The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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gmsk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

W A I T I N G P L E E S

U P D A T E S O O N

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Jenny.a very big sorry for the late comment.
And about the update i cant even begin to explain how beautifully u have written it.the setting,desi arnav everything is magical.cant wait for the next update.

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IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Teaser for chapter 2

The Sun was slowly sinking in the horizon and the well sculpted figure of Arnav made a striking picture silhouetted against the myriad shades of the sky at dusk. His face was somber and contemplative as he thought about the painfully disappointing progress of the movement, whose initiation had been the sole cause of igniting the fire of the 'cause' in his young heart.

He didn't hear the faint rhythmic, chiming sound of silver anklets approaching him from behind.

"Arnab ji", said a sweet, child-like voice from behind him.

Arnav turned around slowly to look at her. All he saw was a child, anxiously looking up at him, with the innocence in her eyes colored by the shades of the twilight.

"Yes", he said, noticing that she was holding something behind her back.

Khushi's lips were quivering ominously and in a flash, long tears were pouring down her face..

She brought her hand forward to reveal what she was hiding. It was her doll again, Arnav noted.

"Ma wwants to get rid of my doll, because I'm mmarried now..", she said with her breaths shallow with emotions.

"But I don't waaant to", she broke into a miserable sounding, high pitched wail.

Coming up on Monday

Love you all,

Jenny..:)

Edited by IPK007 - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Res for teaser...

Poor Khushi, the only companion and comfort she knows...I feel for her...waiting...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

I cannot wait any longer, and you say Monday! And that too after this teaser.

Zaalim Jenny 😔

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crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Oh dear! It must be so difficult for khushi...her doll had been her companion when she had no one...

And her sharing this just proves the trust she bestoes on her husband...her arnavji, that he will be able to help her get out of this situation...aww...

Cant wait!

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

wow great teaser jenny

waiting eagerly for sunday and Monday -

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Don't tease us anymore Jenny ...

waiting ...

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Jen sigh!

What a touching teaser!! She instinctively runs to her husband with her problems in life... Awww that was so sweet & sad at the same time... Poor girl who is just a child & supposed to be playing with dolls is married... 😭 Hope her husband keeps the doll in his safe keeping & allows her to play with it whenever she needs it...

P.S. What happened to Arnab babu?? Arnav ji isn't bangla... 😉

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago