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angelrosey

@angelrosey

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

amazing story !!!!
i love it !! <3
plzz PM me !!!

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Bless those kids! Always looking at the positives of life. Could I love Khushi anymore? I didn't think it was possible, Arnav what are u waiting for man..connect the dots! Khushi is a gem of a woman!

I enjoyed the scene between Naina and Arnav, your never too old to put your head in your mothers lap! I still do!

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Loved the update...

Khushi is a sweetheart, helping the handicapped kids
in a way she can by cooking for them and the smiles
on the face of each of them is worth watching.
Arnav seeing all this went to his mother and hugged
her after fifteen years... Naina is so happy that her
son is back.

The feelings that are captured in this update are really
awesome... For me each and every update of yours has
a meaning and I don't mind if there no romance.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

beautiful update

i must admit i had a some tears in my eyes reading about the kids and the orphanage and how they were just going to get thrown out without a care in the world

loved what Khushi was doing..now the mystery behind the bags is out and her words from an update oh so long ago

she already has bought a little change in him

cant wait for more

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

arnav has khushi to balance his "me my guilt" issues!

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Khushi is surely an angel, she surely knows how to keep other happy. Very nice update lavaji, it was just beautiful. Awesome!

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

hey sweety iv just read all the chapters to your ff and its brilliant, i love this sweet innocent story, please could you add me to your pm list for updates, thanx

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

That was such a warm and human chapter. One where Arnav's frozen mental state was thawed due to the warmth and love he witnessed in Khushi as well as the children. It is as if Khushi has reversed his mental state back to the state prior to when he was traumatized and pretty much stopped loving and living to ward off the pain/guilt.

Khushi on the other hand fascinates me. She should be even more traumatized and yet, except for the moments where she does go to a dark place, in general she is so well adjusted that it is hard for me to understand why she needs Arnav so much...why is he so important to her well being...if not him then even the idea of him and his memories to keep her going. There is a strong dependence here which I am trying to understand.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

This was truly a beautiful update - making him realize his importance in her happy childhood by duplicating it with the kids. This was a major healing part in his getting in touch with himself quest. He blamed himself for not being able to help but forgot how much he did help her before that. Very touching to read Arnav and his mother's interaction after their visit with the kids. His mother can notice the change in him - will she accept Kushi when it's time to?