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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gunnu1

Heyaaa!!!! I know me phirse late!!!

Sorry...aadat hee ho gyi h ab toh :p
Anyways,
Neha ne tie jala di🤣🤣i!!!! Mai hoti toh pura ka pura jala deti kamine ko!!!!!😡

Sharon aur Rey toh bade smart nikle yaar!!! 👏😎
Itna toh pta tha ke kuch gadbad hogi but yeh toh ni socha tha!!!!!
N SwaRon...
Yr Rey ki nautanki kab khatam hogi?????? Kriya aur Rey baat kab krenge??? I want their scenes!!!!!!!!!!

N itna toh I know ke Sharon apne Sway aur uske grand parents ki saari problems duur kr degi!!!!!!

N Im sooo happy ke Kriyaansh will stay in de same room!!!!!!!!!!!

Vicky is so smart!!!!! I mean dada dadi ko bulane ka plan was superb!!!
N dada dadi kya awesome hai yaar!!!! Matlab pure flirts!!! 😆🤪🤣
Bechare Mishra ji toh pitte!!!!! Dadaji India pahunch ke sabse pehle unki khabar lenge!!! 🤣


I looove this update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Matlab innnaaa lamba update sirf aap log dete ho🤗. But aap wait bi toh bahut krate ho yr🤔!!!! N then woh lamba sa upie bhi pta ni chotu sa kyu ho jata h!! *pout*

Readers pe seedha seedha zulm h !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When are you updating??????????? Me dying to read it!!!
I soo love SwaRon but Kriyaansh ka patch up krwao jaldi se!!!! Me waiting!!!! Jaldiii please!!!! _/\_

thanx a lot 4 commenting
glad u liked the chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Awesome updates :-)
Loved the Reyam and KriYam parts

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Woah

SUCH A LONG UPDATE SO COMMENTS BHE LONG LONG

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

MINDBLOWING

ROCKING

WONDERFUL

SPLENDID

MARVELLOUS

AWESTRUCK

FLAWLESS

STUPANDOFANTABOLOUS

OUT OF THE WORLD

STARTING WILL REVEALING THE TRUTH SO KNEW IT WAS SHARON's plan but didn't knew who all were included

SHIVAM SCARED OF KRIA...hahahaha

WHAT NEHA DID TO ABHISHEK...ROFLING

DADAJI-DADIMA WERE GREAT

VICKY'S PLAN TO BRING KRIYAANSH NEAR...AWLAAAH

REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO UPDATES NOW

UPDATE SOON :)


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

wow very nic story

read in one go

apko to noval likhna chaiya...

PM me when u update

thnx 4 commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly sorry...me late again hd my exams + health issues so sorry for tht...
update was just superb😃...
i knew sh kuch karege bt itna badh dhamaka😲...superb👍🏼...
sh ka handwash wala part n neha burning abhishek's tie i was like🤣...gosh amazing part.😆...
n kriyaansh..wow..rey carrying kria in his arms...wow...
reyam scenes were superb.👍🏼...
overall superb update...loved it...
dada n dadi ki entry...i personally adore old couple alot❤️ as they define pure luv tht doesn't vanish with tym infact grows more...i just loved their entry..they part was too cute😊...
thnx for pm n update soon...i knw commenting late n asking for update is not fair bt can help it😳...
waiting eagerly for next part n plz gv some more kriyaansh scenes😉...

Alisha..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha

firstly sorry...me late again hd my exams + health issues so sorry for tht...

update was just superb😃...
i knew sh kuch karege bt itna badh dhamaka😲...superb👍🏼...
sh ka handwash wala part n neha burning abhishek's tie i was like🤣...gosh amazing part.😆...
n kriyaansh..wow..rey carrying kria in his arms...wow...
reyam scenes were superb.👍🏼...
overall superb update...loved it...
dada n dadi ki entry...i personally adore old couple alot❤️ as they define pure luv tht doesn't vanish with tym infact grows more...i just loved their entry..they part was too cute😊...
thnx for pm n update soon...i knw commenting late n asking for update is not fair bt can help it😳...
waiting eagerly for next part n plz gv some more kriyaansh scenes😉...

