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Party was on full swing, everyone were enjoying on their own...Where rey n kriya were glancing at each other without being noticed to eachother and anyone else, Sharon was laughing along with dadaji & swayam was busy admiring her, smiling all the way...

'It feels so good to have her back here, thank god she did'nt marry that creep... I can't afford to lose her ... Away from my sight'

As the time passed, all the people set to dance floor.. Except Swayam, Kria and Rey ..

swayam was still busy in watching sharon doing crazy dance... She was so graceful & full of life, he could hardly blink...

Martin noticed him alone & called him for dance...

"yahan akele khade kya kar rahe ho, chalo hamare sath dance karo.."

he came out of his trance..

"nhi, main yahin thik hoon..You know, mujhe dance pasand nhi..." he said eyeing her, watching her dancing was way more better than anything...

But sharon heard martin n swayam & rushed straight to them...

"kya matlab dance nahi pasand,us din toh dance kiya tha!!" Sharon said recalling when they danced at an official party..and added "I don't care, chalo abhi ke abhi dancefloor par" with that she hold his hand in hers & pulled him to dance floor...

"nahi sharon..Plzz.. Tum dance karo na.. Mujhe ye sab nhi aata" he pleaded, Infact he was trying to stay away, he don't know what he would do, if she kept holding his hand...

"swayu.. Tum mere liye itna bhi nhi karoge..Tum toh mere friend ho na..ek dance bhi nhi karoge mere sath..Tumhe apni friend ki bilkul bhi parvaah nhi" she pouted innocently, knowing he won't give in easily, so she used her cute tactics...

This is it.. He can't resist that cute pout n pleading eyes,, that makes her more beautiful...He lost his senses & pulled her close to him by waist with right hand & with left hand hold her hand...

She was shocked with his gesture. Rey noticed their position & immediately put the music player on a romantic duet & smirked...

(Plz play 'Te Amo' to feel the love )

"tum dance toh thik thak kar lete ho!!" Sharon exclaimed.

"sirf thik thak??" Swayam asked in astonishment.

"hmm..sirf thik thak!!"

"tumhe mera asli dance dekhna hai??"

"haan kyu nahi??"

"toh ho jaye??"

"ho jaye ek duet!!"

Sharon felt very happy that he fell in her trap & gladly put her other hand on his shoulder...

Swayam was still in her trance, & the music added fuel to the fire... He started swaying along with the music & sharon happily danced with his smooth moves...

She deciphered that he is an awesome dancer when he danced with her for the first time but today he danced with her more openly , she was impressed with his clean steps, he seemed a pro in this, dancing beautifully...

He caught her other hand & gently moved apart, never leaving the eye contact...

Everyone noticed them dancing passionately, so they left the dance floor giving them full space...By now, sharon was also lost in the feel of music & danced in coordination, looking in his eyes...

She felt, she never danced so well..

He pulled her with one hand & she came swirling all the way rolling & wrapping up in his arms.

her back crashed in his chest & his hot breath caressed her nape... She closed her eyes & felt the warmth... It felt so good, she laid back & her head fall on his shoulder...

He passed his free hand along her waist while the other one was still locked with her hand.. He left it & gripped it on her waist & pulled her feet up,, with her body comfortably in charge of his embrace...

He looked at her & his hot breath now travelling along her shoulder blade to her neck line, & rested on her face...

She was feeling dizzy, yet she opened her eyes & they got locked with his brown orbs...

He made her stand on her feet,, still holding her waist & hand... & made her lean on 1 side & did the same... She smiled looking in her eyes & he smiled too...

Everyone was watching this romantic performance as if they were spellbound, not even blinking once..

He lifted her with one arm on her waist & her arm wrapped along his back holding his shoulders & her body clinging on his side...He pulled her in front holding her by waist & bending her back downwards with her arms wide...She felt like she was flying, the feeling was heavenly..

