The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Finally managed to read it😃

Loved how you have written about the medieval times in India.

I felt like I am reading History again. But this time it was way to interesting, which as a subject I hate it😆

Pre-Independence Era, now that comes completely different story from your side.

I read the few starting chapters of TIH. There also maharaja stuff was there na?😕

Arnav married to 12 year old khushi? Child marriage?

Not that I don't want them together, but anyways!

I am already in love with the story, update next super soon ^_^

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BlueAngel20

@BlueAngel20

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

First of all I am a bong so I am loving the chapter to the core.

You story reminded me of the stories by Rabindranath Tagore.

I have started loving Arnav Basu mullick like anything.

Khushi is a small girl of 12 and her full family died in Cholera.

She is coming to her sasural

I would love if you have used " Sanka Pala " rather then writing Red White Bangles as Red White bangles can also symbolize " churdha " as you have used the word " Thami" for grandmother. It's sounding so good..

very nice FF

👏

PM me please

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

when are you updating again? 😳... Loved the start want to read more... pls cont soon😉

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Human being,apparently

@..mrinalini..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

You have done one helluva job here😃

The way you have depicted the Bengal aristocracy or the 12 year old child bride hanging onto her rag doll for an emotional support demands adulation and quite deservedly so👏It was almost impeccable.And as a Bengali..I'm glad and flattered at the same time that you chose this subject for your FF!!

A first chapter..extremely well written👏⭐️

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

prologue
nice...
so Khushi is Arnav's wife?

part 1
nice start...
Arnav's Dad is disgusting...
but Arnav is strong...
Khushi is Arnav's second wife?
cont soon dear...

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Jenny, it is fabulous...just great...I was sad that Als was ending but I am glad now that you started this superb new series.

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MAS_5253

@MAS_5253

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

wow superlative !! u v just did It again m beyond words ...everything is perfect acc to dat era d poverty d richer wants to remain rich d age difference btwn d leads its a lil sensitive issue but it was true cant deny d facts do i need to tell u again dat m a fan of ur writing cntnu sun n do pm me looking frwd for d story

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

BEAUTIFUL...Loved the feel behind the chapter. And what makes it more beautiful and mysterious is the historical background. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Btw does TS mean a Three shot? So the story ends in 3 chapters :( Oh no, I was hoping for a little longer story. Anyway, looking forward to the next update.