Alisha..

thanx a lot 4 commenting
am glad u didnt forgot to comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 38

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recap: reyansh marriage, sharon's revelation, entry of dada dadi


Kria woke up after sometime , she saw herself drapped with a blanket.


"Sharon bhi na!!" she smiled thinking Sharon might have drapped her blanket.


She saw her luggage near the sofa and a blue saari placed near her..


"may be, Dadima" she said to herself..


Flashback

Reyam had came back from the beach ..


"chalo Rey beta ab tum bhi tyaar ho jao, hum sab tyaar ho gaye hai, and Kria ko abhi mat uthana use abhi thodi der araam karne do, thak gayi hogi"


"thak gayi hogi?? Usne kaun se mountains uthaye hai, balki mountain jaisi toh woh khud hai ,mere haatho mein abhi bhi dard ho raha hai!!" Rey said only to get smacked from daadi and Sharon at the same time on his arm


"oye khabardaar meri di ke bare mein kuch bola toh!!" Sharon said glaring at him


Dadima said showing her palm forming in a punch to him " meri bahu ke bare mein ek shabd bhi bola na toh.."


Dadaji pulled his collar and said "agar tu phir bhi bach gaya na in dono se , toh main tujhe chodunga nahi agar tune use kuch bola toh.."


He gulped seeing the trio

"ok!!" he said meekly


Martin couldn't help but laughed loudly only to get a glare from Rey

"don't look at me like that , I am on their side" martin said proudly


"hadh hai koi meri side bhi ho jao..!!" Rey said with puppy eyes


"welcome to the world of marriage friend..!! shaadi ke baad sab tumhe dhoka de jaate hai .. sab dosti yaari fake ho jati hai, shaadi ke baad tumhari koi value nahi rehti aur koi cheez valuable rehti hai toh sirf tumhari biwi rehti hai.." Vicky said consoling him and in return a flying cushion came and hit him on his head


No guessing from where it came..neha stood glaring at him with her hands on her hip


"bol toh aise raho ho jaise main tumse 10-10 kilo ke pathar tudwaati hoon!!"


"arey baby mai toh bas .."


"ab koi aur bahane mat manao, and ye kya?? tumne yeh shirt kyun pehni hai?? Kaha tha na muje iska colour pasand nahi!! Martin jaldi se matchbox lao" Neha shouted


Seeing what was coming next , Vicky gulped "nahi nahi baby !!main jata hu & change kar ke aata hu" Vicky said running to his room otherwise his wife would burn his shirt too.


Rey rushed to his room for changing his clothes, He saw Kria sleeping peacefully in her bathrobe with blanket till her waist , her wet hair filled the atmosphere of his room , and she was shivering , he pulled up a blanket and set the temperature of ac at a bearable temperature.


He came and sat near her, he was mesmerized by the flawless beauty, he could see her wet hair falling on her face, he tucked it back behind her ear, he looked at her flawless face, there was a calmness on it , her eyes looked so beautiful despite of being closed that he thought to kiss each of her eyelids, but restrain himself.


"dusro ko kitni asaani se apna bana leti ho!! but kisi ko apne paas bhi nahi aane deti, tum apne ander ka dard kabhi toh mujhe bataogi kria, I am waiting for that day, I promise you , main puri koshish karunga tumhe khush rakhne ki" he promised himself looking at the sleeping beauty in front of him


And added "I don't know whether it is love or something but tumhe udaas dekhna acchha nahi lagta"


He placed a saari which he brought from the shop while returning back from beach with Swayam.


And went to take shower , he came back wearing an elegant suit for get-together and shut the door quietly.


