want to wait till the rain stops?

V- no I'm fine.. I have my keys... I'll just drive back ..

J- ok thn see ya .. I'm going out with Raj! Plz take care of miss ria.. Will practice late night

V- LOL ha ha jaoo tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi.. Iss vadhera ka dil dariya hai..

J- thank u!! Bye.. N manvi u rest too.. In 3 hrs u got dance practice. she left

V- so miss manvi welcome back! Hope u enjoy ur staying...See ya don't miss me ;)

M- ha ha miss u... Dream on!

V- correction again.. I don't dream cuz I believe in reality and have the power to make things possible :p well, one day u will miss me like anything... He came closer.. Almost touching her nose.. But for now don't miss me so much that I can't leave u alone

M- thought "it's pointless to continue the argument..that will give him more importance which she won't give" so without saying anything she walk to inside the elevator..

V- arre.. Thank u toh bolti jao... 200 pounds ka luggage uthaya hai maine

M-go away u monkey.. Pressed the button n door was shut

V- u welcome wild cat.. (chuckled) N left..

In her room

M- stupid idiot monkey urghhh y do I have to face him... God u love me so much don't u?
She took a shower and sat beside the window with the novel, The Notebook.

10 mins later her eyes followed a figure who was acting weird in the parking lot..

M- she opened her window n some sprinkle of rain touched her face... She loved the weather... "Rainy day" most romantic time of the year. For a moment her heart urge to get wet and feel the nature.. But a loud thunder crashed her desire and she looked outside with full concentration..

What the hell is he doing???

Parking lot

V- where is my keys???he checked his pocket but there wasn't any.. Damn n he hit the tire but hurt his leg.. Ouch... Grrr now how do I go back... Can't even walk there too far plus it's raining..

Option#1
Should I go back to girls hostel?? Shit Jenna is out..and I won't go to that bandaria's place her ego will boost up..

Option#2
Urghh mm how about Victoria? Oh hell no virat if u wanna stay virgin then she is not the option.bad idea...

Option #3
Then. Who else ? Maya?no she is out... God may I ask y am I ur lucky child?

Option#4
Break the car n get inside ? What's wrong with me? I can't hurt my baby! Don't worry baby I won't let u get hurt (talking to his BMW S5)


Manvi's room

M- is he insane? Y is he getting wet?whatever y do I care.. It's his life...
N she started to read the novel..

V- sighs. I'll just wait here...he sat down dashing his back against his car n waited for the rain to stop

** Omg y dont he go inside!! Thats what u thinking rite? don't think my boy as stupid there is a reason behind his action/decision: you need a permission to enter the hostel; unless anyone invites u or they call the intercom he can't get in. N he wasn't gonna call anyone... Male ego :/**

1/2 hr later.. The rain didn't stop but got wilder. My poor virat soaking wet shivering n breathing hard.


M- she was enjoying the novel, but suddenly her eyes move toward the window n she stood up. "What the hell... Who sits in the parking like that? Crazy boy... Pneumonia ho gaya toh. Should I call him in? No he should ask for help... Mai Kyu jao?jisko jarurat hai Vo khud ayega.. Humph.." Saying that she walk toward the kitchen planning to make coffee . Meantime she turn on the music player making her rainy day a complete package.

15 mins later.. She walk toward her window holding the coffee mug about to take a sip but stop.. OMG he is really crazyyy! Such an idiot...she placed the mug by the window n walk toward the closet ... finding something

Parking lot

V- angels I think ur r having manufacturing default.. Y water flooding tears??? I'm shivering here have some sympathy n stop crying...

M- I can't believe I'm doing this... How I hate myself.she came near his car holding an umbrella

Hey! What are you doing here?
Hellooo??? Virat??

V- oh hallooo wild cat..
M- what are you doing here?
V- playing soccer u wanna play?can't find my keys so I'm locked out...
M- cant u answer straight? What's up with this attitude?
V- I can but kya kare jab Tum samne ate ho toh dimag humesha ulta hi chalta hai
M- jerk! God Y did I even came here??

