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Viji

@-Viji-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Ah...Another awesome update frm u👏👏
Khushi...Such a strong girl she is...even though with less means,she making food for kids just for their happiness👏And she is nt even taking credits...Superb...Loved it...
She called him Annyav😳Awww😳
Changes in Arnav's beahviour...Can't wait to read more😳

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

THE TRAMPLED BUTTERFLY ROCKS

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

PLZZZ MENTION D NEXT UPDATE DAY NAAA ... Plzzz 😊 😳

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Poojaagarwal394
PLZZZ MENTION D NEXT UPDATE DAY NAAA ... Plzzz 😊 😳

Tomorrow Afternoon. Indian standard time. :)

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: Agathe
THE TRAMPLED BUTTERFLY ROCKS
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Aww... Agathe! You rock!🤗 I'll be waiting for your comments after your exams are done.

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Tomorrow Afternoon. Indian standard time. :)

Okkk thankuuu ur updates are really lovely i may nt cmnt first bt i read ur update on dat day only 😊 😳

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Rachel, you are back!! And i didn't know!!

And i can't describe how glad i am to see yet another FF from you.

Read all the chapters till Chapter 13 in one go.

Kushi and Arnav are childhood best friends and they were estranged because he couldn't protect her; even though she doesn't know that he witnessed the trauma that she had to undergo. Now after 15 years, when they are faced with one another it seems that there was no gap of 15 long years.

I liked how you build the characters. I especially loved Dadi, she is so compassionate and very perceptive. The bond she shares with Kushi is one of its kind. I am truly intrigued by RK. He seems to realize the connection between Arnav and Kushi and is trying to help them come more closer!! That bit really astonished me. May be because he had initially tried to flirt with Kushi and seemed a lecher. It is only 13 chapters..and you have sketched Arnav and Kushi brilliantly, especially how Arnav's outer rigid self is breaking and he is changing for good with small gestures to those around him. Which mother wouldn't want a hug from their son and him taking an interest in them was really heart-warming.

Rachel..once again thank you for writing and giving us an opportunity to read..I have been a fan of your works, especially i love your Mirage.

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Once again it is through Khushi that Arnav realizes that he needs to count his blessings. It happened even when he first met her. Waiting to know what is it that he has decided upon, how does he plan to right the wrong of the past.

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diya09

@diya09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#489

again u hav baffled me with ur update. again I agree with u when u said we can not actually change self centered people... :)
loved your khushi. even if people like khushi are sometimes treated as doormats, its they who does the magic of menting broken hearts or matters. At most times they never comes to the limelight. I loved the contrast of their character when khushi gave all the credit of her good heart to arnav, he just couldn'nt stop himself from feeling crowned. that was a perfect realistic picture.

in your story eventhough arnav is the king or prince in reality Khushi is the queen of hearts. arnav is like a bee pulled to the flower. hope naina will b happy about her discovery.

loved how you made khushi's smile broader to the children than to arnav. you gave a beautiful glimpse of true happiness in that scene. I always felt that when a true love filled relation gives u the strength and support to ur mind, true happiness comes when we step out of ourselves and try to give its multiple in return to this world or nature.

You made me the lazy head,to write a comment. keep going.

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#490

I'd gone out of station and missed out on chapters 9 to 13. *slaps forehead*

Nonetheless, the way the story is progressing is pretty interesting. The quality of writing is very good. Keep up the good work! :)

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