Flashback over

Everybody started arriving , Vicky introduced Aditya to dada dadi , Aditya touched their feet and took blessing. Pinky came happily munching chips & too greeted them, she also offered chips to dada dadi who gladly accepted the offer. Rey introduced shikha bua to dada dadi.. shikha and dadi hugged each-other while shikha greeted dadaji with 'namaste'..


"khush raho beta!!" dadaji blessed


"Kria badi hi pyaari bachi hai" dadi complimented


"yeh toh aap logo ka pyaar hai.. Kria bachpan se hi pyaari hai and Sharon thodi sharaarti" shikha answered smiling


"arey bachiyaan hai , thodi bahot sharaarat karna toh bantai hai" dadaji said taking sharon's side


Maria too came and hugged the trio one by one, "aur dadaji aapki tabiyat ab kaisi hai??" Maria enquired..


"ab bilkul thik hai beta!! Bas tumne jo dawayi di thi woh thodi kardwi hai" dadaji complained like a kid


"lo!! Ab inke liye meethi aur chatpati dawayi banwao..!!" dadi said glaring at him..


"main abhi aaya.." saying dadaji slipped from between the three women


He went to Martin and he put his arm on his shoulder hugging him sideways and said "abbey ghadhe tujhe ek yahi mili thi?? Patane ko??"


"kyun kya hua dadaji??" Martin said getting scared


"arey tu cook hai , tere itne saare hotels and restaurants hai toh tujhe koi cook se shaadi karni chahiye, jo mujhe accha khana khilaye na ki kadwi dawayi!! Yeh kya?? nurse ?? yeh bhi koi combination hai??" dadaji said


"matlab main ek cook se shaadi karu taki woh aapke liye acha khaana banaye?? Dadaji you are impossible!!" Martin said and was about to go from their but dadaji stopped him


"arey arey tu naraaz kyu hota hai?? Waise sach baat kahu?? Tum dono ka combination bahot acha hai ek ka khana khane se agar pet kharab ho jaye toh uski biwi ke paas jao woh dawa de degi"


All laughed at his logic..


"lo ho gaye yeh shuru ab Martin bechare bacche ko chodenge nahi.." dadi said to Maria and added "waise Martin bahot pyara hai"


Maria smiled looking at Martin and answered unknowingly "haan"


"haan??" dadi teased


Maria realized what she said , she looked at dadi and blushed


Dadi and shikha smiled at her and said " its normal , hum bhi is daur se gujar chuke hai"


"chocolate waise humare yaha khana milta hai, tumhe chips bahar se lane ki zarurat nahi thi!!" Rey taunted pinky


"arey Rey woh kya hai na raaste mein mujhe aate aate bhuk lag gayi thi, isliye" pinky said innocently


"par aajkal toh tum dieting pe hona??" Rey asked hiding his smile


"haan par kabhi kabhi chalta hai"


"kabhi kabhi??"


Pinky got that rey is making fun of her, she smacked him and said "jyada na udd mat warna Kria se complain kar dungi"


"as if I am scared of her!!" Rey retorted


Kria came out of the room wearing a blue saree that he brought for her , she looked like an angel, her eyes searched for Rey as if it was telepathic , he turned around and looked at her, their eyes met for few seconds but he turned back and clearly ignored her ..


"arghh!! Abhi bhi naraaz hai!! Kuch help karo na universe ji" she prayed looking up..


As if universe ji listened to her, dadi came to her and said

"are beta tum aa gayi?? Bahot pyari lag rahi ho.."


Kria blushed , "acha chalo ek rasam baaki hai.. !! Rey!!" dadi called Rey..


Rey came to them "ji dadi!!"


"chal yaha baith , waise toh yeh rasam shaadi ke pehle ho jaani chahiye and is rasam mein dulhe ka koi kaam ni hota .."


Dadi said making him sit in front of Kria on sofa while all hovered around them


"arey jab ladke ka koi kaam nahi toh fir mujhe kyu??"


"woh isliye kyunki hum zara aashique khaandan se hai.." dadaji said running his fingers on his moustache proudly..and added


"isliye rasme thodi romantic honi chahiye..!!"


