The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 34

finally da first chap of dis periodic story was here...

amazing one..beautifully written..jst awsum..loved every bit of it..

love day way how u potray da lifestyle nd attire of people before independence..

love dis arnav who despite of a rich craved 4 da freedom of india..

love da convo of arnav nd his thami who understand him better dan his father..

liked the young Khushi sitting along with just her doll 'roopa' to go to her huband arnabji after lost her every dear one..felt really sad 4 her..poor soul..

so khushi is arnav's first wife sister..nd der is 13 yrs of age gap b/w dem..

luking forward 4 how things work between dem..

continue soon..

ps- after dis beautiful updt u deserve a standing ovation jenny...love u:)

Jenny- what a beautiful story!

hey jenny so good to see this series of OS & SS updated...

so it begins woo man
no really had been waiting for the same and now its here one is just speechless
so he married khushi as his first wife as her sister
am i making sense
but what does that mean for them
and i see that arnie is very different form his father
and thats what gets him into spates with him too
what role shall this child bride of his play in this matter i wonder
and what will that mean for them
khushi it seems could be the cool rains needed in his life
but what about her in this
she has lost her everything except for hubby dear

wow ..i m loving this bengali Arnab Basu Malick & his child bride khushi.

Hi Jenny!

I luv dis story...oh jenny di thnk u so much 4 updating it i was waiting since ages 4 it...ah finly 1st i c u did som chngz in prolouge 1st Arnav Basu Raizada is now Arnab Basu Malick well dis 1 is bettr den 1st wala bengali title aaya & poor khushi baby she lost all hr family has only hr hubz & i'm glad u chngd MS in2 shakha-pola(da red-white bangals) datz wht is in bengalis not MS...now 1st chp was awsom i luvd da thoughts of Arnab hez decnt n has passion 4 his country unlyk his dad...i luvd whn he ptd da ryt n i can undrstnd his mom dat tym wifes cudn't go against der hubz n shez too doing dat...thami said bout his 1st wife died n married his sis datz khushi i was wndring y derz so much age gap not dat it was ny less dat tym but still der diffrnc cmd unchrctisticly much now i got it...hez not happy bout khushi's cuming but i hope he doesn't ignor hr or somthing coz hez da only poor girl hav 2 hold on...now itz gonna b intrsting 2 c wht happnz...nxt chp soon :) #PS: I'm a bengali too lolz..:p

TS is not necessarily meant for Two shots..

Seriously yar u r a superb writer, ur all stores re dsplendid nd beutfully wrtten, nd ur this new story s also a gr8 start, as it seems to be very traditional nd beautiful, loved it too and waiting for the nxt part