[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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JESMY

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Posted: 12 years ago

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😊 Awesome.continue soon.eagerly waiting.

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helina

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi Faria.. mmm... This was really cool. I found the narration of this was different. Interesting. Wow... Updates r so long. I must appreciate u for that. That shower part was funny. U updated recently i guess. Still update soon. Thanks for the pm and have fun Faria...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: helina

Hi Faria.. mmm... This was really cool. I found the narration of this was different. Interesting. Wow... Updates r so long. I must appreciate u for that. That shower part was funny. U updated recently i guess. Still update soon. Thanks for the pm and have fun Faria...

Yah I hate writing so I don't pay attention to the formats or anything... Sometimes don't even check what I write.. :/ rite now I'm regretting to post this story... Gosh it's so hard to continue..N for long updates haha I don't know how it becomes long although my intention is not that but it takes foreva to reach what I want... But thanks for ur comment appreciated :)

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zaira

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Just read the whole story in one go...it's a really very very beautiful story...loved virat's character a lot in this story...he is so cute...plz dear update soon...can't wait to read next...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

nice update now she get know he is her di dever and he came girls hotel to make her apologize but what he done with her in precap u show update soon

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kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

superb update

it was fab

virat and janney scene was funny

loved drunk virat

he kissed her

nice precap

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Haaawww, another kiss?! 😲 What's gonna happen now?!Drunk Virat is sooo adorable, I love him.😳 I want Manvi to help him, bechara he's in pain. Manvi found out he's her didi's devar, when will Virat find out !?

This update was so awesome!! I absolutley LOVED IT !! You're a really good writer and I can't wait for the next update.😃

The precap?! What's gonna happen next?! So many questions , which can only be answered when you update. So update soon please. 😊It was amazing. THANK YOU!!! ❤️👏

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Menzena

<font color="#009900" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Haaawww, another kiss?! 😲What's gonna happen now?!
</div>Drunk Virat is sooo adorable, I love him.😳 I want Manvi to help him, bechara he's in pain. Manvi found out he's her didi's devar, when will Virat find out !?
This update was so awesome!! I absolutley LOVED IT !! You're a really good writer and I can't wait for the next update.😃
The precap?! What's gonna happen next?! So many questions , which can only be answered when you update. So update soon please. 😊<div>
It was amazing. THANK YOU!!! ❤️👏</font>

Next update will be soon :) mayb mOnday

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ashfaqmiyaann

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wow wow wow the update was dhasooo

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Haalllooo girlies!!!!!! How are you all??? Hope u all r good! Exam takers all the best to u hope u rock it :p
Updating part 6 hope u enjoy... If its boring then I'm sorry :( ignore all my mistake cuz as u know I don't revise So forgive me for all the mistakes :) New readers plz send me a buddy request! N all of u hit LIKE n do give ur feed back will be waiting. Thank u! See you all next week ;)

Part 6

Recap:

V- don't underestimate me... I'm not like others and don't try that trick with me cuz When u stop thinking I start thinking. Get that inscribed in your brain.

M- dint pay attention to any of his words ... was doing her level best to release herself from Her evil ruthless monster.
It was hurting... Virat was holding her hard.. Her arms were pinkish red.
You are hurting me... Leave me...
Help...anyone... Help...

V- b4 she could scream her lungs out he pressed his lips against hers n locked it harshly..

M- was shock to bits... Her heart was racing faster then a bullet train.

V- slowly virat released her hands n hold her waist... Still didn't let her to move or break thru the kiss...

M- indeed she was going crazy n restless... She became weak... B4 she didn't let his force to over come her but.. He is my boy she have 2 give up..
No option left she let him do whatever he wanted...

10 mins later

V- finally break thru the kiss n inhaled oxygen...

M- didnt look at him.. Was feeling disgusting ... wanted to run away..

V- realize wat he did and remove his hand from her waist instantly.. I'm sorry... I didn't mean to..Manvi... I'm .. He held her shoulder..

M-looked at her shoulder n thn his
Face... A lone tear escaped from her eyes.. She jerked his hand off her shoulder n screamed "get out!"