"kya matlab??" Vicky said innocently

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Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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"matlab yeh ki is rasam mein Rey ko Kria ko chooda pehnana hai and saath mein kalirein bhi"

"are lekin main kyu, woh khud bhi toh pehan sakti hai , uske bhi haath hai" Rey said acting as if I-AM-NOT INTERESTED but was happy from inside..

"haan dadi main khud hi pehan lungi" Kria tried to make excuse

"tum dona na romance ke naam pe bilkul dhabba hai..!! bilkul bada wala dhabba'pata ni love marriage kaise ki ab toh mujhe doubt hone laga hai" dadaji joked

But all people excluding pinky and Aditya took it very seriously..

"arey aisa nahi hai dadaji, partner pehnayega chooda Kria ko" Neha said almost pushing Rey to sit..

"chal pehna chup chap" Vicky forced him

"haan haan di bhi pehnegi jiju ke haatho se !! hai na di??" Sharon forwarded kria's hand to Rey..

Rey took one bangle in his hand , he was about to insert in Kria's hand but Sharon shouted

"WAIT!!"

All looked at her, she ran inside her room and came back with camera in her hand..

Now Rey again was about to insert in Kria's hand but again was stopped by a voice.

"WAIT!!" this time Martin ran inside and came back with a sweet box.

"yeh bahot hi accha kiya tune, Maria ke saath raha kar kaafi intelligent ho gaya hai" dadaji teased loudly making him and Maria blush to the core.

"ahem ahem.." Dadima coughed fakely bringing all attention towards kriyansh.

"aap logo ka ho gaya hai toh ab jo rasam hai woh kare??" dadi glared at all.

"haan haan !!" humne kab mana kiya yeh Rey hi hai , kabse keh rahe hai.. bahu ko choodiyaan pehnata kyu nai Rey!! Pehna na bahu kabse wait kar rahi hai" dada scolded Rey putting all blame of being late on him.

"Bas bas!! Rey beta chalo" dadi said lovingly.

Rey and Kria looked around and saw all eager faces around them specially dada-dadi's.

Kriyansh looked at each other and world stopped for them, their eyes locked , Rey looked into Kria's eyes & started putting bangles in her hand one by one..kria couldn't take it anymore she broke their eye lock and looked down trying not to blush but couldn't help it..

Rey kept looking at her face and rosy cheeks which grew redder and redder with each passing time, but his trance were broken by hearing someone's giggle, he tried to ignore it but when it became more in number , he looked around and looked at Swayam and raised his eyebrows asking "what??" , Swayam replied through his eyes indicating him to look at Kria's hand..

Rey glanced at her hand and Kria too looked up sensing him stop, Rey looked at others and smiled sheepishly & scratched his head..

This was it , all burst out laughing louder and louder, Rey had put all bangles in Kria's one hand only and was trying to put more.

"arey mujhe kya pata sirf ek hi haath mein nahi pehante" Rey tried to cover up.

"oh!! Hume toh laga ki yeh aaj kal ka fashion hai" Aditya mocked at him.

And again all burst out laughing louder..

"main nahi pehna raha choodiya" Rey said pouting but didn't left Kria's hand

"acha acha bas !! Rey chal ab pehna ab koi nahi hasega" dadaji tried to suppress his laughter but couldn't help it & burst out laughing more.

"Dadima!!" Rey whined like a kid

"acha bas, tum pehnao aur dusro ko chodo!!" dadi said.

Rey pulled out some of the choodiyan hurriedly this time but softly not to hurt her and put it in her other hand making them equal in her both hand.

He also tied 'kalirein' on the choodiyan of her both hands.

"Dadima yeh kya hai??" Sharon asked curiously.

"beta yeh kalirein hai jo ki ab Kria tum sabke upar jharegi(shake) , aisa kehte hai jiske upar yeh kalirein girti hai uski shadi jaldi hoti hai".