V- god ko kyu blame kararhi ho aise bolo ki Tum mujhe miss kararhi thi...
M->.<
V- was smirking at her expression
M- cleared her throat and said " u r not good enough to be missed by me n it was my fault that I came here. U r such an egoistic man.. N I don't care about you. Samjhe"

M-she turned n started to walk
V- acheee... Cheee..
M- stopped ..thought to turn but WC let him suffer... I don't care n she walk further.

V- cheee.. 10x
M- urghh I hate u vadhera .. she walked back to him,bend down n hold the umbrella on top of him
V- opened his eyes. Gave her a sly smile n said "I thought u don't care. Then y u are here?"

M- looked down, bit her lower lip after a pause she said "cause I don't want my group to suffer cuz of u! We have a play and I don't want it to halt cuz of ur sickness"

V- hmm.. Smart enough..he chuckled.

M- now get up n come inside BeFore pneumonia says hello to u.
V- first ask nicely
M- what? U need my help not me
V- I never asked for it ...cheee
M-male ego! Ok fine come inside please
V- that sounded unwanted.. Say it sweetly with a smile like "Virat I missed u sooo much please come with me..."
M- go die I don't care n she started to walk
V- acha suno... Tum bhi kya yaad rakho gi tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye
M- manvi didn't look back and virat followed her with a mischief grin

KEEP READING

Manvi's room

V- aah much better... Thank u By the way
M- hmm .. Here take this towel n dry urself...till then I'll make coffee for u
V- ok... He sat on the couch n started to wipe his head however His sneezing was going out of control

M- jeez god bless u! When u know u get sick easily, then y did u stay outside instead of calling me ? U r such a fool

V- kabhi toh praise kiya karo.. N ha tumne hi toh kaha tha STAY AWAY from me.. Abb kyu daant rahi ho
M- such a criminal .. Always ready to backfire! #OverSmart

V-anyways, Jo maja bimar hone mei hai vo healthy rehne mei kaha?

M- kya?

V-
• advantage #1: people take care of u like a little baby
• Advantage#2: u don't have to do any work just sit n rest!
• advantage #3: saves ur life from whining n nagging, you get whatever u want.
Don't u agree?

M- stood there like a statue listening to his logic behind y it's good to be sick. Omg he is seriously mad! Isn't he? :p

V- What? Y u are staring like this? Aise maat dekho janeman warna log kehte hai love hojaye ga..

M- fuming in anger..
V- hahahahha chill... Love sirf books pe hota hai... It's all infatuation that makes u crazy n people call it LOVE! How dumb is that?

M- u r wrong.. Love do exist... If it didn't then you would have been living In a gloomy world
V- Nicolas Sparks pe PHD kiya hai?
M- ha kiya hai toh. Iss mei kya burai hai. He is the best selling author. And don't u dare to say a word against his work or any such!

V- "ya ya I know" he pointed toward the Novel left on her window shield
And ha hum kisi Golden age pe nehi reh rahi.. If u think logically we r already doomed!innocent People are being murdered, government law is biased n corrupted, u have natural distraction, people are dying everyday, murder/robbery is like a piece of cake. Child abuse, sexual harassments are like the no big deal.
Where does ur love exist madam?
DO U THINK WE R LIVING in fairy tales? Where ur so called love is superior?

Reality check babes! Its 21st century. Here money hai toh honey hai...love se kuch nehi hota.
M- speechless! After a pause she blurred "so that means u don't love ur family too?"
V- u r comparing family love with ur love? Well idk u call it love or Wat but I respect my family n their decisions. I care a lot for them n they do too. It's like give n take. If u call it love then mmm it's love.
M- why r u in NyFa? Should have been in Yale University...Look at ur facts
V- ah psh that ? It's gene problem. U see mera bhai, chachu, dada ji lawyers hai toh manufacturing fault.. Waise bhi ghar pe 3 lawyers hai ek aur barake cricket khelna hai?

Both chuckled!