V- was guilty.. Embarrassed... Angry at himself for doing what he wasn't suppose to do. He stepped back. b4 he could reach the door he became unconscious n fell on the ground...

M- was still blank.. She saw him trip but didn't move to help .. How can she? She was not in state to think...

1/2 hr later she walked toward her cupboard n started to pack her cloths...it was midnightbut manvi didn't care she just wanted to go away ..far from this awful place...

Meantime Jenna entered the room..

J- half drunk half conscious.. Hey babes u r still awake?

M- looked up but didn't say anything...Continued whatever she was doing..

J- hmm? Walked toward her n tripped ...
Ouch.. W*F.. Rubbed her eyes n said "virat?"

M- hearing that name her blood boiled .. She increased her speed n finished packing ready to leave...

J- hey what's going on here? Manvi...? Hello.. Can u plz tell me what the hell happen? N why r u packing ur bags?

M- she came forward handed her the door keys said "it was nice meeting you Jenna.. Will miss you but good bye"

J- wait Wat??
M- she walked off.. Leaving Jenna all confused.

M- opened the door..
J- she ran n stopped her closing the door... Hey hold on .. Why r u leaving what happen? Urghhh please calm down...

M- look Jenna I had enough I don't wanna stay here where people disgust me.. She glared at virat n turned back facing the door knob.

J- phew! Breath in breath out calm down.. gimme exactly 10 mins n thn you can go.. Please.

M- no jenna I don't wanna stay here for a second..
J- manvi please.. For me.. Please...
M- she dropped we bags.
J- Yess! Thank u.. Immediately she dialed Raj's phone n said "baby wake up! It's an emergency u have to come to my room rite now! Please hurry"

Raj- what? Before he could talk further she cut the call.. Raj got up splash some water on his face n ran toward girls hostel.

10 mins later he knocked the door.

R- breathing hard n said... What's going on u ok?

J- thank god u r here.. Please explain manvi she is not listening to me..

M- ur time is up.. Jenna thanks for every thing u did for me now good bye..

R- Huh?? Where r u going?? N who is that ?

J- ur good old best buddy virat!

R- WHAT :O he walk toward him n looked closely.. What the hack is he doing here?

J- I don't know... She is not saying anything...

M- head toward the door...
R- hey hey ... Wait hold up.. Where r u going at this time? R u insane it's midnight... N u will be in trouble if anybody finds out..

M- I don't care about anything .. Just wanna go from this place do don't stop me cuz I'm not staying.

R- u can't go without giving us info about y u r leaving n Wat virat is doing here?

M- Raj n Jenna please don't create scene.. I already had enough n I'm tired of all this bullshit.

R- but manvi..
M- what u wanna hear huh? That ur so called "cool dude of NyFa came to my room in the middle of the night n tried to molest me?"

R & J - said together "what!!!!"

M- she was about to break down but controlled her tears..

R- I think you have misunderstood something.. Virat is not like fishy he is a decent guy. Jenna agreed with raj

M- as expected.. Have fun with your decent guy .. He disgust me n I don't wanna see him ever in my life.. Therefore I'm leaving .

R- but manvi please listen yaar..

M- shaked her head n walk toward the door..

R- ok ok fine.. U may go but not this time.. It's too late n outside is not safe... Please listen to this last request... N stay till morning..

M- didn't agree..
Jenna plead her n she agreed finally..

R- yay! Thank u.. Now let me get this not so cool boy to my room...
He picked him up n walked away.. On the way he said "virat yeh tune kya kiya... Darn I shouldn't have left him alone"

* I know I know it was just a kiss .. He didnt even strip her although u besharmis so wanted that ;) .. N she made a fuss about that KISS!.. But hey put ur shoes on her place.. She is staying in a unknown land Barley know anyone inside out... N then in the middle of night a BOY comes to her room BLACKMAILS HER for not shouting n when she protests he kissed her so hard that made her restless n lose herself on him! In a way forceful kiss a first stage of molest! Explained enough? I thought so*

Back in the room

J- hey manvi R u ok? I mean.. Did virat really tried to...

M- u guys don't believe me na..n I don't expect u to believe either.. N y wud you.. You guys r his best friend..

