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annanyaleya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Last time i started something i couldn't continue it due to exams.Here i'm giving another try.It's a love tale of arshi.Its mostly all lovely dovely but with its own cute twists and turns.

I'm not giving a proper character sketch u'll get to know ass the story progresses.

Pls pls comment.

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CHAPTER 1

Khushi Gupta (dats how the world knows her) a simple girl living with her mother and father in one of the upper working class regions of New Delhi was getting ready for school.She's a +2 student and studies in DPS.She wins the heart of all her teachers easily and is the apple of their eye,a lovely and beautiful girl,a nerd,a dancer moreover an all rounder.There was no programme in the school dat would be complete without khushi.She a quiet girl and has her own gang of friends who are obviously her type.Though she's very friendly some students always comments behind her back and that is what irritates her and they are jealous of her for being the school leader in spite of being a new student to class 12. But her smile is a mystery nobody knows much about her personal life other than the fact that she belongs to a well to do family but not that rich.So obviously the rich brats think she's not fit for their gang and nor does she care.

She enters her classroom on a normal day.She listens to all her classes attentively and sometimes tries very hard not to close her eyes during boring classes lest she hurts the feelings of her teachers .Her gang which consists of Payal Anjali NK Akash and Geet have their lunch together. They gossip and later after classes head to their tution centres in the evening after which she heads home and retires for the day.

During the lunch break one day:

Anjali:Shi (thats how her close ones call khushi) come on yaar its the last year of school get into a relationship yaar dont waste your chance.

Geet:I totally agree come on nothing has happened to us we are very fine in our relationships and you personally know it . Give a chace at least to one of your secret admirers.

Kushi: You know that i support you whle heartedly but for me i dont believe in teenage short term relationships.I will only settle with a person for a lifetime whom i'm sure i'll never have to break up with in life.You all know this condition of mine however open minded and modern i am.So please dont force me.

Payal is the closest to khushi and even though she's in a relationship with akhash from 8 std and khushi helped them solve all their fights and p[roblems she was khushis best friend and along with akash protected her from any kind of trouble.

Khushi and akash fights a lot.They differ in all their opinions because akash is a big prankster but at the end of the day akash adores his shi and loves her like a brother wich khushi isn't aware of

But one thing everybody has noticed about her is that though she is very friendly with boys she stays in her limits and though she supports teenage relationships of her friends she never consents to try out on. Even the boys who had crushes on her never approaches her because of her nerdiness(i dnt even knw if dats a word :P)

Thats it fot nw.I'll continue only according to comments and plese all types of comments will be accepted openmindedly be it gud or bad.If you feel this is utter crap please feel free to tell me I'm young and i'd like to learn from my mistakes .

INDEX

CHARACTER SKETCH PG 1

CHAPTER-1 PG1

CHAPTER-2 PG1

CHAPTER-3 PG1

CHAPTER-4 PG1

CHAPTER-5 PG2

CHAPTER-6 PG4

CHAPTER-7 PG6

CHAPTER-8 PG8

TEASER PG12

CHAPTER-9 PG13

CHAPTER-10 PG13

CHAPTER-11 PG15

CHAPTER-12 PG16

CHAPTER-13 PG18

CHAPTER-14 PG20

CHAPTER-15 PG21

CHAPTER-16 PG24

CHAPTER-17 PG27

VERY IMP NOTE ON PG32

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Posted: 12 years ago

I changed my mind here goes the character sketch.

CHARACTER SKETCH

KUSHI GUPTA: She's 17 .Lives in Delhi in an apartment .The only daughter of her parents who work in a MNC.Cute bubbly naughty studious talented polite.She acts a lil over pampered, but she's very understanding a good student to her teachers best friend for her gang mates.Payal is her best friend from class 8.Loves to fight with Akash but still adjusts with him for her bestie.She doesnt hate him now.Nobody knows much about her family but think she has working parents.She came to India only when she reached class 8 nobody knws the details be4 that they think she was studying in some school in ooty.She keeps a lot of secrets and nobody is a ware of it.