He gently pulled her back to him... & she wrapped her arm around him... Hugging him & taking in his musky cologne... He never seemed so perfect.. Actually not even any guy...

& his face was dipped in her freshly fruity shampooed hairs... It was her fragrance, he was getting addicted to...

She pulled back & looked in his eyes.. Her one arm still around his neck & other on his chest & his arms protectively holding her back n waist, their faces millimeters apart...

Light was dim & was complimenting the dance theme,, but suddenly the voltage recovered & the light shone bright to the eyes...

By now, the song was over, but still they were in same position, even all the people there were statue audience...

every body's jaw fell open and touched the ground.

Neha's eyes were glued to their dance & she was even shocked with Swayam's dance, the plate in her hand fell down & shattered in pieces bringing everyone out of the fantasy land...

Sharon jerked herself away a little, sensing herself so close to him... & confusingly looked towards him... A blush crept on her cheeks & she was unable to conclude why she was feeling that way...

A huge round of applause grabbed her attention & she smiled wide... Bending dramatically she thanked them & rushed from there, not even looking towards Swayam...

While Swayam smiled at her, knowing she won't talk to him now so soon... He was delighted to dance with her & even more happy to create havoc in her heart...

He looked around at everybody's reaction and said arrogantly "what?? Ek dance hi toh tha??"

Seeing him Everybody came back to normal and acted as if nothing happened but all knew something happened..

Kria again attempted to talk to Rey but failed miserably.

'enough is enough ,bahot ho gya iska melodrama..kaise nahi maaf karta mujhe..' Kria's patience was over now...

She searched and found him standing alone, staring at nowhere, practically lost in thoughts & everyone busy in their own works...

'Great, i'm never gonna get this free situation' she smirked & walked past him catching his hand, pulling him along without anyone's notice...

she pulled him & closed the main door behind him...

He was shocked with her gesture, but he didn't retort back & kept on walking...

Once she reached lawn, without noticing him so close, she turned & bumped into him, losing her balance...

But he was quick enough to catch her by waist & she grabbed him by shoulders...She examined his broad muscular frame...

She never knew- he is so handsome..

'why the hell she's so beautiful..All the morals of the world on one side & Kria on the other side..Damn.. This is it..' He leaned ahead..

"Reyansh"

he came out of trance & saw her standing uncomfortably..He released her free & stood at a distance...To his surprise, Kria hold her ears & started chanting sorry mantra-

"rey... Plz i'm really sorry..I didn't mean to do that..Chaho to tum bhi mujhe maar lo ...but plz forgive me plz plz plz..."

she looked so adorable, that he kept looking at her, her small lips moving continuously & eyes pleading in her own accord...

'Damn.. Enough of this drama...Who can stay angry with this girl for long'he smiled...

"It's ok Kria, I forgive you"

she jumped happily & hugged him tightly shocking him all of a sudden...

"thank you.. thank you.. thank you..Pata hai main kitna darr gyi thi..Tum kitna gussa ho gye they.." she said innocently..

Rey smiled "actually, sorry to mujhe hona chahiye..Maine tumhe kaise blame kiya.."

"nhi rey, I m sorry, aise kaise maar diya maine..Aur haan thanx"

"thanx?"


she nodded.

he realized what she meant with her genuine smile...

"Kria wo ghar tumhara hai,, maine to bas thodi si help ki hai, nahi to sharon mujhe kacha chaba jati"

both burst out laughing thinking about what sharon could have done to him...

"thanx . . Sharon ko itna protect karne ke liye bhi.." her eyes depicting gratitude thanking him..

"arre sharon ka dhyan mujhe hi toh rakhna tha, saali (sister in law) jo hai meri"

as soon as he said that,, Kria's cheeks turned crimson red with a blush, that he had never seen..

"I guess, sharon bula rhi hai mujhe" Kria dashed out hurriedly, not wanting to show his effect on her...

& he stood there folding his arms, smiling to himself...

