[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 49

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Writing part 13!!!! All I can say ghumte reh jaoge...but rite now I'm pulling my hair for writing this One mistake >_<

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

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<font color="#990033" size="3">omg faria you have such an evil mind don't you devil kahin ki😳</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">chalo main apna comment start karti hoon hope you do not get bore from my comment😊although i am silent reader of your story and didn't get any chance to caught you but see today i got succeded😆and trust me this ff had become one of my fav ff's😳ok enough of my bak bak now coming to the story</font>

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<font color="#990033" size="3">it was superb mindblowing fantastic amazing and aur pata nahi kya kya😆</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">started was just mind blowingfirst part was too much hilarious and virat was such a jerk i mean so much self praising and blah blah. and omg he left my gal in dark room with those coakroaches poor soul</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">and the hilarious part when manvi misunderstood other guy is virat😆</font>

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<font color="#990033" size="3">third and fourt part was just amazing like other two parts</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">aww virat felt bad for manvi when he realized that he left her in the dark room and the room could be open only from outside. then came viraman hug😳hayee(oops am so much kamini haina😳) then viramn dance and their first kiss lalala😳poor virat manvi hit him with her high heels and whose that guy whom manvi was kissing. virat was affected by manvi so much haina😆</font>

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<font color="#990033" size="3">coming to the fifth part it was damn intresting👏</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">so manvi came to know about that he is her di's dever and one thing i forgot to mention that i love jeevika and virat's bond from my heart sachii😳</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">virat and jenny's part was so much hilarious and embarresing and oh my gosh virat was drunk and virman convo was too much hilarious.</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">and in drunken state he entered in gals hostel and kissed manvi hawww😳</font>

<font color="#990033" size="3">the sixt part was just hawww😳</font><font color="#990033" size="3"></i></font>

<font color="#990033" size="3"><i>love virat's first line from starting the chapter when he said "</font><font size="3">don't underestimate me... I'm not like others and don't try that trick with me cuz When u stop thinking I start thinking. Get that inscribed in your brain." <font color="#990000">hayee i was toh just drooling over him😳it was such a big part with lot of emotions,pain,hate fear etc.etc</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#990000">and the next part haww bheege hont tere😳😳uff kaise expalin karun ke yeh part maine kaise read kiya..haww manvi was checking him out from head to toe and virat cought her and asked her that you were checking me out that was the most embarressing moment. and then their sudden fall on the floar and they both lost in each other..and they lost control on their selves😳(and the lines which you were adding between the update it cracked me up) hussh gal you spoiled my inno mind but don't worry dear am 22+ 🤣 it was freaking sexy hot and romantic update and such mein you nailed it dear</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#990000">coming to the 8th part it was damn good</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#990000">you really have a rocking brain don't you. how virat wiped his guilt saying that manvi was equally contributer of the awkward situation😳it proves that she is how much rude and she has so much ego but she was right at her point</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#990000">and then came the unknown person who said that virat vadhera you are really going to regret this. who is this unknown person.</font></font>

<font size="3"><font color="#990000">and am very sure that unknown person molested manvi not my viru boy.</font></font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and haww police arrested virat in the crime of molested manvi that's too bad🤢</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">then virat went in future when he was in jail and thinking about his family was such heart touching moments and he hanged to death thank god it was just his imagination. and omg he admitted in hospital (that proves that you are such an evil spirit gundi🤢)</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and germy molested manvi in her unconcious state he is such a jerk.</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and you are saying that he is such a good guy why why why telll me haan why are you chanting these mantra that germy is a good guy i just hate him b'coz he made my mannu and viru so much and they are still suffering</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">now clear every misunderstanding soon ok else i will kick you tere ghar pe ake</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">uff finally done with commenting i hope you didn't dizzed off after reading my so called boring comment 🤣</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and want to give you nick name and that is evil spirit *run*</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">plz do pm me when you update next part</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">tc</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">love</font>

<font color="#990000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">shivali 🤗</font>

Originally posted by: SNTG

updateee is awesome ...just wanna say woh virat nahi hai, nahi hai , nahi hai...and when is next update cominggg ?????

Originally posted by: NushIsh

Finished reading up to the maha episode.
You've got style, love Virat's cool dude attitude.
The things you come up with all the references to VD and Damon Salvotore.
Your obsession with VD is coming out from all your writing.
The whole drunk scene and Virat kissing and the promo where Manvi said Virat molested her lol got my imagination running wild.
Virat is the bad boy with the good heart you've brought that out really well.
Will read more soon.

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

<font color="#6600FF" size="2">Finally i have finished pheww :D it have been one week i have reading this :DD the moment i get free i juz run to read :D this is really interesting !!! man wat a journey !!! this is really a dark story par interesting too !!! i got to noe now why evil word wat always there😉 😛 the more the story move on the more it get evil !!! poor virat he suffered alot n now also he is suffering😭😭 now he is in hospital i can't see him like this😭😭 n that jerk Gilbert😡😡😡 aargh he is disgusting 😡😡😡 he make virat take over dose n he rape manvi 😡poor manvi she is suffering also😭😭 omg virat all did this to manvi😲😲 i can't believe it really :((( this is not possible...virat can never do like this:(( virman are suffering alot😭😭 ab aage kya hogaa??? now waiitng for next part !!! will be eagerly waiting ~~ continue soon if possible Faria !!! </font>

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Yay yay yay one more silent reader finally became alive!!! Thank u!!!! Appreciated alottt :*

Abb kya hOgaa wahi Jo Hona chahiyeee ;)
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