PAYAL SHARMA:She's kushis best friend.She knows evry small secret of kushi but is unaware of the biggest one.In a lovely dovely relationship with Akash.She more like khushi,gets angry quickly but is very protective of kushi tries to keep her out of all possible troubles.Doent know about kushis life before she came to DPS.Loves akash.Knows about khushis dislike of akash.A quiet type of girl but becomes a jungli billi when needed.Her parents are doctors they adore Kushi like their own daughter and loves her too.

AKASH CHOPRA:Kushis enemy and her bestie payals boyfriend.Fights a lot with kushi and had hated her be4 but then as he falls in love with payal understands kushi's nature and now loves her like his own sister which he never had but never showsit out but payal knows it.Wants to protect his shi and paayals from all troubles.His parents are NRI's and his bro studies in MIT.He's a big prankster and always acts as if he is trying to beat kushi in studies.

Geet NK and Anjali are kushi's friends they belong to well to do families like payal akash and kushi but they are too playful but they study.Kush does not share any emotional attachment with them they are just her friends.They are not much important in the story.

Sheetal,La and Karan are members of the spoilt gang they are bad in studies but are very popular in school.They are jealous of khushi for their own reasons.They try to make sarcastic comments on kushi but kushi always gives them a tit for a tat.

This story mainly happens in flashbacks but i promise you it will not be boring nor is it a +2 love story for the rest wait and watch and ya dnt worry Arnav will enter when flashbacks start.

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ssr565

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice.. So is Arnav Akash's Brother?? Update soon

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annanyaleya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Dnt get confused akash is not related to arnav.Infact dey dnt knw abt him

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CHAPTER 2:

A normal day @ school (OCT 2013) during recess break:

Sheetal: Hey guys y dnt we go to london after our xams nd have fun 4 a week ?

Shyam: That's agud idea.I'm in

La: Me too we'll hav fun.

Many of them agreed then they saw khushi nd gang comming.

Sheetal: Oh poor kids they can't come hw sad!! she said sarcastically

La: Probably they wud never have gone outside india. Not all are as rich as us.

Kushi gives them a glare.Akash gets angry.He goes towards them

La: Heyy akash i'm sure u'l join us.

Akash: Y should i i've seen the whole of europe but unlike u we dont boast and went off from there.

Later the eacher entered the class with the board verification papers for their public exams.

Lisa ma'am :Here i'l call each of u pls come and give me your details so that we can send it today itself for registration.

She calls some students after that it was kushi's turn.

Lisa ma'am: Khushi Gupta.

Kushi obediently went there and gave her details and came back.The tacher started entering the details into the pc and suddenly "OMG Khushi" everybody turned to face khushi who stood up not knowing what the problem was.

Ma'am: Khushi how can you be so careless how will u write your exam?

Sheetal: Poor girl maybe she dint pay her fees and laughed.Khushi ignored this

Khushi: What happened ma'am

Ma'am :Khushi how could you not tell us.How can you write the boards without Indian citizenship??

All were stunned to hear this.

Sheetal La,Shyam,NK Payal and Akash :What Khushi is not an Indian citizen!!! R u joking ma'am?

Ma'am :Even I'm surprised.How come you are a British citizen? OMG you were one of our top mark gainers how'll you write the exam?

Khushi: Ma'am I'm a British citizen because I was born in Britain .No ma'am it wont be a problem i've got a special permission.

All gasp hearing this .

Khushi' gang :You owe us an explanation Khushi.

The teacher was releived and she left.Khushi was questioned by her gang and she just shrugged it off saying that whats the big deal i was born in london then we shifted here.Payal let it go for the time being

Akash:(to himself) Something is being hidden.I'll find it out

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CHAPTER 3:

Days go by...It's december time for farewell.Khushi was always known for wearing decent well covered dresses which were modern.The day before the Farewell all were busy discussing on the dress code.