That's there equation- fights n patch up in friction of seconds...besides he's loving this new unknown feeling..




Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by chetna_yogini - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RESSS


unresss...


party tym ... i m frst this tym woaahhh...🥳
wo b bina cheat kia nd line n m lage ...🤣
rght yogi...???

now


finally thread mri hlp kr ra...😆😆
srsly yaar tre thread is nt gud 4 me,...😛😛
bt finally m doing thankfully...😆
now abt update asusual
rocking...👏

aftr reading frst line i m ready to kill u bth...😡😡
mnu lga tun dono n mra rey entry wala scene uda diya bt it"s in flashback...😛😛😛

frstly rey's srcasm for kriya nd sharon's defence is soo cute...😳
nd dadimaa's concern appreciable...👏

"chalo Rey beta ab tum bhi tyaar ho jao, hum sab tyaar ho gaye hai, and Kria ko abhi mat uthana use abhi thodi der araam karne do, thak gayi hogi"


"thak gayi hogi?? Usne kaun se mountains uthaye hai, balki mountain jaisi toh woh khud hai ,mere haatho mein abhi bhi dard ho raha hai!!" Rey said only to get smacked from daadi and Sharon at the same time on his arm


"oye khabardaar meri di ke bare mein kuch bola toh!!" Sharon said glaring at him


Dadima said showing her palm forming in a punch to him " meri bahu ke bare mein ek shabd bhi bola na toh.."

suprbbb defence anyone coud get nd a cutee family...😃

nd not to mention their bedroom scene...

blue saree nd duvet uss par daalna soo cutee...😳

don't know whether it is love or something but tumhe udaas dekhna acchha nahi lagta"

thn viha scene ... 🤣

shrt color match stick...😆😆😆

tumne yeh shirt kyun pehni hai?? Kaha tha na muje iska colour pasand nahi!! Martin jaldi se matchbox lao" Neha shouted


Seeing what was coming next , Vicky gulped "nahi nahi baby !!main jata hu & change kar ke aata hu" Vicky said running to his room otherwise his wife would burn his shirt too.

🤣🤣
nd thn martin, dadji nd maria's part is hilarius...🤣🤣

thn rey nd pinky 's convo r soo cute...😆😆



"arey Rey woh kya hai na raaste mein mujhe aate aate bhuk lag gayi thi, isliye" pinky said innocently


"par aajkal toh tum dieting pe hona??" Rey asked hiding his smile


"haan par kabhi kabhi chalta hai"


"kabhi kabhi??"


Pinky got that rey is making fun of her, she smacked him and said "jyada na udd mat warna Kria se complain kar dungi"


"as if I am scared of her!!" Rey retorted



thn thei rno tso called intrst in chuda bt doing romance or llhh during this ...😳

Kriyansh looked at each other and world stopped for them, their eyes locked , Rey looked into Kria's eyes & started putting bangles in her hand one by one..kria couldn't take it anymore she broke their eye lock and looked down trying not to blush but couldn't help it..

nd then kalirein part + swaron teasing teasing is suprbbb...👏

Kria wiggled her kalirein on Sharon as if in a cue pinky turned around due to which Swayam was pushed forward and he bumped into Sharon making him hug her from behind , at the same time some pieces of Kria's kalirein broke and fell on both of them, they stood up & composed themselves.

Rey smirked at them as if saying "kaha than a maine??"

thn viha ki little nok jhok thn divorce part is hilarius...🤣

nd d way kriya handled her mood swing is...👏

thn daada nd daadi flashback is one of best part in this update along wid shirt burning....🤣🤣

that is one of d grtt hilarius ideas...🤣🤣

thn their i mean viha 's romance part was soo cuteee...🤣

thn swaron passionate dance ...☺️
☺️


thn the way rey is ignoring her bt actually wants to be wid her is damnn 😆😆

nd d way she is trying to talk to her totally desparate is wowww...👏

nd d way she asked 4 forgiveness no one could be angry...

he came out of trance & saw her standing uncomfortably..He released her free & stood at a distance...To his surprise, Kria hold her ears & started chanting sorry mantra-

"rey... Plz i'm really sorry..I didn't mean to do that..Chaho to tum bhi mujhe maar lo ...but plz forgive me plz plz plz..."

she looked so adorable, that he kept looking at her, her small lips moving continuously & eyes pleading in her own accord...

