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ArSh23

@ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

amazing update! That was adorable! I love how you described all the little details that Arnav notices about Khushi. That is so romantic! He is so hopelessly in love with her that I don't think he is going to be able to leave her. Oh no we have to wait till Thursday?! That's okay I'm sure it will be worth the wait! Can't wait to read the next part!

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angelrosey

@angelrosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

woww !!!

what an amazing update !!

in fact im already fluttering !!

and just imagining how i would be after the teaser !!!!

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Im commenting after a long time, and the second thread is almost about to end! was bathing with assignment and handling work, even though I made a promise to myself i will only on my lap to do assignments couldn't stop myself from peeking in and reading this FF😊

The way Arnav and Khushi have evolved from been kids to adults was shown nicely through out and the pace your using gives us time to absorb each and every change that's taking place in their lives. Really enjoyed their childhood flash backs, its just so sweet and shows how they were once oblivious of the society and its evilness. Arnav going beyond his usual self and paying attention to the kids at the orphanage was really nicely portrayed, chocolate scene was just so damn adorable and I think that was the first time Arnav publicly displayed his growing feelings for Khushi!

Arnav is falling for khushi and that is also hard an fast. After reading the latest chapter its quite obivious that their journey is not going to be a bed of roses. But one thing you mentioned about Arnav been self centered kind of gave me the hope no matter what happens Arnav wont give up on Khushi this time around once he realizes he has fallen in love with her. Im sure he will break all the rules and wont stop until he makes sure Khuhsi is his. RK and dadi are tooo sweet😃 the kitten scene was sooo sweet😃 cant even imagine how you come up with such mind blowing scenes. Looks like Naina is going to play a vital part in Arhis love story. Eager to find out Arnav's reaction once he comes to know about Khushi's alliance.

There were so many other things I really enjoyed, even though i haven't mentioned them over here! Also one thing i really admire about your updates is you never fail to make us see the reality of the world, just by sitting and commenting you cant change anything rather by taking some action and reaching towards people who are in need of love can make a big difference in this world. So I think you have succeeded in presenting us a fabulous love story as well as conveying a strong message through it. Typed in a hurry so pls ignore all sorts of errors you can possibly come a cross! Great writing👏

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Hello Hi Bye - mami is in the house with all her prejudice! His mother defending both of them was very sweet. Rushing to fix his marriagewa is so Mami. Hopefully his mum will be the one to talk to him. The kitchen and laundry scene were so cute, more for him to realize what domestic bliss will be like with her. Buaji's comment reminds me of the show but I know that she is worried about her after she is no longer around. Absolutely loved the description at the end of him coming full circle with his feelings and realizing that it is no longer friendship but that his "sansein rukh jayye in gay". Without her. How will he react to her rishta being fixed and her feeling helpless about it?

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Rach...each chapter gets better...and better...Arnav is a goner for sure...it's amazing I loved the way he called he Kukku...so spontaneous ...

The best part for me was Khushi's subconscious can't let go of him and he is knowingly is going towards her...because he can't stop himself...

I loved the way he threw the phone on the bed...

It's an amazing story...I have fallen in love with it, I going away for 2 weeks myself but will stalk IF...even though I'll be out if the country...looking forward to the teaser!😊

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Today is Mother's Day.

After making the chores with the a cranky baby in th hip with one hand, you cook and clean the house with the same baby shifting more comfortable possible for the both. Then feed the baby with tiresome and making to eat more additional spoons, make the baby sleep and lay in the crib, before the baby wakes up take a quick shower and come out with the wet robe seeing th baby sleeping what will a mom do?

I will just lay down on the bed after slipping the wet robe in the bed with the semi warm body of shower and half naked with the made up bed. This is what I felt after your update. Nothing but just forget past or future enjoy the oneself relax before the baby becomes cranky.

MOL endevor, this update is to devour.

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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

manorama mami aapke khayal aapke pass rakyega!!!!!! arhi ke beech aane ki koshish mat kijiye

d kitchen cn was so beautiful

arnie scaring her

arnie callng khushi as kukku

kukku offerng rasmalai 2 arnie (evn i wanna hav rasmalai nw)

arnie dnkng her her cute evn she being in her messiest ouftfit

d laundry cn

arnie's feelings twrds hs kukku dat u protrayed js fantabously wrttn

u truely r a wordsmith

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

now what will happen

god will arnav propose khushi

will khushi say yes to buaji for proposal

will arnav's dadi come to know abt what manorma and nani r planning

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Mami ji...stay away and stop meddling...! I'm glad Arnav's mom has some sense...hopefully it will be paid heed to in the coming days and she does not give in to pressure from others...!

so Arnav can only see Kushi now...and wants only Kushi...what's up Arnav...? When are you breaking the news to La...?

So this suitor that Buaji has lined up for Kushi...is he in some way connected to her past...? And why is he so insistent on the alliance...does he know about Arnav and Kushi...is that why the urgency...!

How will Kushi fight it off...?

Is Arnav going climb in thought he window...or will he throw stones to Kushi's window...ohhh..can't wait...!

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Ok so I was wrong! It wasn't Naina...it was the ever present spanner in the works called Manorama! Ok..so Naina is showing some reservation about Mami and her behavior...so that's good...right?

Khushi so did not get what Arnav meant when he said that she was there to take care of his needs! I just realized men are that way. They love the affection and care of the one women that they want to hold on to for the rest of their life!

And whoa!! So khushi ke liye rishta aaya hain! NAHII! Chal Arnav beta..time to show what you are capable of! Don't let her go!!!!

And double whoa for Arnav noticing so much about Khushi! :P Down to the last pimple (Btw, it is really hard imagining Sanaya Irani having pimples! :P LOL! )

This was a great update! Many realizations...albeit they are a bit slow and gradual! I'm dying to know what happens next!! *rubs hands in glee* Thank you for this wonderful story! :)