Dadi explained

Rey finished tieing up kalirein in Kria's hand

"beta ab'" before dadi could say anything Sharon cut her in between.

"Dadima hum tyaar hai.." Sharon chirped.

dadi saw a long queue consisting of Sharon standing ahead of all them, then Martin , then pinky with a packet of chips and then Maria and Aditya..

"offo swayu!! Tum bhi aao na!!" before swayam could protest Sharon pulled him behind her in line.

Dada dadi shared a smiled.

"hey Sharon , Swayam aur tum dono ko line mein khade hone ki kya jarurat hai??ek khada ho toh bhi kaafi hai" Rey teased.

"SHUTUP!! Rey" swaron said at the same time getting what he meant.

"actually Rey baba is right" with that Martin came out of the line, and Aditya too slipped out of it, which Vicky noticed and smiled.

Kria wiggled her kalirein on Sharon as if in a cue pinky turned around due to which Swayam was pushed forward and he bumped into Sharon making him hug her from behind , at the same time some pieces of Kria's kalirein broke and fell on both of them, they stood up & composed themselves.

Rey smirked at them as if saying "kaha than a maine??"

Swaron dispersed in two different direction excusing themselves.

Now it was pinky eagerly waiting for her turn, Aditya smiled at her with puppy eyes but the kalirein didn't fell on her , pinky's face fell but Kria smiled and tried to cheer her up "maybe thoda time lagega but zaroor aayega, and waise bhi abhi toh sabki shadi mein tasty food khaana and shopping karna hai na??" and she winked at her, pinky's face glowed at the mention of food and shopping..

"oh!! Kria you are a sweetheart!!" pinky hugged her lovingly.

Maria waited for her turn and it fell on her..

Martin was way too happy, he jumped like maniac whereas Maria blushed, he almost hugged everyone, but when he was about to hug dadaji, dadaji shooed him away.

"shaant reh, abhi na toh shaadi pakki hui hai or na hi tu baap bana hai, agar aise hi naachta raha toh Maria tujhe Bandar samjhegi n teri shaadi cancel samjha!!" dadaji explained seriously.

Hearing about cancellation of shaadi, he straightened himself and coughed fakely as if nothing happened and acted as if he is not in excited mode at all.

Next whom Kria saw in queue surprised her infact shocked everybody..Neha was standing there waiting eagerly for her turn,

"Neha tum??" Kria asked.

"haan main chalo jaldi karo!!" Neha said enthusiastically.

"arey but Neha beta tum toh shaadi-shuda ho, yeh rasam bachelors ke liye hai" dadaji explained.

"mai bhi jald hi bachelor ho jaungi jab main Vicky ko divorce de dungi".

"DIVORCE!!" all shouted in unison.

"aur nahi toh kya ??, mujhe ni rehna iske saath yeh mujhe ganda sa milk peene ko bol raha hai.. mujhe ice-cream bhi nahi khaane de raha" Neha said almost crying.

"baby'" Vicky said cooing her.

"don't you dare to baby me'" Neha said in anger.

"Kria tum ruk kyun gayi??" she asked shouting at Kria.

But Kria sighed and replied calmly "Neha woh saari kalirein khatam ho gayi hai, koi baat nahi chalo hum necklace ke nayi designs dekhte hai , bahot beautiful hai.." Kria tried to divert her mind in which she succeeded.

"new designs??? Wow'" Neha clapped in excitement.

All girls joined them including dadi and shikha, boys sighed in relief specially Vicky.

"thank god !! Kria ne sab sambhaal liya,warna aaj toh mera divorce pakka tha!!" Vicky exclaimed.

"hota hai beta , pregnancy ke waqt patiyo ko sab sehna padta hai" dadaji consoled him.

"but Neha ke mood swings toh kuch jyada hi hai".

Vicky said defeated.

"arey yeh toh kuch bhi ni hai , abhi toh aur bhi bhayanak time aana baaki hai, mere time pe toh tumhari dadi ne hadh hi kar di thi" dadaji said weeping his sweat.

