Virika SS:Differences do not matter, or, do they? - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
short and captivating update
Continue soon plz craving for Virika stories
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Nicee Update!
Looking forward to read more... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
The update was amazing

Loved the update

Can't wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Thanks for the comments but they are lessening update by update. It seems like I may discontinue the story.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
No please dont do that.. Its an amazing story.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
The update was a little short but you write loads on IF so its okay! I really enjoyed it and I really like how you keep us on edge all of the time! They are interesting and beautifully written! I am a big fan of your writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7: Who are you?



~~~Jeevika's point of view~~~


I opened my eyes only to realize that I had been lying on a hospital bed with some machines connected to me. What happened? I made an attempt to wake up but felt a pain in my head. The nurse headed towards me and I shot my questions at her, "What happened to me? How did I get here?"


"Ma'am, I don't know what happened to you. But you were taken here by a young man." the nurse replied pleasantly.


And my memory slowly started working after hearing that. Someone tried to harm me and someone, took me up in his hands and after that... I tried to remember but everything looked blank.


"Did that person reveal his identity? I mean name or address?"


"Yeah, he has left his phone number and address in the reception. You could check it there."


"Thanks."


"You are fine now and you can leave now."


"Thank You" I woke up from the bed thanking her and was abou to leave when I remembered something. "But my bills?"


"They are already paid by that person"


"Oh Yeah."


I left the wards and went to the reception. My head was aching a bit but I never minded. I was so curious to know who saved me from the hands of that goons.


"Can I have the details of the person who admitted Jeevika Malhotra here?"


"Yeah." The receptionist smiled and checked the register, found it and gave it to me.


"It's your friend, one Mr. Viren Vadhera."


My friend? Who was it? I was so confused. The name Viren Vadhera made me remeber something, but what was it?


"Oh I see! May I have his phone number?" I saw the nurse looking at me bewildered. I made it clear "Actually he is my friend but we have lost touch. I would like to thank him."


"Yeah sure." She said assuring. "Oh but he hasn't left him phone number. He must have forgot. I can give you the address."


"Okay!" I took out my notepad to write down and the nurse narrated the address for me. Then, I thanked her and went out. My brain asked me the same question, "Who was this friend of mine?"


But more than that, another thing felt important for me. "Who must have sent those goons to injure me?"


As far as I remember I don't hold any grudge towards anyone, I see everyone as my friends but I really was curious to know who it was.


I reached my home, the most unsafe place on Earth. I didn't have any other place to go. When I reached my home, I saw my dad on the sofa watching TV. I got in and he suddenly woke up from his seat faking concern, "Princess, what happened? Is that an injury on your head? Did someone try to kill you?"


"Yes! YOU!", I shouted, entered my room and locked the door. He was taken aback for one moment.


I went through the last memories I had before being injured. What mistake did I do to be born as the daughter of a culprit? My heart ached and cried seeking answers.


I felt that finding my so-called friend seemed important and perhaps, he could just help me with my mission. All that I had of him was an address. After a lot of thought I decided to write a letter.


Taking my pen and paper, I sat on the chair staring into the loneliness through the windows. I started off,


'Dear Viren..


~~~~~


Was it a short update? Sorry, if it was. But I just wanted to update the story as it has been a very long time. Sorry for being so irregular. But I am quite busy and I don't know when I will actually be free.


Keep commenting and encouraging. I love you all!


Till next time,

Linaya

Edited by Linaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
This is awesome..love the way you write! Really liked the starting it set the scene! Really beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
it was beautiful pls keep writing oh sorry i forgot to introduce myself actually i am a silent reader
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
absolutely brilliant totally loved it

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