#1 SS:Mr. and Mrs. Naughty Raizada Part 8 pg131 6/15

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Nice update! Thanks for the pm!!

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ssyahoopm

@ssyahoopm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Well I'm sorry I've come to the realisation you are an amazing writer to write one shots,

That was an amazing and fantastic update, as usual love the naughty ASR.

Arnav is brilliant he started removing his clothes just to make khushi comfortable as she was wearing revealing clothes.

I can't believe Arnav actually called Aman, poor khushi had to speak him, I wonder what poor Aman thought of the call.

Wow loved the part where Arnav was teaching khushi how to play pool, obviously Arnav has to have naughty but passionate ideas.

So happy that you are going to be writing a few more parts.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

Thanks!! I had really thought this would only be a few parts, but I guess I can't end an OS lol!! Your comments are always appreciated!

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

unres

hayeee...romance on the pool table ☺️

can this get any more hotter...with arnav stripping n khushi in a short dress😉

hot to handle😉

update soon dear😃

Edited by sana11 - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

I loved it, don't know why you think it's not good...please do continue!

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

U r awesome at one shots. The series can be read as one shots as well as multiple shots. Part 3 was definitely hot with Mr.Raizada only in his boxers and playing pool the way he did 😳 Loved it.

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

That was an amazinggg update!!

Lol arnav jus love to annoy khushi
Awww pool game got soo intense towards the end

Amazinggg update!!!

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Brilliant update
Naughty Arnav
Khushi annoyed
Arnav stripping 😳
Thanks for pm

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tamanna

@Tamaru

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

this was hawwwtt in its own way luvd it yrrr reallyyy...

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Thanks all for the support and encouragement! Actually when i began I really thought each story would either be a one shot or two shot, but apparently I think of new ideas and it keeps continuing :) This particular story will have at least two more parts.