KR SS: Arduous Relation last chap(page 23) pms ltr

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Hello people, I'm here with another new work of mine. I know you guys would be thinking that already she has 2 works to be updated and here she is with another work...but all I can say is "Aadat se majboor". It will have some 3-4 parts only. And I'll complete this SS and then update the pending works. Hope you all like it.


Chapter 1:


Kriya was lying on her bed thinking about her marriage. Kriya Ghai is a sweet, loving, and a superb combination of beauty with brains. She is the daughter of the richest business man Rajiv Ghai. She's getting married day after tomorrow, to her dad's best friend's son Sameer. Sameer Malhotra is a good friend of kriya. He is the son of Rishi Malhotra who is Rajiv's friend cum business partner. Both kriya and sameer were good friends and they decided to turn this friendship into marriage when sameer had proposed her. Kriya accepted his proposal because she thought she couldn't get a better life partner than sameer. Kriya lay on her bed thinking how her life changed. For her sameer was a ray of hope to move on. She met him three years back after she broke up with her boy friend whom she loved more than herself. Sigh! Even now some part of her heart does love him. She was so drowned in this break up that she started living a soul less life. It was then she met sameer. After he entered, her life had taken a drastic turn. Things were really transforming. Her step father who never spoke to her properly was actually caring for her and bestowing his love upon her. She was successful in forgetting her past. She couldn't thank sameer enough.



Her thoughts were broken due to the ringing of her phone. She had received a text message from an unknown number. She wondered who it could be. She was sure that it wasn't sameer. Again the questioned cropped up, whose number was it?? Putting aside her thoughts she read the message. It was written



Meet me tomorrow at Hotel Ten Star, in room number 502 at 11 am sharp.





She speculated again and again, but couldn't recognize this number. Why would someone, a stranger to her, ask her to meet in a room of a hotel? That's outrageous she thought. She felt as this person wasn't some unknown. At first she neglected the thought of meeting that person. But then the inquisition to know who it was, she decided to go there. Without any second thoughts she drifted to sleep.



*****'


"Kriya where are you going??" asked smriti her mom while she was secretly stepping out of her house, dressed up in a black knee length frock with mehndi covered hands.



"Uh mom, actually a friend of mine wants to meet me as she's leaving for US tonight" Kriya lied.



"Why don't you call her over here?? It's not correct for a to be bride to step out the house just a day before her wedding." Replied back smriti.


"I told her mom, but she says it's a little difficult for her as she's busy packing her stuff and is right now in a messed up stuff. She called me over her place, so that I could be of her help" replied while having her fingers crossed hoping her mom wouldn't object further.



Smirti thought for a minute and then spoke "Fine you can, but be back by 4pm". Kriya hugged her mom and replied "Thanks mom, I will". Saying this she zoomed off in her car. All through the drive her heart was thumping loudly'wondering who that person could be.

*****

Kriya stood outside the room number 502. She was quite anxious. Taking a few deep breaths, she rang the bell. But no one opened. The room was in the corner of the floor and the other rooms in that floor were empty. Again she rang the bell and this time the door opened. Letting out a breath she entered in, only to find the room completely dark. Now this scared her.



"Is anyone there???" She asked, but got nothing in reply. As she entered further, the door behind her closed and a voice spoke "welcome honey". It was heard one. This voice was similar to someone. Soon the lights turned on and a man stood in front of her, his face covered in mask.



"W...Who are you??" She asked him.



"You forgot me honey?? How could you??" The man replied back.



After stressing her mind for few minutes she was able to recognize whose voice it was. "Rey?" she spoke rather questioned. "Finally, you remember me, I'm grateful to your universe ji for reminding you who am I" He replied back. She was hell shocked on seeing him after freaking 3 years.



Reyansh Singhaniya, a middle class guy who fell in love with kriya the instant he saw her. To his bad luck their first meet started with a fight between them and so she avoided him. He always kept an eye over her and would always protect her from all obstacles without give her a slightesr hint. He was protective for her. Eventually they became friends and then accepted their love. As the time passed by rey's protectiveness turned into possessiveness and then later he was over possessive for her. It some times irks kriya to the core. Even if a guys who unintentionally touches kriya, would not be spared by him. His over possessiveness and obession was the reason for their break up. It wasn't easy for both of them to overcome it.



