[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 53

Fab update bt a confusing one too 😛 Vihaan is reli cute 😃 Update soon nd pm me 😉

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DON'T READ if u haven't read the UPDATE YET!


Questions confusions n more!!!!!! <3

Y so confused yaar?? I thought I cleared it.. Didn't I? :p


#1- where is virat? Asking about future or present?Well in present he is at hospital bed recovering...in future lol u will know :)

#2- where is viren? Umm inside the plan which is about to go down inside the Pacific Ocean ^__^


#3 who's son is Vihaan?
Story ka last page parna hai yah janna hai what happen after virat became conscious ? Patience my boy/girl

#3 where is manvi? Present she had been knocked out ;)
Future... Kal kisne dekha hai

#4 who diary is Vihaan reading?
A very important person from Vadhera Family :p


#5 who is mumci n jeevi- both r vihaan's mom.. Abhi isse age nei pooch na.. Long story short MRI phir kabhi batayungi
#6 what happen in that 11 years? Nothing much but good enough to blow ur head off :p
You will know eventually.. I can't give u everything in one update na? DO U WANT ME TO WRITE 15 pages again? Hell no! I don't repeat my mistake >_<

So if u can't bare the torture of suspense n confusion u r more then welcome to say "screw u lady.. I'm done with ur story!"
I won't mind actually cuz I know it's frustrating :/ lol I'm a reader too do I understand ur pain :p

And rest of u who r surviving psh soon my evil brain will die :p
Abhi samajhdar ko ishara hi kafi hai :p
Abhi nei bolna ke IM CONFUSED!!!!

That be all for One Mistake, an unwanted fate...A dark LOVE story.. See u soon, stay tune.. Update will be soon :)

Originally posted by: virmanhus

'' Since its a Virman story you might expect a LOVE story... Ummm speaking of love eeh not planned yet.. You might or might not get it''

u cant say dat becoz,,, u said its a ''Dark Love story'' 'love' is dere!!! :p :p cool faria,, u have to give us happy time after so much of pain... its a reader's demand..

ur story is not boring,, if it is, i wont be here poking in IF looking for ur updates... and madam, we are not crazy & u are not evil... yup u are not evil.. u are bold, u are damn practical & dats why ur story is freaking!! really a suspence filled, confusions filled thriller... i love 'one mistake' like nothing!! ahhh not trying to be cheesy here, um telling the truth..

getting back to the update,, i loved ur description of wats happening in different places at one time... like in a precise moment different stories are happening in different places,, 'singapore airlines' hospital' 'JG's house' 'Vadera mansion' 'Manvi's room'... i saw the beauty in ur writing and clear techniques leaving apart ur evilness i mean boldness..

very clever Faria, hats off!!!

not only the description, the conclusions u gave were also very meaningful..

yup 'unwanted fate'... if manvi wasnt rude on virat, virat's first kiss for manvi wudnt have never happend.. root cause for all the problems,, manvi's attitude (happy arent u?? i wont forget the reason behind manvi's character,, its a big fat 'YOU!!').. it all started then,, unknowingly it all lead to the mistake between virat & manvi, so Jeremy, whose entry & reason is still a surprise was clever in using the chance to get back to idk may be virat for some reason, still a suspens... ultimate victim, manvi again went thru the unwanted trouble vt jeremy,, her life is shattered but her decision is a blunder,, i hope she'll be saved.. virat, so basically he's the bad guy.. well, may be his anger overtook his senses wen he did watever he's not s'posed to do.. manvi was rude in character, may be he cudnt stand her stubbornness any more & dats y vtout thinking or expecting so much of turns of events he approached her giving his brain to over rule his heart... its difficult to blame virat or manvi,, its really an unwanted fate!!

wat is pathetic here is,, the one in coma, whose s'posd to die is alive,,, the victim is almost dead (manvi),,, viren,, the one who is nothing but virat's brother,, the one who shud be vt his family enjoying the moment is at the verge of facing death... in the meantime two souls out dere are in another world (Jer & Kristina), kill dem!!! how pathetic... i am sensing the unwanted fate everywhere..

the 11 years later story is another big revelation... vihaan resembles virat alot.. was dat book by any chance wriiten by Mr.Vadera?? to add more spices, vanshika found out an envelope & is now tensed... everything is fishy.. have no clue who is still alive & who's dead...

now confusions are no more... but you have to reveal a lot... there are lot of things burried, dere are a lot reasons hidden,, revealing them cleverly is in ur hands...

this is so thrilling & freaking awesome!!!

reveal every thing soon plsss..

