THE HIDDEN SECRET - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice..
want to know more..
did khushi and arnav had a child marriage???
continue soon..
please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
I'm continuing i was just pissed at the story not being commented about after being viewed
For PM'S please buddy me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Nice story
Do continue n pm me plz
Dont worry abt d like n cmnts u will get it as story will progree hope to see d update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
I'm happy i'm getting responses. her's next chapter...pls comment

CHAPTER 5:
A collective gasp was heard from the audience on seeing the couple.The couple who looked mindblowing yet very young.Infact too young to celebrate their 10th wedding anniversary.All the girls were busy drooling on the guy whereas the guys couldnt take their eyes from the pretty lady no girl clad in a beautiful pink lehenga.
Whereas kushis classmates were standing with their eyes bulging out of their sockets..It really was a comic scene.Sheetal and gang were just staring at her with dropped jaws and widened eyes.Shyam and la even tried blinking their eyes and pinching themselves to confirm what they saw.Payal couldn't believe her eyes.She just lost her control from seeing this scene for a moment but akash was quick enough to hold her whereas he himself was pondering on whether this could just be a figment of his own imagination.Geet anjali nd NK stood their without even blinking.It was not everyday that they witnessed the scene that had unfolded in front of them.Their sanding on the decorated stage with the spotlight focused on them was ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA in all his glory holding his woman that is Kushi Gupta no Kushi Singh Raizada.The audience slowly came out of their shocked state as soon as jiya started her announcement."Ladies and Gentlemen please put your hands together for this lovely young couple our dear Mr and Mrs Raizada aka Arnav Singh Raizada & his pretty wife Kushi Singh Raizada who are clebrating 10 years of their blissful married life.Lets wish this young couple who seem to have eyes only for themselves a long life ahead which is showered with love and blessings"
The audience slowly began to clap and soon it turned out into a loud applause.The lights slowly came and Arnav moved towards jiya to take the mic without leaving kushi from his hands even for a moment.He began in his Oh-so-sexy voice "Good evening ladies & Gentlemen i'd like to thank all of you who've come here to wish me n my wife and be a part of our happiness. Jiya has rightfully said that ours were 10 years of a blissfull married life.I know that most of you would be wondering when we were married as none of you were invited, i hope all of you must have realised that it has been 10 years of our marriage which was a family function which occurred at London back in 2003.I hope all of you'll enjoy the evening thank you and have a good day ahead"
Payal could not believe her years all these years of friendship and kushi had hidden such a big matter from them.Wait she had hidden her real name too.But for what .Sheetal and gang were surprised kushi gupta the "middle class girl" no Kushi Arnav Singh Raizada had not only turned out to be rich but also married for the past 10 years and that too to the only heir of the business of the worlds most richest man Aarav Singh Raizada. OMG all this while they were studying with Kushi Raizada who was the wife of ASR as the world calls him.The man who had reached the epitome of success at the age of 19,a superbrain a great singer and also a manupulative businessman in front of whom even a greek god may look worthless the heartthrob of millions the crush of many girls...

The dance floor was ready and couples started moving towards it a soft romantic song was being played .Arnav and Khushi were at the centre.Their love was litrally filling the whole room.The elders stood amazed at the love and understanding between such a young couple.Kushi and Arnav had eyes only for themselves. A pair of Hazel eyes were getting drowned in the depths of the choclate brown orbs.There was no distance between them.Arnav was holding his kushi protectively in his arms close to his heart to never let go.They swayed gracefully to the beats of the music the people around were just standing there staring at the couple.Arnav and kushi were unaware of the world around they were brought back by the loud applause.The night proceeded but the minds of many were overflowing with questions.Payal and aksh were waiting for a chance to confront their shi who was no more theirs .Yet they were not ready to believe that all that was there between them was a mere lie.All these years of friendship a lie...A lot of questions were to be asked...a lot off answers were to be given .With a determination the whole of kushi's gang moved towards the couple.The night was still young...



How was it from next update the real lovestory will begin.I'll start with the flashbacks.Pls ignore spelling errors because i've not proofread it i'm a lil busy.
Edited by annanyaleya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Nice part
Waiting for payal akash n khushi confrontation n yeah d flasbacks
Plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
wonderful part..
waiting eagerly for the confrontataion between the friends..
continue soon..
thanks for the pm
take care..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
seems 2 b interesting.
Plz add me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Amazing concept...khushi & arnie married at such a young age??????
Please update sooon.
And do pm me next time😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
wow amazing story loved it continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
hi evrybody
I can only notify you wen i update becoz i'm a newbie so cannot pm links nd ya thanks 4 da comments 😃 😃

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