V- aur hai yeh sab reasoning toh 5 year kid bhi de sakta hai... Tube light *he is back with his teasing*
M- kamina di ki devar.. Akkar toh dekho
V- tumne kuch kaha?
M- ha? Nehi..
V- u r so confused
M- n u are over smart
V- no its just I'm smarter than u :p
M- where do u get the energy to counter attack?
V- sighs.. It takes practice. Blame my bhai... He taught me some n I learned some by my self

M- I really hope god save that girl who will fall in love with u. Then u will know the true meaning of love.
V- oh no don't give me that curse man! I'm good as being single cant handle commitments. N it's fun to be single u know...

M- hahaha well then I will pray that u love someone that much that u can't live a second without her. And the moment she leaves u u don't wanna stay alive... Ps: god bless u! Well god bless that girl actually.

V- oh ya? Then may this girl be u! How about that?

M- not even over my dead body.
V- hawww don't say that. I can't die soon :/
M- u are insane
V- sane hoke kya Olympics jitna hai? So insane is better

M- I give up! Be happy with ur victory.
V- god u give up so easily but don't worry I will teach u NOT to give up

M- time will say
V- don't believe in time! I create my own rules n I own my time. Live ur life according to ur wish n terms so later u don't regret cuz u got One life to live :p
M- gyani baba ki jai ho
V- khush raho bacha..
M- virat u really don't believe in love?
V- what do u think?
M- rolled her eyes.
V- let's have some fun he thought .. Waise tum kise se LOVE karti ho?
Virgin hona yah phir already hit the 6er? *wink*
M- W*F!
V- ops ab tak virgin ho.. Poor soul sorry..
M- she backed out of kitchen n stood in front of him... What is ur problem aur kya burai hai virgin rehne mei? Kyu Tum nehi ho? Well I shouldn't be surprise if u r not
V- he chuckled.. U are right I'm not

M- stayed mum..
V-how do u expect me to stay virgin when thousand of girls are ready to attack me 24/7? And check me out like a eye raper...and kuch toh...
M- kuch toh... (Was curious to know)
V- smirked... Aah u don't wanna know... After all I'm their sex bomb..
M- kuch jyada hi self praising karahai ho...
V- then u do the job of my praising
M- get a life
V- iss life ka kya karna jab tumhi na ho..
M- ha ha very funny..
I will go change till then you drink coffee ... She walked toward her closet and took out a nice peach tank top with white shorts n head toward the restroom to change.

V-sipping coffee n walking around...this girl has no sense!! It's so cold in here n her AC is on! Where is the remote??
He looked around and found a remote but it wasn't Ac's it was sound box's .. He turn on the volume

PLZ don't skip the lyrics.. :p


?gunji se hai.. Saare fija jaise baj ti ho sehnaiya... Lehrati hai mehki hawa gunguna ti hai tanhaiya... ?

She came out n stood by the door placing her left hand on her hip "what are you doing??"

?Sab gate hai ..sab hi madhosh hai.. Hum Tum Kyu khamosh hai...?

He looked up and just checked her from top to bottom

She felt a little uneasy-shy n lowered her head but then looked up

?Dil mei jo.. Baate hai... Hotope lao naaa... Aao naaa aaao naaa... Chup ho kyu gayo na...?

Both had a eye lock for 2 mins n then virat winked at her.. Which surprisingly made her blush but then she controlled her emotion n rolled her eyes walk toward the kitchen

Virat gulped the coffee n placed the mug on the side table

?... Na na na.. ?

When she was in restroom she thought of making karah so that his sneezing stops... :p so now she is in the kitchen making karah

?Sun sako dharkane itna paas aao na...Sab gate hai, sab hi madhosh hai.. Hum Tum Kyu khamosh hai...?

