[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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sweettasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

hey faria loved d update ya...coz it was less confusing lolz...
hayee wat to say about damonn he a smart ass...his logic nd talks remind me old virat of dis ff...m loving Damon bt not more Dan my viru...:-P saccha pyar u knw...;-)

I loved d last section nd I was laughing lyk anything...bichara raj...usko to pakka brain damage ho gya hoga lolz...

vihaan...aww he is lyk junior virat...
I can't be sure dat he is virman son coz uske liye they have to do something something u knw wat I mean...;-) even I want k vihaan virman ka hi baby ho...

arggg...I hate jer...he is d one mistake of dis ff...lolz I mean he is d pain in every ones life...kutta kamina...

now coming to my choto sa confusion ...who is d daddy cool...I knw I knw nyt part mai pta chal jayega...so waiting update fast...

nd i knw naina is sholok's wife...hww baal vivah...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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jinaku

@jinaku

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Yah u can say they turn me into this :p

YEAH I CAN UNDERSTAND😛 .. EVEN I M KUSHAL+TACKER <3 ... i know tht u crossed me😉

Anyways continue with ur updates soon,

try nt 2 be evil 😆 with bth virat and viren

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Rofl let my readers scratch their head? Haha u r talking evil.. Idk I'm feeling bad.. Cuz I'm also a reader n it's irritating to go on a circle... :/ however I will fix everything ...

Vihaan's family...
As u know he belongs to vadhera family..
He have 2 mom's one is Jeevika n one is mumci.. N now naina maa :p

Something's r there for to confuse u.. But u don't know which one is it lol...
Next chapter u will know who is the papa n who is mumci :p

okai you better complete it the way you have planned it or else it will not satisfy you so better go as per plans and dnt worry about the readers am sure they are enjoying it 😃
poor kid having 3 mom's more than us he will get confused 😆
lol soo many confusions that even am confused that wat exactly am confused about 😛

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

M super confused gosh I hope virat will not die
As in I think dat dairy which vihaan was reading itis may be virats
Nd naina I hope she is getting married to shlok lol
Nd really hope dat jeevs husband is viren lol I dont want virat to be...
Nd mumci I.e manvi dat too may be...m really a confused soul
Update asap

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Eeh life threat deti hai... Mai nei daarti... Lolol but thank u Xo xo! Appreciated ur feedback!! Yah UR long lost loveee made this BIg update can't u seee???????

na dar coz i dont expect u to 😆😆 tu evil hi achi hai god knows if u change to kya hoga🤢 😛

ya ikr thts why i said i love him 😳😳 well im officially blind 🥱seeing the length of the update coz always i want more hahahaha

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itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

awesome update

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: SNTG
hello,how are u ...back with an update , and it was fabulous as always , i love reading them... now maanviii can not die , how will you safe ur boy then lol...yes maine maan liya k that was virat only...and as i say all the time waiting for next .
are u seriously planing to end it and if u ask seriously then yes i seriously wanted to see the love side of both , falling in love and all u know but when in ur last update u just jumped 19 year later then i thought that may be u r thinking to wrap up the story...but as u have landed 19 years later means there is no more love story to look forward right. u are a writter and as ur wish BUT if u promise that u will come up with a new story then it will be great idea right...all new start. i seriously want something new from you because being ur reader i know how innovative u r and ur stories too .

Manvi can die n I can still save my boy if I want to :p
That wud be cool... Sud I do that?? I think I sud rite?? Buhahahahah

The future is actually suppose to be present but I did a mistake in the beginning so that's y it's scrambled up :/ sorry for that ... Watevaaa u r reading for PRESENT is actually PAST!
N the FUTURE is the present.// I Knwo I'm talking no sense but u will know eventually :)
19 yrs neiii only 11... I don't want my boys to e oldie Che.. Nah hahah :p

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virmanhus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

hey faria!!!

sorry for the delay

well.. it revealed alot, so happy about it..

the future,, i have no idea if i understood it or not,, yup its like clear vihaan is viren's & jeevika's son,, but again confusing.. alot of characters are dere in future,, dont know who dey are & wat dey are upto.. well looking forward for the next updates to get cleared

u know wat, only now i got that its really manvi who complained,, so she didnt go & file a case, wen she was reached she named the criminal as virat..

i loved Damon!!! mahnnn he's such a brilliant person.. virat's 'thank u' told me something is fishy, now its clear...

manvi's life is in faria's hands.. if vihaan is viren's son, den obviously viren is alive..

virat's future seems 'unsatisfactory',, ermmm judging by vanshika's reaction on vihaan signing the application for ''acting school'',, its not only vihaan signing like his dad but an application for acting school & vihaan's dad has showed least interest in signing it,, virat was at NYFA,, dis is like the vadheras dont want any more connection vt acting, etc.. soo keeping virat in mind i guess... and dat book vch was more like a diary must belong to virat as vanshika felt the familiar fact in vihaan's behaviour after reading the book...

somethings are damn clear now.. one and only thing, kristina-Jer-Virat relationship, deir past & deir contribution to virat's such state.. reveal it sooonnn..

loved alot of dialogues faria..

the philosophies u added, like the coin, its two sides, a clap vt two hands... mind blowing!!!

'' I can see anger, hurt, pain, confusion n little bit of guilt in them... Mystery guy huh... ''

nurse's dis dialogue to virat, just revealed virat's state... he's confused too... let me wait & watch wats in stock for him ahead..

''Damon- can I ask u something??

Raj- yah?

D- r u GAY by chance?

Raj- what te fuk! No I'm straight..

D- then y do u always support virat??? When everything is against him the y r u supporting him! Or R U THE REAL CRIMINAL ? Whom is hiding behind the shell?''

LOVED dis part!!!! Awesome!!! Damon is seriously rocking!!!

AND i cant judge u,, wat are u upto???

''he fainted... His blood pressure was high.. Sugar level dropped n he survived from getting a major heart attack.''

''a normal person dont faint like that...do u still think I'm mental?? Or ur friend is?''

u almost killed virat, gave him paralysis & now gonna make him mad??

totally an update worth reading & waiting.. brilliant job i must say..

unless or otherwise the story ends, we are not gonna be cleared of all the confusions.. bloody tricks faria, u are an awesome author!!

get going!!

(how can u stop it here??? vl killl uuu!!!! reveal the secrets... give a happy ending.. u cant run away like datt)

ps: had time to day to comment but forgive me i wont be able to do so in future

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

ur just too great awesomely awesome update yh I knida did get rid of most of the confusions now bt still a lot to be revealed to be honest im startin to believe a bit more now that maybe just maybe virat did do the crime bt we will soon find out im sure n dnt end it just lyk that plz- u dnt waste any1's time cuz its a very popular story so keep going plzcontinue soon 😉