[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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SNTG

@SNTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: Faria12345

I won't say anything now but ch 15 will answer every thing!!!!

Thank u sooo much for the feedback appreciated...

okayyy ...but are u planing to write a new story by chance...would love to read it !!!

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Fariaaa, honestly this was one of my fav parts so far :P since it was less confusing 😆 my fav part, hahhah u already know which one twino 😉😛, thnk u for clearing the confusion, honestly i dnt think its Virat! its jeremy all the way im sure of it, but Manvi mistook him as being Virat! liking the future bit, its the only part thats not evil, yet... :/

update soonnn, Luv Pari <3

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anamica5

@anamica5

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

it was superb update faria

pls cont soon nd don't end dis storys plsss

i luv ur story very much nd ur evil mind too 😆

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Faria first of all u can't end it !!! how dare u think to finish it actually u can't end it !!! tat's all !!~~ i don't noe anything i juz noe u can't end it !!! i m juz loving this confusion thing !!! so don't u dare think abt ending !!!!
N coming to the update wat an update Man!!! Fabulous :DDD so finally most of my confusions are cleared 😃😃 Damon !!!! wat shall i say abt him !!! actually i m confused tat should i like him or dislike him !!! lolz !!! the way he was accusing raj also lolz !! becharaa raj phas gayaa !!! not only tat although he is lawyer of virat !! he is suspecting virat !!! gosh wat is he !!!
gosh tat Jeremy i hate him i hate him i hate him😡😡😡so he is Lisa brother !!!
n tat kristina was virat gf !!! more abt her ??wat ???ahaan looking forward to noe abt her !!!
jeevika is vihaan mother interesting :DD evil Faria !!! u didn't spare vihaan !!! poor vihaan i feel bad for him😔 i can't see him like this ;( i must say he is really strong the way he took up the challegene superb !! stop torturing vihaan yaar !! i love him❤️
but who is vihaan dad?? n who is Nainaa getting married to?? Manvi is in hospital now !!! n viren is still missing !!! n one more i still believe virat can't do this :PP
this is amazing !!! i loved suspense although it kill me lolz :DDD really looking forward for next update!!! will be eagerly waiting :DDD continue soon !!!! don't make us wait too long :DDD 😛 thanx for the pm :D

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#575

faria u brought me bck😉

wat an update girl👏

most of my confusions are clear but still some more😉

manvi i hope she get well sonn

and virat is acting😲dont make my virat a negative one got it😡

and for me jeremy is evil in tis story😈

wat happen to viren😒

and future story one line made me in tears

PAPA HATES ME HE HATES ME😭 after reading tis line tears came out of eyes and my papa also hates me😭

continue soon dont take tis much time and i want soon updates like before😛

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

OMG Virat actually raped Manvi.

Don't mind me I just finished ch 12

How could you Make Virat into such a bad boy. 😡😡😡

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jinaku

@jinaku

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

😛U know wat i stopped reading on ch 10 becoz i m scared of u .. aftr seeing the comments on fb

i decided tht i will read all together when u strt showing a lit bit mercy but i used 2 give a sneak peak every update 2 know wats goin on... and evn lyk it ..👏

😉anyways i wud read it soon but m really scared with ur torture 4 my virat 😕

Ur updates r having so thrilling and so dark.into it.

BUT AGAIN THANK U FR CREATING A DIFF ANGLE FR FF...THRILLER😆novel touch👏

AND THANKU FR WRITING SOOO LNG👏UPDATES

but hw kushal and tacker turned u in tis manner🤣

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: jinaku
😛U know wat i stopped reading on ch 10 becoz i m scared of u .. aftr seeing the comments on fb
i decided tht i will read all together when u strt showing a lit bit mercy but i used 2 give a sneak peak every update 2 know wats goin on... and evn lyk it ..👏

😉anyways i wud read it soon but m really scared with ur torture 4 my virat😕

Ur updates r having so thrilling and so dark.into it.

BUT AGAIN THANK U FR CREATING A DIFF ANGLE FR FF...THRILLER😆novel touch👏

AND THANKU FR WRITING SOOO LNG👏UPDATES

but hw kushal and tacker turned u in tis manner🤣

Yah u can say they turn me into this :p

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Awesome updt...some doubts r clear...that vihaan is jeevikas son so his dad obviously viren...hopefully...some things r still confusing...but as u said it will clear in next updt...so i m eagerly waiting fr that...

Overall updt was superb...each n every scene was excellent...

But wats the 18+ i didnt find anything like that...lolzzz

n dont u dare to end it...i m still in the trauma of addicteds end so pls dont give me another heart attack...n cont asap :p

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Updt was exciting but left be kinda confused stilll...Hope everything will be cleared soon...and the most important thing is tht you are torturing each and every prson in this story... arghhh..But the way you write the incidents is hell gripping yaarLoving the excitement of reading this story...Cont soon... thnks fr th pm ... tada...