(wont poke u vt everlasting questions or long boring comments for another month.. gonna miss u.. take care!!)

a briiliant update totally... get going!!❤️

First paragraph .. U answered ur own question:p
Rest I LOVE it when u give me a good feed back!!! Don't hesitate to ask question lol.. Love to answer them hahah I intentionally do the confusion part u know :p n yah don't worry till the last chapter u will be confused.. Life is not easy.. It's a mystery bubble so u will be like "ghumte reh jao ge"

first of all i m not at all bored with ur story, actually i read it for the great mystery entertainment and at last u right , what i want in ur chapters...:) and virat molested her like seriously he did OMG...don't kill me i m not beleiving it lol hahahahaha mujhe beleive nahi ho raha yaar, u know my mind need full satisfaction to beleive something :p...and coming to update viren and maanvi both are dead right but not officially lol...and virat bach gaya challo that's good too and ur 11 years later part ummm this is what i did not like i know you have not revealed anything much in that but i dont know i m able to think what is coming next and that is what i don't like because ur mysteries are only thing which i like the most and vihaan is really cuteee...somewhat innocent and very notyyy like ___________;)...update really soon now byeee :))

:o :o :o really? Ye sab to muze pata hi nahi tha...but i can wait :p

Originally posted by: SNTG

first of all i m not at all bored with ur story, actually i read it for the great mystery entertainment and at last u right , what i want in ur chapters...:) and virat molested her like seriously he did OMG...don't kill me i m not beleiving it lol hahahahaha mujhe beleive nahi ho raha yaar, u know my mind need full satisfaction to beleive something :p...and coming to update viren and maanvi both are dead right but not officially lol...and virat bach gaya challo that's good too and ur 11 years later part ummm this is what i did not like i know you have not revealed anything much in that but i dont know i m able to think what is coming next and that is what i don't like because ur mysteries are only thing which i like the most and vihaan is really cuteee...somewhat innocent and very notyyy like ___________;)...update really soon now byeee :))

Forcasting what's coming next? Cool let me Knwo what it is?
And thank u sooo much for the feedback

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Finished the ME girl what a make out scene. I'm way over 13 so I'm allowed to read and you mean girl cutting short and making us suffer and wait. But yeah you're right can't go and give us full on sex scenes in ch7 na.
You have a very creative mind and an extremely wild one too.
Now going to get to ch8

Exactly my point ^____^ <3 <3 They can't be united at ch 7!! Psh that's sooo early!!! I'm glad u survived ^___^ thanks for reading :) will be waiting for ur feedback at the end!

To my dear evil putter muaah ❤️ what a suspence u have created again. Coming to the update i again hate ur good boy germy n he is such a jerk nd monster. Am still in daze that manvi killed herself bt according to me she should nt have commited suicide nd she should face the reality of life like a brave gal bt she didn't. Anyways i think there is something fishy behind as we all knw abt ur evil mind. Nw coming to the leap it was superb. Vihaan is such a cute guy nd his bonding with vanshika is really sweet. Whom dairy he was reading bt from the wording it seems like virat's diary. Who is munchi nd naina you said that vanshika's younger son is getting married to naina bt her younger son is virat what does it mean. Nd more important where is viren virat nd manvi nd what happened in those 11 years. Whose son is vihaan am really getting confused nw nd just going to faint anytime. Ok nw coming to the present wht a grt releif that virat is fine nd hope manvi also. Am again saying that i hate ur jermy. Cont soon tc