The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 81

i blve dat arnab 'll nt do nythng

Jenny, I love your Arnabji. Bas.

"Men who delude themselves to believe that they see a woman in a child" - when Arnab wrote this in his journal not so long ago, I hoped that he will not fall into that category of men. So inspite of his daemons forcing him to see the woman that Khushi is transforming into, Arnab is holding true to his beliefs and refusing to accept Khushi as his wife yet. How does that affect the young teenager Khushi?

Arnab's father is the quintessential father of that class of the society in that era. And yes he is right...the easy lifestyle that Arnab has now comes with a price...the price is acting against his conscience...But hey, isnt that the situation even now?

Loved that little conversation Arnab and his mother had about Khushi's doll :)

Unresed here :)

i felt helpless just like khushi after reading this update.

before reading a bengali book "Chokro" by sirsendu mukharji i used to dislike arnab. there the protagonist's father married a girl of 10 when he was 25. the writer depicted their luv story so beautifully that i hav fallen in luv wid him. he was a father brother n frind for that child like girl. he became hubby for her much later when that girl was ready.

i see him in this arnab n her in khushi.both r strong n sensible.

but the last para broke my heart. hope somebody puts sense in him. if he really does that then i ll hate him BAS! but i know he wont!

ok...enough of my bak bak! awsome update 😃

for starters i hate the fact that it is an ss j i wish it was an ff i know am being unfair i feel like this is going to dominate and stand out in all the work its beautiful its got the intense brooding arnav whos grey which is real and kushi seems innocence personified am just amazed by the story already pls continue soon i am super excited for the coming chapters its got the beauty of the old world charm

liked first half of the update specially mango garden scene. aww khushi bossing to her dear BIL by taking her relationship name. so cute...

arnav fighting with his father for the rights in the society... but after that he broke my heart... he has no righg to blame poor khushi its his mother who send her to his room. why hd said all those? 😭
poor khushi when she asked how to become a women 😭
n last part 😡

I just loved the little girl who wanted her little doll to play with…Loved the way she protected Pranab from Arnab by tell him that she wanted the green mangoes…..loved the way she blackmailed Pranab that she is his elder brother's wife and he has to obey her order….but felt bad for Khushi when Arnab spoke to her badly…I can understand actually he is protecting her from himself….what a character you have shown Jenny.

You have captured the essence of the time period beautifully…whether it was Arnab's frustration at his inability to go against his father or his attraction that he sees growing in him for her….You are doing a marvelous job of portraying the true state of affairs during that era…where women in general don't have any identity of their own….they are just a person whose has only two roles in their life one to run the household smoothly and second to keep their husbands satisfied…..Very well written dear….Waiting for the next updated eagerly….😛

I just can't digest the fact that he would go to some courtesan to seek bodily pleasures. It would make him just like his father. It might be possible that men those days visited such places very often but you did mention that Arnab is not a typical young man. He's different with his different views and I guess he's a man with morals. Even if he thinks Khushi as a child I don't believe he would betray her after being married to her. Not accepting this is a whole lot different thing and I know it's too early to name it even as attraction. But his inner conscience would not let him do this. I'm pretty sure.😊

Now coming to the update, I would say it was wonderful as usual...👏 You have penned it down so beautifully that every time I read this, I feel that I've come to those days. I've visited Kolkata twice, so it helps too. Arnab's mother might be a spineless women in his house but she is shrewd. It's lovely so see that easy camaraderie between Khushi and Pranav. At least she has found someone to spend her time with. But it's nothing to worry about, right? I really do wonder if everything will start with physical attraction or id Khushi would start doing her wifely duties as she is so determined now.

I just loved it. So so beautifully written.❤️❤️ Can't wait to read the next part...

UPdate ASAP..😊😊