[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 3

wow nice update!
Though i hav read it before bt it was overwhelming reading it again

Originally posted by: nia-holic

loved virat's character😛

u wrote it so well

his attitude , style and the i enjoyed the most is his flirting man🤣

the dance sequence was very well written👏

now abt manvi i liked her ego part a girl must be lyk that bt if a girl have soo much attitude and ego in herself then how can she just kiss a banda aweein he muftt ka 😕

over all its a wonderfull work

your writing touched my heart

just make the manvi and that guy part clear in next update

and update soon

thumbs up👍🏼

Thanks for your comment! Appreciated...
She kissed another guy just to get rid of the feeling taht virat ever touched him... U know she don't like anybody go against her will plus now she knows his true identity so .. She hates him the most

awesome updates

Wooow an awwwsum...storyyy
m luvinggg it...
Plzzz update asap nd pm me..

Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

wow nice update!
Though i hav read it before bt it was overwhelming reading it again

Awww thank u for reading it again

Superb...read in 1 go...it was just mindblowing...n damn funny...loved this manvi n her sherni avatar...awww poor virat, but i think he should consider himself more lucky than sam...lolzzz...thnk god...loved thier tit fr tat game...their witty fights...just awesome...do cont soon n pm me next time

Sorry for commenting, so late! Have I told you that your story is AWESOME? No? Well then, YOUR STORY'S AWESOME, IT'S FABULOUS, IT'S GREAT.🥳 It's got me hooked. You don't know how much I am looking forward to read the rest.

Originally posted by: Menzena

<font color="#009900" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sorry for commenting, so late! Have I told you that your story is AWESOME? No? Well then, YOUR STORY'S AWESOME, IT'S FABULOUS, IT'S GREAT.🥳 It's got me hooked. You don't know how much I am looking forward to read the rest. </font>

</div><div><font color="#009900" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Virat kissed Mannu? 😲Hawww. OK, Mannu kissing someone else 😭You better add lots of VirMan 'things' to make up for this.😛</font>

<font color="#009900" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I want them together at the end. Please let it have a happy ending 😳</font>

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<font color="#009900" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Great story, 👏Loved it ❤️Continue soon pleaassseee!!1 </font>

Thank you for your sweet comment really appreciated ;).. For making up things mmm will keep that in mind stay tuned:p

wow awesome story...

Amazing ss, i jst love the way u giv us longgg updatesss..😉 Yeeeppsss..virman kissed nd dat 2 aft meeting few tyms only 😛 I know its sumtyms boring whn der is no spice in the stry nd thats why u had to let manu kiss sumbody else😛 koi nahi lol..i love dis ss and pls update ASAP! 😃