J- it's not like that.. It's just he is nice I'm sure u r misunderstanding him..

M- leave it.. I don't wanna talk about it..
J- ok fine u rest! Tomorrow will be a new day! Saying that she fall asleep..

M- slept on the other side n sobbed silently.. Clutching the pillow n saying "I hate you virat.. You lost my respect for u as a human being... I hate you.. Just hate you"

8:30 am

V- "don't underestimate me.. I'm not like others... ", "leave me... You are hurting me..." n he crushed his lips on hers...

Manvi... He woke up sweating.. Aah my head... Sss..

R- bad morning! Wake up ... U gotta lot to answer!

V- looked around his surrounding n said.. How am I here? I was in... Didn't finish his sentence

R- u were in manvi's room... N I brought you back...

V- urghh.. Shit what have I done..
R- raised his eyebrow n said "what!!!!! So manvi was right?? :O u tried to rape her?? VIRAT???"
V- Wat NO way.. What the F r u talking about... I dint try to molest her...
R- gave him a "U r not lying rite" look..

V- he stood up... RAJ I swear I didnt do anything... It's just a Kisss. N he paused..

R- Wat U KISSED HER? Wow... VIRAT Vadera DO U LIKE HER? Wat let me correct r u falling in love???

V- oh shut up... Turn off ur nonsense talk.. I don't love her nor planning do either. It's just last night I was high.. My toes were hurting I was angry .. I wanted to hear an apology.,, so I went to her room to make her apologize

R- was listening to his words like a child Listen to fairy tale with full attention n excitement..
So then?

V- then... Ummm.. Thn yah... She was screaming n I kissed her to stop her screaming... Yah that's Wat I did! N nothing else... After that I don't remember what happen

R- WOW Wat an epic story!!! Make someone stop screaming by kissing them? Oh I'm so gonna try that!! U r good..

V- u r out of ur mind... N stop grinning.. U r looking like a retard.

R- oh ya ? He placed his hand on his hips n said IM RETARD or u? U go to a girls room in the middle of the night n KISS her n...

V- was guilty... N embarrass at the same time...

R- ok chill I understand u weren't in ur normal sense.. N she was all ready to leave.. Thank god stopped her or else she was leaving on the spot.

V- What??? :/
R- yah... Now hurry up we gotta stop her again.. n u gotta say sorry!

V- yah.. He walk toward the bathroom

R- waise virat...
V- looked back.. Ha?
R- how was it?
V- wat?
R- the grand kiss?
V- oh shut up n throw the flower vase at him
R- oho.. Easy tiger.. I hope u enjoyed! Waise how long did u hold her? *winked*

V- u better get lost before I kill u!
R- hahah ok ok! Going u come fast till thn I engage her!he left n virat went to take a cool shower.

V- the flashback of that kiss was hovering his mind... He cares his hair n took a deep breath n smiled a little.. But thn that lone tear vanished his smile n he cussed himself for hurting her...I have to fix this any how...
With that he got out from bathroom wore a nice shirt n a pair of jeans n run toward girls hostel.

Parking lot.

M- Jenna I told u yesterday I won't stay so y u r blocking me now? Let me go..

J- manvi please give him a chance.. Please..

R- hey!!! Oh come on manvi.. Let it go na.. It was just a kiss?

J- her mouth was wide open!
HE KISSED U :O

M- was boiling by now.. Not only MR. Vadera tried to touch her again but now announced it to whole world!! That was it she had enough... She can't bare all those embarrassment... She opened the taxi door n told the driver to move on...

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M- was relived that she was out of this nasty world where people just care about them self n their satisfaction! However her thinking halt when the driver pressed the break hard n she banged her head on the front seat.. Ouch.. Wat the hack.. How careless driving is that?

Driver- im sorry ma'am... but this boy just came in the middle n I had to break or else he was gonna die..

M- rubbed her head n looked forward.. N tha da her monster was standing in front of that taxi placing his hands on his hip. Smirking n grinning...

V- walked toward the window of manvi's side n said manvi I wanna talk to u please...

M- don't wanna see his face so she cared less n told that driver to move on...

V- know its not gonna work so he just walk upfront n whisper something on the driver's ear.