He walk toward her n lean really close to her shoulder overlooking Wat she was making
M- She didn't realize that he was behind her
V- I called u witch that doesnt meant u will act like one
M- aaa... Virat... What r u doing here? N what u mean??
V- I mean to say if u r not a witch then y the hell u making potion? Do u know black magic? Or Dayan toh nehi ho? he checked her foot if it was upside down or not.. Phew they r straight so u are not. Thank god

M- what rubbish.. R u out of ur mind?
V- yay tum bandariya hi ho!! Thank god aaj bachaliya.. Warna Mai toh socha ke Tum

M-Mai kya.. pointed the knife toward him
V-remove the knife n lean close to her making her bent down...
Ke Tum... Acheee... Cheee.

M- stood up straight Pretty much embarrassed
Look here n there n her eyes Stopped at kara. She poured it in the glass n offered him

V- finally inhaled oxygen after continuous sneezing.
M- drink this you will feel better.
V- yeh kya hai?
M- best solution for ur cold! The Karah
V- his expression was like those kids who hate Karela
M- don't give me that look. Drink it or else u will be hospitalize
V-no, I'm just cheee... Fine ... Cheee..
M-I can see that.. Abb chup chap piyo warna..
V- warna kya miss manvi? Kya karogi Tum?
M- stayed mum
V- smirked and started to sneeze...

M- yeh kya itna sara pani kahase aya?? The floor was wet...
N then her eyes followed where the water was dripping from.. It was Virat! Meaning his cloths were soaking wet so where ever he walked the floor got wet.

M- omg! U need to change...
V- ha ha very funny. Do u have any cloths for me?
M- mm let me check
She walked over her cupboard n started to search!!
V- was watching her arguing in frustration "not this.. Yah this but No its too small for him..,"

M- a size Zero girl Looking cloths for 6 foot well built muscular Vadhera.. Well all the best to her!

Ha this... She hold a silk pinkish nighty n showed him with a smile...

V- his eye grew big... U want me to wear this?
M- witout thinking she answered "mmm yah.. "
V- Do I look she-male to u from any angle??? U want me to wear a nighty?? Aur vo bhi pink??
M-bit her tongue. How stupid she was to show him her nighty.. she throw the nighty inside the drawyer and closed the doors.
Hell embarrassed..

V- *chuckled at her action*
ok do u have a big towel?
M- yah...not looking at him..
V- may I use it?
M- yah sure. She have him a extra large white towel.. He took it n went inside the bathroom

M- face palm. Manvi how can u give him ur nighty? Shit so embarrassing.. Kya soch raha hoga vo mere bare mei...

Inside the restroom

V- crazy girl... Bandariya hai but itne bhi buri nehi hai... And he changed his cloths.

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write that.. NO WAYS it can't be me *HIDES*</font>

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forward to her back by her bra..</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0033cc">

N again he started to kiss her on the jawline...
Almost close to her lips..

N thn he did what he wasn't suppose to do...
Unclipped her stuff *wink



V- started to caressed her back... Kissed her
cheek n now about to taste her juicy lips...

M- was in full swing...



"in this crazy world of choices I got only
few .. Either you are coming with me or I'm coming with u cuz I finally
found... I finally found u" ---vibrated on her pocket...



Her phone ranged n ruined the whole scene...
(I love that song n it's my ringtone too :p #EnriqueIglesiasRocksBaby)



Both realized what the hell they were doing...

V- moved his head up n stared at her...

M- was embarrass like anything... Her cheeks
were red due to blushing and his kiss marks... Her eye lids were down she
couldn't face him... I mean how could she?? She just made out with a
stranger... What's the difference between a call girl n her then? God is being
so merciless ... Her heart stopped for a moment...! For 10 mins neither
of them said a word or move... Virat was losing his control again...
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M- he was approximately 2 inches apart from her
lips when she said in rough voice "GET OFF of me"

V- I can't...

M- what.. She pushed him hard n rolled on top of
him...he hold her tight...

Not to mention his hands were still under her
tank top..



Let me go u pervert... Leave me...she
screamed..



V- I will but not rite now. Just wait a moment..

