The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 79

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Posted: 12 years ago
I know Arnav didn't mean what he said but his parents are really getting on my nerves as well. However, Khushi doesn't need Arnav's anger either! His mom really needs to step aside and let the two of them come together on their own

I understand why Arnav feels uncomfortable with the idea of being attracted to Khushi. It's normal he is a man and I praise him for actually not losing his self control. I hope Arnav doesn't go all the way with the other women even thought he would never tell Khushi to begin with
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Posted: 12 years ago
There's so many things going on in this story. We are like a fly on wall of the haveli, catching glimpses of Arnav's political fight, the tension between father and son, the expectations of being a child bride heaped on Khushi by Thammi and by Arna's mother. Add to that Khushi being just a child, acting like a child, Arnav wanting her to remain a child, but noticing that isn't going to happen for much longer...
And now...a prostitute??? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
is a frustrated arnab going to go to a courtesaN!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! this was superb...how come u write so beautifully blending perfectly with the old times? so arnav is gradually but vry slowly noticing the changes developed in his young wife...maybe he's even getting some form of an attraction...this one is at present just an physical attraction if any..waiting to see how the bond develops betwn the two..so far khushi has acquainted only with pranab in a carefree way, but her relation with arnav has so far been quite cold..the last part didnt quite go well with me..i really really hope that he returns back home..though the chances are very less.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...could really feel the turmoil in arnab but I felt so sad for khushi...even though I feel she needs 4 more years before she can be someone's wife...I hope Arnab is not going where I think he is going...loved it!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, that chapter was great! I am glad Khushi has People become, who will keep her happy!! Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have been waiting for this update for so long and it was absolutely fabulous. You write so vividly and in such detail that I could visualize the events as if I am watching a movie.

I could empathize with Arnav's inner struggle as he comes of age in is time, caught between the shackles of who he is and who he wants to be and constantly reminded of his obligations and expectations and who he is beholden to...for the privileges he has.

I loved the mango orchard incident the best. Khushi and Arnab both were brilliant...she showing her impishness and devilry and him being amused by it.

The last part was so disturbing to me because regardless of the age and her readiness to be a wife, at the end of the day, that was still Khushi's husband seeking out another woman for his satisfaction...something that is a huge issue for any woman and yet...this girl child does not even know about all that stuff...wonder which she would have preferred had she been given a choice...to be a wife now or to have her childhood and share her man with another woman...and yet in Arnab's defense, he is an adult who is trying to spare his child wife...

This is deep stuff...
Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just found it this is really good
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a question to thammi from Khushi, how to become a woman?felt sorry for the little girl in her , she so young to understand what is needed of her by her husband.

As for Arnav pls send him to that alley. hope Khushi's teary eyes hunt him and stop him from commiting anything or even stepping to that place for that matter.

Fabulous chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such n intense update.can't wait for next part...ArShi one wants to get away nd other wants to get close.arnav's midnight rendezvous though practical somehw doesn't go wits d idealistic thinking of his.plz continue soon

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