Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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anannya

@aneelovesarshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Arnav is falling for Khushi. loved the update.

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LiNdASoUmZ

@LiNdASoUmZ

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

awesome story,unique concept n different n fresh ideas,i lyk khushi character a lot a positive n really feel sorry for arnav for his so hrt breaking past anywayz had read ur MKM-1
n had read MKM-2 also in one go,do pm me whn u update

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Zainab

@arshi-holic

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Funny and delightful read. Go ahead!

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Chinnu

@Phoenix_413

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Take rest dear and come back soon !!! Let's give Arnav sometime to fall for Khushi !!!

God... I've never seen anyone potray the jalebi Khushi as an utter kitchen disaster so well !!! Hats off for that !!!

and Khushi's explanation for how hygienic the potato chips are... wonderful...very Khushi-like and Khushi-giving !!!

Well I'm sure Khushi's images have not only left impressions in Arnav's Nikon SLR but also his heart !!!!

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memyarshi

@memyarshi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Relationship starting to grow...started with admiring each other...lovely update...update soon

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Magnifique mademoiselle! 👍🏼 This story is shaping up VERY nicely. I've finally caught up to all the chapters and I am so, so, so, so glad that you didn't immediately jump into their attraction. Arnav has felt the first stirrings but does not realize it for what it is. Khushi, on the other hand, acknowledges that Arnav is handsome but doesn't see him as more than a friend...for now anyways 😉. I wonder if Lavanya will be the catalyst? Is that why her appearance has been delayed despite her being one of Khushi's best friends?

The main reason I do like the fact that you haven't jumped right into attraction is because Arnav is too broken right now and blocked himself from any feelings. He's healing right now and the way you've described his transformation is so smooth. Not rushed at all and not too slow either. He's dealing with more than a decade of hurt, loneliness, and betrayal and that too from his parents. That is not something anyone can easily get over.

Please update soon 😃

PS. Please add me as a buddy so I can get PMs for updates. Thanks!

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

hello...

hope your having a good holiday :-)

ever since you have left the note along with the song from Kites..I've listened to it so many times...and pictured Arnav losing himself to Khushi.

missing your updates.

sri