The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Such an unique story plzzz continue!

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momoahmd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

sigh...beautiful...
jst perfect...its such a sweet story...
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thnxxx 4 pm...

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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loved this sweet, innocent and angelic khushi! i just hope this transition of her life goes on slowly! she is still a child but still expected to behave as a perfect wife! i just think that arnab's mom should take khushi's age into consideration and be a little more lenient towards her!

arnab is so gentleman and the oath he took to safeguard her childhood even from him was so heart touching!

super eagerly waiting to see how the bond between these two will develop.

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sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

That was an Amazing update...
Khushi s so cute Nd Thami s so sweet...<3
Bt I dnt like d way Arnav's mom behav with her...
Khushi s too small 2 take responsibilities...
Lovd this update...Cntinue soon

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nee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

wow jenny another of ur historical stories, i simply loved it

the era only made me cringe where there is war its always hurtful n dirty

the child bride khushi she is damn cute the way she talked about her SIL was grinning too here and thami surely will always protect her but arnav mum will surely create pproblems that's for sure

coming to arnav,even though he married an 8 year old girl he atleast has the sense to protect her childhood,

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sulu_123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

I am really loving this story.

You have etched out arnab's character so well. Intelligent, forward thinking, young man full of idealism.

Loved how he suddenly felt protective towards khushi. Guess the little imp will befriend him soon. Oh the innocent one thinks being a good wife means giving her husband a good oil massage and cooking and sewing buttons for him. So cute !

Would love to read how their equation slowly changes. But however are you going to achieve it in just 4 - 5 chapters ??

And I must say you are describing the 20's era so well ! Those were the days little girls were married off, sometimes to men who were thrice their age.

Khushi is lucky, her husband is a young man who is so mindful of the fact that she is just a child.

But one thing, are you going to throw any light on his first wife, who's dead ? I get a feeling that his marriage with her wasn't consummated ?

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YaSha0512

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Fab update
Poor khushi
No child should miss out on her childhood
Just hope once she grows up prop Arnav accepts her as his wife
even though Arnav doesn't like the idea of having a child bride it will really hurt khushi once she's older if he ignores n denies her
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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Seethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Beautiful update !!! I'm sure Arnav will definitely going to fall in love with young Khushi ..
It's really painful to see a kids's childhood being snatched away .. and Arnav too realizes that but pressed due to unconditional traditions ..

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musa khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP
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*edited*

Apologies for the delay!

And now to the update! Wonderful Jen! Seriously! You have taken something up that a few would even consider doing! Many might think its a sensitive topic but the essence is really the major dosage!!
I love the fact I'm a part of this wonderful story!!!!

And my gawd thami changed all of a sudden! I thought she was sweet and not the usual mil! But turns out true colors fade away!

And when I read that brotherly concern I was like oh gawd please no this is wrong but in reality actually its nice! I mean okay I sound weird but since Arnav is the only forward thinking guy in the era I kinda understand!

And the last parah was the best!

Cheers

amazing love it