'Damn.. Enough of this drama...Who can stay angry with this girl for long'he smiled...

nd she is also having mutual feeling now... bt as usual bth need a push... nd i gues it's don by non other swaron in vch they also cum closer...👏👏👏

suprbbb


osssooommm 👍🏼

updates ...⭐️


loved it...❤️


totally kriyaansh update pichle update ki kami puri ho gyi...😃😆

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swaron too...👏👏


u truely gave importance to evry single character in this ff this is truely appreciable...👏


hugs to u both for such a brilliant update...🤗


now nxxt update will be pretty soon...😃


🥳finally mne unres kr diya ...






Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipeee...!!!!! Huraahhh.,...!!!! Party tym...:-) dekh yogi bina cheating k frst res...:-p nd also bina line m khade hue...:-p lolzz...!!!! I lov u chetna nt yogi...:-p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update
rey is only pretending to be angry
nkria yse manane ki koshish kar rahi he
n love swaron dance
everyone is so happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res 😳

unres

awww brilliant update👏👏

rey caring for kria cho chweettt😳

and loovveedd d viha part😆

aww d KR part was amazinggg😃


rey and kria lost n their world

neha's mood swings😆

poor vicky😆

rey teasing swaron😉

vicky aplogising to neha😳 and also feeding her soo sweet😊

and poor kria trying to manofy rey😆

woowww swaron romantic dance👏👏

and finally rey forgave kria😃😃

d KR hug☺️

and d precap s wowwwwaiting for t😊

totally a mindblowing update and hilarious too wit romance❤️

gr8 work guys🤗

and m very sorry for d late unres😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
one ang amazinggg rocking update,,,,,
each n evry prt i jst luv it totally...
bful writing guys👏
kriYaansh prt was suprb,,,,,rey angry,,,,kriya manofying rey,,,all in all jst luv KR prt dey r really cute n adorable couple

viha prt was sweet,,,,,vicky kitna caring hubby hai

n swaron ka dance prt ahhh amazing⭐️⭐️

totally fadu update😃👏⭐️

btw precap bada intrstng laging😃 KR 1st night☺️ epsss waiting waiting waiting😃
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved each and every scene...
swaron ki dance toh simply wow tha...
vicky and neha... the cutest couple...aww vicky ne kitna sweetly neha ko manaya...
now comes my best couple.. kriyaansh..
kriya manofying rey... wow
it was an outstanding update ...
loved it to the core...
after reading the precap i can't wait...pls update it soon..
pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res :-D. . .
Unes :-D. . . .
Superb update asusual. . . . . . . .
Woww. . . .dada-dadi ji are helarious. . 🤣🤣
🤣🤣 VIHA. .goshh they are shoo damm cutte. .vicky manofying neha. .haiyee. . . .
SwaRon part was awsome. .their dance. .superbly explaind the feelings,emotions etc etc. . .
And then the best part. . .kriyaansh. .haiyee. . .
Rey is such a sweet heart ,kriya ki kitni care kerta h. .then the kriya manofying rey,and rey,kitna bhav kha raha h. . .bt,at last rey maan gaya. .yupiee. .
Precap looks interesting. . .
Swaron moments. .good. .
And KR ki 1st nyt. .woww. .bt,as curent track chal raha h,i knw unke waise scens nai honge,bt,plz thoda romance toh banta h. .aftr al they married nw. . .
So,update the nxt part soon. .:-D
me egarly waiting 4 it. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just loved the update...
kr ka patch up hogaya...

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