"Why did you call me here??" kriya asked nervously. Lines of agony were clearly visible on her face.



"Oh! Don't get scared baatcutter'I thought why not spend some time with you my beloved ex girl friend" he replied back.



"You never contacted me in these three years then why all of a sudden today?"



"To seek revenge from you and your dearly loved father"



Her eyes widened. What did this guy mean? And what kind of revenge he's talking about?? All these thoughts were roving in her mind. "Oh baby! Don't stress your mind too much." Saying this he scooped kriya in her arms and placed her on the bed and he himself lay beside her. He snatched her mobile from her hands and switched it off. Terror struck against her face as she understood what he meant. She looked at him with imploring eyes, but nothing affected him.



He got over her and started planting kisses on her neck and shoulders. Tears started trickling down her cheeks. "I'll give you how much ever money you want but please let me go" she requested him.



"Money?? Honey I've got a good job which can earn me lots of penny, so who wants it?? Me?? Nah!! All I want is you, my chocopie" He said slyly.



"Rey please don't do this..I'm getting married tomorrow" She requested him. "Aww sweetheart, I know and that's what I want. After knowing that you've lost your virginity to your ex boy friend no one would marry you honey. So, you have two options, either you surrender and enjoy it or I will have to force you'The choice is yours" He spoke with a crooked smile.


She started hitting him with her legs. Anger welled up in his eyes and he caught her legs together and placed them under his such that she would not be able to move them.



"Fine..you want the latter to occur'I don't mind'I so pity you...if you would have surrendered then I would have given you utmost pleasure such that you would carve for more...but but but...be ready to visit the hell Miss.Ghai" He with a wicked grin. He feverishly started kissing her and leaving hurtful hickeys everywhere. Kriya was crying bitterly but nothing mattered to him.



"I was right'I was so right'you were, you are and you will always be an animal, a demon, a monster'you can never love anyone one'You never loved him. You were just obsessed with me and since I broke up with you'you're taking a revenge of it'" Kriya spoke with rage and hurt mixed in her voice.



"Dare not you judge my love" He spoke with his eyes full of fury. When she questioned his love, it raged him even more. Kriya got scared on seeing him in this state. Giving her a last look he ripped off her clothes ruthlessly and hungrily kissed her all over. His hands roamed and wandered over every inch of her skin. His fondled and pinched and kissed, sucked her sensitive parts. He nibbled on her curves, making her cry not out of pleasure but out of pain. He entered inside her with a great force. Without any pity on her, he literally tore her core apart. Kriya screamed in pain but it all fell on deaf ears. He literally raped her. When he was done he, he forcefully kissed her lips and lay beside her. Kriya sat there grieving over her luck and weeping bitterly. She was worried about her wedding. She blighted rey in every possible was as well as cursed herself too for coming over here.



So, hows it??

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EDIT: guys, tomorrow my results are going to be out and I'm hell tensed. I've the next chapter ready, so if my mood is fine you'll get the update tomorrow itself else..keep waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX


Chapter 1: pg 1


Chapter 2: pg 8

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

me 1st😃

mindblowing start re😳

y s rey like this😲

can't wait for d nxt part😊

continue soon🤗
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg manu !
W*F was dat yaar.
U cnt show rey like dis.
Damn !
Bt jo b ho I loved it loads.
Sachi !

Do do do update really soon.
Kal hoga toh aur b acha.
Thanks fr d pm.
Me waiting badly fr d update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept , Kriya is rich instead of rey...!
Plz pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do check the post, edited again
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res for me Done


rey 😡😡😕😭

nycupdate


update soon next chpter 👏👏
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god I can't bear uh a harsh relation of kriyaansh 😭
But the writer has written it really well... Good job do continue and pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u should have shown rey as this... for that i hate it...
and he literately behave with kria in bad ways...
continu soon and pm me...
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:o

still in shock




waiting for next update

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