M- she wasn't gonna listen to him... Her mind
was thinking.. Y don't he leave me.. Wanna rape me? Hell no.. She started
to punch him on his chest

V- he didn't react nor her punches were
affecting him... he is a good athlete this tiny weightless punches won't do any
harm



M- she was helpless at this moment.. But thn
thada the wild cat started to bite him harshly on his shoulder..



Her sharp pointed teethes were poking him like a
dagger..

Virat hissed in pain..



V- sss...ouch... Ok ok... Stop biting me
women...

M- didn't hear... Her anger was reaching its
peak.. She is willing to rip his flesh off if there is no option left



V- By this time manvi was making him Bleed

Ahhh u won't listen na thn suffer this..



He moved both of his hands up toward her
bosom n squeezed it hard which not only stop her biting but made her
fence in pain as well.



M- bit her lower lip due to pain..

V- after a while he stopped too

M- lift her head up n was staring at his eyes...
Blank face..almost teary

V- he could read what was on those brown orbs...
Shock-pain-hurt-embarassed-shy.



To ease her pain he caressed those areas where
he hurt her #IfuKnowWhatImean :p



M- dear god please do an earthquake n burry me
inside ... Can't Handel this...(her mind was saying that)



M- about to cry... She squeezed the rug.. His
touch on her special spots was making her shiver.. *goosebumps*

V- he knew it was wrong and shouldn't be
doing that but when opportunity comes don't miss it Baby *slaps myself! Face
palm*



M- was going weak.. She couldn't let her head
stood still so she bend down burying her face on his chest...



Her quivering lips were feeling like a kiss to
him



V- idk for how long he was caressing her.. He
just didn't wanted to let her go.. It felt like she was his property n have
every right to own it...

*she is not a toy boy u can't own her as a
property. *



M- she was just numb.. Her voice gave up.. She
had no energy to stand back n give him a slap or such



But than again her phone ranged "I finally
found... I finally found you"

Kaminis don't hate the song >.<



That ring awakened her again...n with left over
energy she lift her head high. But still stayed mum



V- broke the pin drop silence n said "sorry
but I had to.. "

M- closed her eyes and tried to stand up..but
each time she tried she fell back on him...

V- Stop! U can't get up like that...



Kaminies break lagao aur kya chaiyeee... Isse
jyada I can't give nor will! U will never get a sex scene from me... U all eye
rapist get off don't even dare to think whatever happened above!

Shit it's all my fault I should have stopped on
the first part.. But this Enrique n pitbull is so distractive that I
wrote this...



Hell embarrassed hides from everyone, runs for a
shower! At this moment I don't know u all nor u know me.


Ok drama finish? Now read further :p



V- Stop! U can't get up like that..

M- looked at him with wide eyes n tried again to
stand up...



V- manvi chaudhary if u really wanna see
me Naked then Please Get up!

M- was dumb fold by his statement...

V- smirked n said "look what are u
holding"

M- manvi's eyes followed his sexy Chest n then
she saw her fist was holding his towel! So if she moves then the towel will
move with her too.(she didn't hold the RUG but his Towel :p I'm good I know )



Quickly she released her hand n she fell on
him... Her lips touch the spot where she was bitting mins ago...

Don't know why but she kissed that place



V- the touch of her lips on that wound worked no
less then a medicine for him.. Indeed that one kiss was enough to seduce him..

Slowly n steadily he got hold of her open
undergarment n sweetly closed it... Remove his hand from her body...



M- while he was touching her stuff again she was
about to bite him but thn when she realize he didn't replay his previous action
again she stayed mum .. After he closed it



M- stood up right away..

V- stood up too n wrap his towel tightly..

M- before he could say a word or do any action
she just ran away...



V- "manvi.." said in a hurtful voice..
The Loud sound of that closed door stabbed his heart..

Again he was in that same position... Last night
kiss was the reaction of alcohol... But today wasn't the same case.. Whatever
he did, he was in his sense although he had no control over... but he did
it anyways :/



Sometimes you do mistakes although you don't
intent to do so.. But can it be fixed? Can anyone ever repair a damage/expired
product? Making a mistake is OK but repeating the same mistake is a sin.



