The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 38

This is absolutly brilliant Jenny :)
I love dis pre-independence setting.
Huge admiration fr Arnav fr standin up fr his ideologies against his feudal father.
Arnab as a doc n a patriot is a great combination.
I guess He inherited his genes frm his Thammi surpassin his foolish father :D
Khushi..A lil child hanging on to her last hope.. it ws painful to read abt her. bt wsnt it lyk dat wid evry gal durin dat day n age..? :(

wwwooowww disss iss jst amaaazing :D

Excellent part

Can I gather Arnab's little bride and give her a big big smooch on her cheek? I love little Khushi already and the poor thing lost her family :( So little Khushi is Arnab's second wife :O Ok that was quite a surprise there ! :D

i just love your all stories plzzz update the next part soon

superb part

Awesome n very interesting n beautiful update!

wow lovely !!! i am huge fan of bengal literature and love to read it.. i don't know but i love stories with bengali background, the set up, costumes everything about them.. i felt so nice to read something of my favourite setting.. loved arnab and his thoughts about his motherland.. but can feel his pain to see his wife coming with a doll in her hand.. would love to see the progression.. loved chapter 1 to the core.. 😃

Wonderful start
but d age gape is so big...