[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

To my dear evil putter muaah ❤️ what a suspence u have created again. Coming to the update i again hate ur good boy germy n he is such a jerk nd monster. Am still in daze that manvi killed herself bt according to me she should nt have commited suicide nd she should face the reality of life like a brave gal bt she didn't. Anyways i think there is something fishy behind as we all knw abt ur evil mind. Nw coming to the leap it was superb. Vihaan is such a cute guy nd his bonding with vanshika is really sweet. Whom dairy he was reading bt from the wording it seems like virat's diary. Who is munchi nd naina you said that vanshika's younger son is getting married to naina bt her younger son is virat what does it mean. Nd more important where is viren virat nd manvi nd what happened in those 11 years. Whose son is vihaan am really getting confused nw nd just going to faint anytime. Ok nw coming to the present wht a grt releif that virat is fine nd hope manvi also. Am again saying that i hate ur jermy. Cont soon tc




I agree she sudnt have committed that but she is human na... When ur heart is broken its hard to handle ur mind so only option that people find to get thru that pain is releasing their self from the pain...

Eee I know Rite vihaan is cutee but soon he will be sad too :/ my poor boy..

I guess I have to make Jeremy a good guy so u can love him lol

Virat is safe but he is still guilty :p it was better to stay in coma thn rot in jail.. Isn't it? Buahahahahah

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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm may be you are calling virat guilty b'coz manvi got raped b'coz of hin b'coz am still cant beleive that virat is the cause behind all these craps bt still he is guilty b'coz if he didn't dragged manvi into the garrage then may be manvi didn't get raped or person like germy didn't took advantage of her situation nd one thing i can say for sure that germy can't be a good person infront of my eyes b'coz if u find virat guilty then germy is no less than him b'coz he also took advantage of her misery nd unconcious state didn't he the rest u knw better evil puttar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update 😊

aww Vihan is so cute 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply awesome as always u will be happy to kno that I kno 95% believe in u that maybe virat did do all that bt I really dnt want him to be the bad guy yaar 😭im confused at manvi- I really dnt get her I dnt even kno if I like her or notwoah ab yeh vihaan kiska bacha hai- bt jo bhi hai he is damn cute though I 100% agree with that cnt wait for next part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Faria Faria Fariaaa!!!! I loved the update as m addicted to ur Mistake :D I Mean one mistake! :P thank god virat is okay! Pheuuu..!!! Liking Raj..! He is so protective towards his bestiee!!! Jermey!! Such a crap he is urrrghhh...!!!! Such a kamina he is!! :P but as he is ur sweetheart..!! :P I won't say anything! :P haha!! But what he did with manvi was just heart piercing! Damnnn!! He is sucha crap! >_< N Y U r not giving Damon's dialogues :P Haha!! I want him to speak something! :P atleast a line! :P

Hawww :O What happened to manvi? Why R U giving so much pain to her? N so touchy lines U wrote! Really touchy <3 loved it to the core! <3 but what was this 11 years later means? N vihaan?? N then again present? I was lil confused..!! N why Virman were not there? So much confusion! But as I know U'll clear all :P so no probs! After all u urself is a confused n evil soul :P but 11 years later was cute! :D vihaan ;) <3 loved it <3

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vibhu3


<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Faria Faria Fariaaa!!!! I loved the update as m addicted to ur Mistake :D I Mean one mistake! :P thank god virat is okay! Pheuuu..!!! Liking Raj..! He is so protective towards his bestiee!!! Jermey!! Such a crap he is urrrghhh...!!!! Such a kamina he is!! :P but as he is ur sweetheart..!! :P I won't say anything! :P haha!! But what he did with manvi was just heart piercing! Damnnn!! He is sucha crap! >_< N Y U r not giving Damon's dialogues :P Haha!! I want him to speak something! :P atleast a line! :P </font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Hawww :O What happened to manvi? Why R U giving so much pain to her? N so touchy lines U wrote! Really touchy <3 loved it to the core! <3 but what was this 11 years later means? N vihaan?? N then again present? I was lil confused..!! N why Virman were not there? So much confusion! But as I know U'll clear all :P so no probs! After all u urself is a confused n evil soul :P but 11 years later was cute! :D vihaan ;) <3 loved it <3</font>




Yap yap heading toward solving all the confusions n all! Damon will talk after all he is his defense lawyer!!! Heheeheh ;)
Yah poor manvi.. Eventually I felt bed or her :/
Yah better not say anything to Jeremy ... He is my good boy :p
Vihaaan my jaan! Lol u were confused on the last section like after future? I'm sorry for that .. I was jut giving u a glimpse of future events! OR shall say whatever u r reading is a past! N what the future was is present... Confusing I know .. Sorry but not to worry I will fix everything.., n when u will get the end of this case I'm damn sure everyone will hit me lmafo that time do me a favor find a hiding place for me ok?
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Posted: 12 years ago
faria 1st of all jab tak mera virat khud confess ni krta dat he did dat with manvi...I will ntt believe in wat I read...love him so much u see...;-)


nd about jer hayee he looks hot bt wait fir bhi I hate him...:-|
Thnk god my viru is fn...raj is a true frnd ya...hard to find frnd lyk him...lucky viru...:-* feeling bad for manvi...she is also going through so much...:'(

now I love d 11yrs leap...vihaan was so cute...nd sholok is getting married to naina...( I think dat )... nd I think dis munci is manvi...
o god m thinking so much...jab ki I knw I can't trust ur evil mind...kab kaha kya ho jaye...lolz




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweettasi

faria 1st of all jab tak mera virat khud confess ni krta dat he did dat with manvi...I will ntt believe in wat I read...love him so much u see...;-)


nd about jer hayee he looks hot bt wait fir bhi I hate him...:-|
Thnk god my viru is fn...raj is a true frnd ya...hard to find frnd lyk him...lucky viru...:-* feeling bad for manvi...she is also going through so much...:'(

now I love d 11yrs leap...vihaan was so cute...nd sholok is getting married to naina...( I think dat )... nd I think dis munci is manvi...
o god m thinking so much...jab ki I knw I can't trust ur evil mind...kab kaha kya ho jaye...lolz






Ilike ur confidene *evil mind grins*
Now I'm thinking what do I do in ch 14 lol... How do I make it Okies :/!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am still sure that its not virat its your awesome boy jeremy ...
and you are being like the ekta kapoor of our forum these many twist that even you will get confused wer yu have reached 😆😆😆
no doubt you really write very well the story is getting really interesting 😊
and vihaan is sooo cute liking the flash forward its keeping all of us more confused but i like being confused and i enjoy the suspense and thrill parts more so am loving it 😊
update next part soon and thanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.
where's manvi??
update it quick plzzz...
waiting...

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