And virat did that sin.. It doesnt matter
if his actions wasnt in his control... He DiD it n thats all it
matters...

Will he able to fix whatever he did today? Will
manvi forgive him this time? Or is this mistake will be the THE END of ur
dreamy Virman world! is that the one mistake I'm talking about? Can u
relate?



If u were in manvi's position what Action would
u have taken ?


If you have the answers then let me know!
Cuz don't know the answer.


Suspense... Mystery.. N frustration buhahahahah
I love it!


Teaser:



The banner for One Mistake is up it
summarize the whole concept of this story! Hint hint hint: u will see some
photos that will give u a clue for upcoming chapter/chapters (depends on how my
brain functions). Although I haven't decided what to write as u know I don't
plan n write .. But the ending I know how it will be :p which is the hardest
part! N I have no damn clue how to do it >.< but sssh I can't tell u that
now! *zips mouth*


I know u r super bored n wanna murder me rite
now for giving u such an pathetic chapter but do me a favor read the notes
below



NOTE:



One more thing..if u are wondering what happen
to Virat's sneeze? Well the answer is think about the time when u had cold... U
sneezed more at night then morning rite? Its cuz at night ur body wants to rest
n the bacteria wont let u live in peace cuz they wanna party
babyyy... Therefore if u stay busy n don't pay attention to ur sneezing then
it wont come.. Similarly he was busy doing stuff *wink* so sneeze won't dare to
come!


Whatever u all read for ch-7 it wasn't pre
planned. I didn't even think what I was writing .. If u scroll up than u can
see heaven's mercy it's way too long! I wonder how I write that much .. It's
all my iPhone note pad's fault >.< it doesn't show how many pages I wrote
so when I scroll up after a paragraph or so it looks small n my brain say write
more...



N for the love making scene gosh it was
pathetic. I'm so horrible at describing those scenes so don't blame me...
In fact I wasn't gonna give any of it ... I mean come on its only part 7 ...
Screw me .. all Jennifer Lopez fault tch tch her



Ps: listen to "I'm into you" good gosh
that song made me crazy n the result u can already see WHAT THE HELL I DID
>.<


Ps: i didn't do auto correct so if u see any
mistake then just forgive me cuz if I go back I will start writing again n it's
not good for my brain. Like I stopped at the first half of their love making
Scene but then when I went back to check I extended :O .. OMG I didn't
even get to the main part which I was supposed to do on this part n instead
wrote this...

KILL ME >.<


Now give me a good feedback! I don't want
"it was awesome or such comments" I want honest feedback thora bada
dena kaminooo kanjus kahi ke i give u long updates n u give me short comments!
Screw u.. I Will not update if I don't see big comments... Ha-ha JK :p

tell me if the chapter sucked or not which it
did I'm sure! :p u may ask any questions or tell me Watt u want or what I need
to improve... N thank u for reading this boring part

If u want Further updates than Send buddy req or
else hello hi bye bye

Rest of u if u r interested then hit like fast n
comment too! Do not REs or else I will res this Story haha n for now I rest my
case



Muaaah!



FYI ?

Don't tell me to update SOON cuz I am not
updating soon babes! Love to torture sorry! It's just not me but my evil
brain.. So don't blame me

<font size="3" color="#0000ff">🥱IM DEADDD</font>

<font size="3" color="#0000ff">PS:DON'TSTEAL MY WORK! or else i'll beat the crap out of u .. hahahah sab yeh line use karte hai toh socha mai bhi karlu😉</font>

Originally posted by: Menzena

Faaarriiiaaa!! Firstly I am so so so so so sorry, I posted in between your updates . I wanted to be the first to comment.

Right now, you don't udnerstand how much i love you for giving this very long update especially since this is in my favorites. The Maha episode ROCKED !!!❤️🤗

Mannu helping Virat was so sweet ... 😳 awww. It was so cute to see them like this.

I have exams and am really busy so I will right the other half of my comment very soon.

Don't kill me for the short comment 😛

Lots of Love

Take care