"kya kiya tha Dadima ne??" martin asked curiously.

"mujhe achi tarah se yaad hai , usne mujhe tree pe chadaya tha".

"tree pe??" aditya laughed




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"aur ni toh kya?? Ek baar hum fruits lene gaye ,


Flashback


dadi : yeh fruits fresh ni hai..!!


fruit-seller: toh jaayiye ped(tree) se hi tod ke kha lijiye!!


Dadi: haaan haan wahi se le lenge


Dadi pulled dada and went home, dada cut fruits for her but she denied eating them


Dadi: maine kaha na main sirf tree se tode(plucked) hue hi fruits khaungi


Dada: arey toh yeh bhi toh tree se thode hai, zameen se ni nikale maine


Dadi: nahi mujhe grape khane hai & main grapes sirf ped se tode hue hi khaungi


Dadaji sighed , he went to the same fruit seller and asked him from where he brings fruits.


Dadaji walked 5 km to the given address of the orchard and brought her the fresh plucked fruits from the garden..


But still dadi denied and said

Dadi: jab tak main apni aankhon se tumhe fruits todte ni dekhti, main yeh ni khaungi..


This was enough for dadaji he approached a nearby gardener who had a big orchard of mango fruits, he gave him some money and handed him the bucket full of bunches of grape..


He took dadi to the orchard and made her sit in a shady area and climbed the easiest tree that can be climbed and plucked some bunches of grape and climbed down


Flashback over


"Par dadaji!! If I am not wrong grape toh climber pe grow hote hai na fir tree??" Aditya scratched his head


Dadaji put his arm around Aditya's shoulder and said "my dear bhole Aditya!! yeh tumhe pata hai, mujhe pata tha, but us waqt tumhari dadi ko nahi pata tha.."


"HAAAN!!" all screamed


"aur ni toh kya tumhe kya laga ?? maine us gardener ko paise kis liye diye?? Cello-tape se grape ke bunches ko chipkane ke liye, aur kisliye??" dadaji said proudly


All laughed hearing this


"but dadaji how come dadi didn't knew it was mango tree" Vicky asked


"arey grapes spring season mein milte hai and mango summer mein, jis time main grapes tod raha tha us waqt tree pe ek bhi mango nahi tha, simple!!"


All again laughed


"u are too good dadaji" Rey exclaimed


"tu kya has raha hai, jab tu baap banega na toh tab dekhenge" dada exclaimed making rey shut


Boys got busy in themselves, Rey admired Kria while Swayam stole some glances of Sharon from time to time


After sometime, Vicky walked towards the girls and taking Neha's hand in , he said "excuse us girls"


Seeing him all girls dispersed from there, he sat near Neha and took her hand and kept looking down, few tears made their way from his eyes and fell on her hand..


Seeing him in tears Neha tensed

"Vicky??"


"am sorry Neha , main tumhe khush ni rakh paa raha hu"

Vicky tried hard to not to cry


"shh!! " Neha placed her finger on his lips forbidding him to speak further


She kissed his cheeks and placed her head on his shoulder and intertwined her fingers with his ..


"tum se jyada khush mujhe koi aur ni rakh sakta, tumhari wajah se aaj main carefree ho kar aram se ghum 'phir sakti hu, tumhari wajah se aaj main aur hamara baby safe hai, agar tum meri diet pe itna control nahi karte toh ,aaj hum safe nahi hote.." she said placing her other hand on her tummy


Vicky smiled hearing that, he felt better now, he stood up and said

"main abhi aaya!!"


Neha looked around saw every one busy in their own world , dadi and dadi were dancing , Martin and Maria together dancing, Sharon was dancing with pinky and Kria and shikha were standing and talking , Swayam, Aditya and Rey were talking forming in other group.


he brought a 'paneer tikka' that was in the menu of that night, and fed Neha with his hand lovingly


"hmmm.. I am loving it.. its so tasty..yummy!!" Neha said moaning at the food..


