The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
I was waiting for this story...😊 loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really like the character .. it has realastic touch ..

also d setting is good Hysterical, also child marriage , getting younger marrie if elder die all this old traditions are shown...

i was just thinking About Khushis Age bt a leap or something will mend it well i guess ...

do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice one

I know a lot of people might think 13 years is a big age difference
but in another 6 years Khushi will be an adult

An then Arnab/Arnav may notice her

Actually my parents age difference is 13 years and they got married in 1970
in an arranged marriage (We live in Trinidad, W.I. and not in India)

And they both are happily married after 43 years of marriage
My dad is 77 and my mom is 64

so guys don't think this happened only in the 1920's

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Posted: 12 years ago


jenny dear it was a doll
so what do u think of the foto of khushi
i hope arnab give khushi education so that they both can be partners in futur
dont make khushi some house wife
love it
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anera thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh jenny dear iam always honest when i comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
mm... i am loving the way it starting...
update soon...jenny! ! !
thank u for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the starting. Seems very interesting. Waiting for more. Pls cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

The way you put the words in the form of story is excellent.

Looking forward for brilliant updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I P K BOND...A GIRL AS YOUNG AS YOU WRITING ABOUT THE

PRE-INDEPENDENCE TIMES N PICKING UP THE MOST SENSITIVE

OF ISSUES IS COMMENDABLE

YOU NEVER SEIZE TO AMAZE ME WITH YOUR STRONG HOLD

OVER THE FANTASTIC STORIES THAT YOU PEN DOWN

WITH SO MUCH FEEL DEPTH N INTENSITY

GIRL ..EVERY TIME I MAKE UP MY MIND TO QUIT THE FORUM

I COME ACROSS SOMETHING AS AMAZING AS THIS N THEN

IT BINDS ME TO THE AWESOME TALES OF PAST PRESENT

N FUTURE BY YOUNG N CUTE GALS LIKE YOU

N I END UP MUMBLING ''TERE MERE BEECH MEIN KAISA HAI YEH

BANDHAN LUV SHUV TEY PYAAR PURANA MAINE NAHI JANAA

KAHIN NAHI JAANA ''

THIS AWESOME TALE SPREADING OVER THE BACKDROP OF THE

MOST SENSITIVE TIMES OF ''F F F'' [ FIGHT FOR FREEDOM]

IS CREATING A SENSE OF PATRIOTISM N A CALLOUS DISLIKE

FOR THE 'OH SO SILLY' TRADITIONS OF THOSE TIMES

THE HEART BREAKING N SAD TRUTHS OF THE TIMES WHEN

WE WERE GOING THROUGH A TRANSITION.. A DARK PERIOD

OF ENSLAVEMENT CHILD MARRIAGE N UNSETTLED MINDS

OF THE YOUTH THAT WERE SHOUTING HOARSE INSIDE THEIR

TORN MINDS FOR FREEDOM N RIGHT TO HAVE ''RIGHTS''

A CHILD MARRIED TO A 25 YEAR OLD FREEDOM HUNGRY N A

BIT OF A REBEL LAD WHO HAS THE COURAGE TO DREAM

N THINK OF A FREE INDIA ,LIVING WITH A FATHER BOUND

TO FALSE LIFESTYLE N A TYPICAL ''VOICELESS'' MOTHER

IS GOING TO BRING A FRESH N PATRIOTIC VISION OF TIMES

THAT WE NEVER GOT TO WITNESS

GIRL I SALUTE YOU FOR THIS FRESH TALE -A TOTAL CONTRAST

TO THE ENDLESS LOVE ''LOVE TALES''

LOOKING FORWARD TO GO THROUGH SOMETHING THAT HAS

ALWAYS FASCINATED ME ''F F F'' TIMES

THANKS N HURRY UP BEFORE I LOSE MY PATIENCE N ANNOY

YOU😛


KKKA


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