Driver grinned n nodded ! Virat gave a sexy smile n said thank u!
N just got in the car!

M- what the hell? Why u r in my car?
V- apparently its the driver car.. N I just talked to him.. N he said ok I can get in.. So if u don't mind..

M- burning like a lava.. Go to hell... I'm out of here n she opened her door.. But virat pulled back her...
Wht the F! What's ur problem...

V- I'm sorry! Please don't leave .. Let me explain... I know u r really mad at me n don't wanna see my face but please give me a last chance..

M- I'm not here to hear ur bullshit. Find someone of ur cheap status n blur theses dialogs to her.
Again she tried to got off but my stubborn boy.. Held her waist.. covered her mouth n told the driver to drive...

M- was nervous shock n afraid... Was in false position.. Tried her level best to escape but his strong hand was tight enough to hold her ...

V- I didnt have to do this bit u don't listen n I'm not kidnapping u... I just need ur precious 10 mins... After that u can go anywhere you want.. Please gimme a chance... Saying that he relived her... N sit back straight..

M- didnt say a word.. Tears were coming out but she controlled them... She didn't like this forcing n all.. Rite now she hated him the most...

After driving 1/2 hr.. The car stopped at very beautiful mountain place..

Driver... Here u r sir.. Enjoy.. N all the best .. Saying that he left the car n walked away..

M- was damn scared... She had no clue where she was.. Wat if he raoe her? No one will know n... Tears automatically started to flow.. N she just got off from the car ready to run...

V- stopped her... Ok I'm sorry to force u to come here but please let me explain... I just need ur 10 mins .. Plz give me a chance...

M- u know Wat.. U r a heartless monster... Ur ego is so high that u don't give a damn about others feeling... U just care for ur self n satisfaction... But I'm not a toy OK! I won't do Wat u say. Get the hell out of my life cuz today u lost all the respect from my side...
U r a pathetic moron... Got that? I fell pity for ur parents they might have lose hope to control u.. U stubborn freak.

V- that was it for him.. He was angry now... No one dare to say anything about his family.. Parvarish or the bonding .. He hold her arms right n was about to say sum bitter words but stopped when manvi looked at her arms n said "u disgust me Vadera... That's all u can do overpower innocent people.." what u wanna do now lock me in a dark room so i can die there due to claustrophobia or rape me? Wat else can u do.. Just satisfy urself... U pervert jack ass..."

V- controlled his temper n left her arms..
Urghhjhj... He banged the car n manvi shivered due to the outburst...

V- I hate that about myself that I can't control my anger... N do uncertain things n hurt people...
He looked at her eyes n said "what to do manvi... My family always pampered me n I'm their stubborn child.. However I have that same old parvarish which my mom n my bhai gave me... I respect women it's just idk whenever anyone say about my family n my bonding for them my blood boils n.. I'm so sorry.. I never wanted to hurt you!N for yesterday I'm extra sorry.. I shouldn't have kissed you... I was drunk had no control over my brain n my toe was hurting so bad that.. His head was down he was guilty n ashamed.
Please don't leave... Give me any punishment..

M- struggling.. Should she forgive him or not... Then she thought about Vanshika anty jiju n di.. He was from good family .. Maybe staying abroad made him a little wild but he was good from heart...

M- took a deep breath n said.. OK... But u don't follow me nor touch me.. Least can u do is stay away from me.. N thn u will be forgiven..

V- looked at her with a sexyyy cute smile n said "yes ma'am as u say!"

M- good.. She slightly smiled n got in..
Waise tumne driver ko kya bola tha?

V- umm... He ruffled his hair n said "forget that na.. Not important..."
M- virat!!!
V- ok ok.. But don't pounce ok.. I said that My girl friend is angry with me n leaving town due to my silly behavior.. So I need some time to convince her not to leave me alone! N that's about it

M- WHAT! How dare u tell him that
V- hey u r cheating.. U said u won't pounce on me.. Well that was the only way to convince him :)
Choro na.. All good now! Rite?

M- whatever! But remember STAY away from me!
V- sighed. Yes boss! Let's go I'm so hungry..

The driver came in... N they left the spot!

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Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago