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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update!

I loved the way you described all the things that Arnav notices about Khushi...that just shows that his feelings are definitely beyond friendship level. And the fact that he see's his girlfriends name flash but immediately goes to search for Khushi says something about what he's feeling. I know he's already in a relationship, but obviously he's not that into it, as when Khushi mentioned a future wife, he didn't think about his current girlfriend.

I hate small minded people like Manorama😡

I wonder what Dadi would have to say if she witnessed that conversation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kinda hard to let go of your best friend, especially when you're in love with them. I'm glad Khushi was honest with him about how much his leaving influenced her, that was truly heartbreaking. I hope Arnav can come to terms with his feelings and hopefully they can form a united front in dealing with the Raizaida's. I also look forward to seeing Arnav's relationship with La and how he breaks this news to her, or pulls an ASR and makes the complete oposite decision!

Can't wait to read more, thanks for sharing!

PS. I love Khushi sharing her monthly candy with him, that's the sweetest story ever.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Of course it was the mami..why am I not surprised? Ugh I hope Naina does not go mute if they ever pass a rude comment towards Khushi

Woah woah woah, Arnav hasn't gotten really comfortable with Khushi now. Touching her and everything, it's true when u fall in love with someone you notice all of their small habits and features that are unique to you

Yes, Arnav, yes..your on the right track my friend
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was a brilliant and mind blowing update,

Written exceptionally well, I'm just loving this story and each update just keeps on getting better and more exciting.

So it was Mami that had noticed both Arnav and Khushi and she has already voiced her concern regarding Khushi, I'm glad Naina had spoken up for Khushi and knows she is the reason for the change in Arnav's behaviour.

Buaji mentioned to khushi regarding the wedding proposal and khushi mentioned she needed more time but she can't stop thinking about Arnav.

Wow the kitchen part between Arnav and Khushi was so sweet and Arnav is so comfortable with touching Khushi it just so lovely.

Awww the laundry part started of quite funny and cute, Arnav addressing Khushi with her childhood name and Khushi finding it funny that Arnav had never done laundry.

It was quite sad Khushi reminding Arnav about getting married and Arnav thinking that khushi still thinks of her self as a servant whereas Arnav had started to think of her as much more than a friend.

Wow it was so lovely the way you had written how well and closely Arnav has observed Khushi and how he can't stop thinking about her, written beautifully.

I can't wait for the teaser, my heart has already started to flutter with excitement.

Eager to read more, please continue soon xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
super nice update...loved the last part...simply perfect emotions...
I have one questions...though u r not bound to ans that...
erm...r u planning to go with reality abt this story ...??? i mean, ending of this story.
If u r planning to go with reality then there won't be any happy ending, isn't it...???
I'm preparing myself for that...(it's tough though. I'm thinking abt emotional blackmail. I just have to find out how would I do that with u😕) but if u make it happy ending that it would be bonus for me...😃😃. now I am waiting for when Arnav gonna
find out abt that guy's proposal & when Lavanya will drop in. I think, when this will happen , we'll get some intense scenes...atleast, from Arnav's side. no way, Arnav gonna tolerate this...
Thank You...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was super awesome..
oh!it was mamiji...



He calls her kukku..
Arnav is totally into his best friend..




Cant wait for the teaser..wht wil arnav do to make her believe that she is not just a servant for him anymore


just thinking abt that brought butterflies in my stomach.. 😳bring it on..
Edited by BARUNODAYA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thts gr8...manorama mami is already working as manorama bond types...but naina's trust really gonna shake when she will got to know the indeed her son is attracted toward khushi...this will surely act as a negative fact for khushi... maybe thts good tht there is already a guy wanna meet her for alliance...but wht abt arnav???..wht will be his reaction over this???...may be just like the way her reacted when khushi mentioned abt his wife...😲
well wonderful one dear...👏👏
continue soon...😛
m fine with thursday...😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

I know Naina is not interested in Khushi in most ways but I'm glad that at least she realizes that Khushi is playing major role in bringing his son out of his shell ;I guess partly it is because of Lavanya that Naina is not threatened by Manorama's words ;

No matter how hard Khushi thinks that she is just an employee to him, she too has feelings towards him but of course it's going to take way too long to make her admit that outright;

Arnav first got the complete taste of her inner beauty and I guess that lead him to pay attention to her outer beauty as well ; but he does not have much change in his feelings towards her regardless of her appearance at any given moment of the day !!!

I was in fact very apprehensive about Khushi's alliance and her decision on that because she clearly is no where near to admit her love towards Arnav whatsoever; but after reading your note, I'm being optimistic and hoping that the issue will soon be closed :)

I loved the way you described Arnav's observations on Khushi :) Loved their cute , little moment in the kitchen !!!!

Edited by Seethu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So the mighty Raizada had finally fallen in love with the sweet khushi whom he shunned for years...I loved the way you wrote the last two updates..it was poetic..especially the last update where you scripted Arnav's feelings for Khushi...it was beautiful...and how khushi is trying to be practical...this is a lovely story, I tell u again and again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey molten lava
i am just not going to look as arnav khushi vieuw point but also the society point of vieuw
it is really hard how are u going to bring arshi togeaather
really hard
on first point arnav is not self made man he use his fathers money doesnt he
and then he cant go against his parents specially his father
he respect that dude and also love his muma
i know mami is only consurne about her chotey
and now they wanna bring lav to soon marry their chotey
i dont understand arnav if he love soo much khushi why just he dont breakup with lav
its soo insensitieve to just use a girl
and then khushi god is her bua going to let that girl in peace
whyi dont like bua?
first bcz she dont let khushi study with the help of dadis money
why not i ask myself
if she got degree she would have a beautiful futur
like she can have a job and then she can help bua
and she dont have to marry just some stupid guy
i dont understand why bua didnt let her study
and now she want her to marry
god give poor girl a break
i love y lava you rock IF

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