[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 55

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Faria12345 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser!!!


Raj- what rubbish.. Virat can't do that..

Damon- how u know? R u the witness?

Raj- no I'm not, but I don't need any proof to consider him as guilty.. Have enough trust in him.. I have known him for 4 years now.. I know him inside out.

Damon- 4 years.. Pretty short time to understand a person.. U may know him well but not good enough to know inside out...

Raj- r u his defense lawyer or being a public prosecutor? Ur questions doesn't seem to be in his favor.

Damon- he smirked n said "well, I can be both.. If he is guilty, then i will make sure he gets the worst punishment of his life where no mercy exists.. A man can't live in peace after destroying te most precious thing from a women. If he did it then he will pay the price..."

Raj- looked at Lisa in disbelieve...
"This lawyer is crazy.. He suppose to be a defense lawyer but no he is acting like a public prosecutor .. Oh virat y ur luck is so bad???" he thought.
I can't trust him completely.. Who knows when he back stabs.. Need someone As strong as him... But who? Oh ya viren bhai... He will be here by morning... He is the only one to crack this hard shell, Damon Salvatore!

*just to let u know Viren is not coming that soon.. Or he will come or not who knows. After all, mother nature is being humble to him n pulling the plane down*



Don't u dare to HATE Damon Salvatore.. He is a smart ass lawyer n my sweet heart... xD
I don't get it y do u all hate my vampire diary characters... Something is wrong with u all..

As for the clearing "confusions" concern ..I'm working on them!
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nw i wouldn't say anything abt ur vampires just wait how much more evil u can get 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally got up to ch 9 girl your updates are long.

The best thing I like about your writing is how you make your own comments in between. You are so good at knowing what we are thinking and it makes me laugh when you go and write it down.
Btw you are extremely confusing me, I don't understand why Manvi says that Virat raped her. And OMG Virat's dream I seriously thought it was for real and I was like oh shit does he die and faria brings him back to life you never know with the Gilbert's around anything is possible. And about you crying while writing it I totally understand you couldn't bear the thought of even writing about your boy going through all that pain.
Now going to read 10.

Love ya Nush
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Posted: 12 years ago
Trust me i'm in love with Vihaan...!! He's sch a sweetheart nd sooo adorable ^_^
I'm sorry for the late comment 😛
You are making me go maaaddd..!! 😳
You are confusing me babiiieee 😆
You speak abt present then you go back to past then you get back to present then you go fast forward nd you are back to present again..!! 😲 🤣🤣
Wt do u want me to get frm dat.!? 😛
Neways nw its sort of i keep waiting for ur pm nd its like i wanna read more nd more of this story 😛
So update soon nd do pm me 😃 🤗
Nd speaking abt the precap or wtevr u've given... I've a strong feeling that the present evilness you are showing is nothing nd you can get more evil... Bt yaar spare this story atleast from ur evilness..!!
Look at me to whom i'm asking to not be evil 🤣
Forget it... jo bhi hai update soon nd pm me 😆
Edited by kushal90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kushal90

Trust me i'm in love with Vihaan...!! He's sch a sweetheart nd sooo adorable ^_^

I'm sorry for the late comment😛
You are making me go maaaddd..!!😳
You are confusing me babiiieee😆
You speak abt present then you go back to past then you get back to present then you go fast forward nd you are back to present again..!!😲🤣🤣
Wt do u want me to get frm dat.!?😛
Neways nw its sort of i keep waiting for ur pm nd its like i wanna read more nd more of this story😛
So update soon nd do pm me😃🤗
Nd speaking abt the precap or wtevr u've given... I've a strong feeling that the present evilness you are showing is nothing nd you can get more evil... Bt yaar spare this story atleast from ur evilness..!!
Look at me to whom i'm asking to not be evil🤣
Forget it... jo bhi hai update soon nd pm me😆




Holding ears for past, present n future :/
This idea popped in my head randomly n I am just playing with it lol.. I loveee kids so I just needed one in my story so just added for the sake of it.. But now gota give it a value or else I don't wanna drag it...

U asking for evilness?? Eeh think b4 u ask baby cuz I'm moreee then welcome to do any evil deeds ;) but oh we'll soon have to be good or else u all will kill me :/
Will let u know soon... :p
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Faria stop teasing us like this !!! update soon update soon update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yo godzilla :P , who told it was boring yaar ? Im having good time while reading ur story.. Nice so far i read yaar.. funny, hot,romantic..
Actually third part was so hot 😉..
Virat fooled maanvi, cockroach scene was funny. poor maanvi lol..
Im loving viru boy 😳 , he removed shirt and maanvi lmao.. cant controlll, he kissed twice till now (Im at 6th part ) .. Drunken virat in maanvi's room.. But how dare she, poor boy got injured in his leg.. ..
Enjoy reading the story along with ur explanations :P , but parts are lengthy to me.. lol,scared to go to maha episode ,, u scared me 😡..
- u must be guessed my name by now godzilla 😉 😆
Edited by love_never_dies - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
virat is fine thank god
vihaan is so cute
but where is mannvi
i m confussed
plz update soon
thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
update chap 14 soon bt am sure the confusion wnt be cleared in the next update even instead it will get more confusing
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

update chap 14 soon bt am sure the confusion wnt be cleared in the next update even instead it will get more confusing



Will try to co fuse u less lol

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