"I love you!!" Vicky said kissing her forehead


"ummm..mmm...mmm" Neha tried to speak as her mouth was full with paneer


He laughed at her, wiping off gravy near her lips and said "I know u love me too"


pinky soon joined shikha and Kria , Sharon was now dancing with dada- dadi


Though Kria was standing with them but her attention was towards Rey, she saw him happily celebrating with everyone, face glowing with success,, she smiled seeing him happy..


'he's not less than any angel for me...It's time to apologize now..So sorry for hurting you Reyansh..' Kria decided to herself...


Before she may proceed, Sharon jumped at her,

"chalo di, dance karte hai!!"


"abhi nahi Sharon mujhe abhi bhi kisi se baat karni hai" she looked sadly towards Rey..


"ohh..take your time di" Sharon teased & went back to celebrating...


With heavy steps Kria walked & stood behind him...She decided to talk but still was afraid of his reactions...She was at fault after all...He was oblivious of her presence & kept on partying...


She forwarded her hand to place on his shoulder & before she could do so, he was pulled to other side by swayam & her hand ducked in loose air...


Her face turned sad & aditya raised his brows to ask her- 'what's the matter?'


she smiled n nodded in negation & followed him again..He was leaning on staircase with Swayam talking nonstop,, with his ever charming smile...Her heart skipped a beat seeing his charming smile..


'oh god, Kria focus!!'


're.. Reyansh' she whispered, which fell to deaf ears as she saw martin forcing a piece of chocolate cake in Rey's mouth making her jaws drop to ground..


Martin was praising him for his plan's success & for the 1st time offering such a sweet eatable...


'okk!!, gift him, praise him...But plz leave him alone..I need to apologize..Why the hell no one understand my situation' she cursed under her breath & crossed her arms angrily..


Never in her life, she sounded so desperate to ask for forgiveness...And here, the whole universe seems against her...Finally gathering courage, she went to him & called him...Finally he looked at her & their eyes get locked...


Amidst all this chaos, he missed those eyes...He wanted to see her happy, & yes she was..But her eyes had mixed emotions- happy, sad, anxious, apology..


"Reyansh . . I need to talk to you" she said not meeting his eyes..


With his one look, all her courage drowned in emptiness...She can't bear those scrutinizing eyes, which are making her weak in knees...


Now he knew, what made her come here...But he was in no mood for this convo.. Instead he decided to play along...He smirked & left without a word...


She felt him leaving the place.. What else did she expect, he's so moody anyway' Moreover, he got all the right to be angry...


"neha, tumne kuch khaya nahi? apna khyaal nahi rakhogi to kaise chalega?" with that he stuffed Neha's mouth with some healthy stuff...


'Idiot, sabki fikar hai isse..2 minute meri baat nhi sun sakta' Kria pouted & looked away..


After a while, She saw him leaving the hall for privacy, making a phone call...


'Perfect, ab kahan jayega bach ke' she rubbed her hands & ran after him without anyone noticing it..


He finished his phone call & turned back to hall..But someone obstructed his way...


'not again' he muttered...


"kya chahiye?" he snapped..


He didn't want to be rude, but not actually wanted to let her know that he's no more angry with her, she was just trying to protect her sis after all...


'But this game is way more funny' he chuckled inwardly..


"Reyansh, i'm sorry..Sorry, That I doubted your intentions..I thought tumhe kiddo ki koi fikar nhi hai isiliye mujhe hi blame kar rahe ho.. Aur.."


"enough, I don't wanna listen to any of your cribbing..Aaj tak kisi ne mujhpar hath nhi uthaya & you.." he pointed a finger on her with eyes blazing with anger...


Kria was seeing a new side of Rey today,, she was horrified...He stormed inside, & she stamped her foot in frustration...


'damn! Main bhi dekhti hun kab tak gussa rehte ho..Kria ghai . . . arr..Kria Reyaansh singhaniya kabhi nhi haar sakti' she smiled with pride already making new plans in mind...




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Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago

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