Sheetal:The dress code will be western.I hope all of you know what a western dress is (sarcastically ) looking at khushi and payal.

All guys:Ya that would be nice

Akash(from behind )to kushi and payal :There is no way on earth i'm gonna let u and shi wear western.Dont you even dare to.

Khushi:(stubbornly) Go tell your gf who are you to oder me you Mr.I know-everything.

Akashi:Kushi!!!!(angrily) .

Kushi: Being the headgirl i declare that saree would be the official dress code.I hope all are comfortable.

La: You!! No way are we gonna wear that granny dress.

Kushi: You are free to walk out of it.Don't come to the farewell if you dont want to wear a saree.Not everything revolves around you.

So friends is there anybody else who has a problem

Everybody: No khushi in fact thats a good idea.

Payal: I suggest let all the boys wear a suit .Is it ok with u guys?

Guys:Yep we're positive.

They decided on the details and left.

The next day it was the farewell.All guys went flat seeing kushi in a beautiful black net saree.She was looking like a lil angel.

That day in the night Kushi was busy updating photoes on fb and her friends liked all her pics.

She gave a huge smile when she received a call from a "PRIVATE NUMBER" She finished the call and sleep.

Days go by and its the last day of exams.

Kushi and her gang had done exceptionally well in the exams and were sad to leave their school lives.All were sharing their vacation plans .La and Sheetal came and said bye and made fun of them by inviting them to a party in one of the famous hotels which khushi politely declined.They all hugged each other and left promising to be online on fb that night.

That night all of khushi's classmates were stunned to see a invitation from kushi on their homepage.

It stated "All my friends and well wishers are requested to join me at hotel Taj at 6.30 tomorrow in the lawn.-Love Kushi"

All were thinking what thisgirl is upto inviting them to Taj.Even her friends were clueless. Sheetal and gang were spellbound at seeing the invitation of the so called " middle class girl" nonetheless they thought to go and see what she's upto.

I appologise for the spelling i'm not in the mood to proofread.Sorry if the places i've mentioned are wrong i dnt know much abt delhi i'm from britain though i'm an indian

I rushed so that i can start the real story.Hope you liked it.Pls pls comment so that i can get a feedback pls or i'll stop becoz i'm feeling disheartened wid the low level of response.

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CHAPTER 4:

At the Taj Mahal Hotel Delhi Sheetal and gang and payash and gan and the rest arrive together.They reach the reception and see the board: Wedding Anniversary-Lawn 6.30-12.

They get surprised and assume that maybe its her parents wedding anniversary.But then La raises the doubt that was their in all their minds

La:When did kushi become this rich.Its a known fact that only the highest of the elite class can afford a party here.I'm getting confused.

Sheetal:Even i was thinking the same.Anyway lets see.

Payal to akash and geet:Whats happening.I'm not getting even a vague idea about all this.

Akash:Same here even i'm confused.Lets gothere and see it ourselves.

They move towards the lawn.The path was beautifully decorated with pink satin and was lighted by beautiful traditional diyas.Everything from the mat to the decoration yelled of wealth,perfection and beauty.They entered the hall which had only a few people all dressed in party wears.All this while kushi's classmated were spellbount they couldn't take their eyes of the decorated hall.

Then suddenly Shyam noticed the banner which read "Happy 10th Wedding Anniversary "

They wondered whose anniversary was it.It couldn't be kushi's parents nor did she have any siblings they were in utter confusion.

They took their seat around a table which was beautifully arranged and looked eagerly towards the well decorated stage as the lights were dimmed.The spotlight was focussed on a couple who were in the late 20's.The beautiful lady began:

"Good evening ladies and gentlemen first of all i thank all of you for coming here to share our happiness on the wedding anniversary of our dear friends.All of you'd be wondering who we are dnt get confused I Jiya and my husbant rey welcome all of you to this party"

Rey" You'll be wondering whose wedding anniversary this is No more delays lets put our hands together to wish our beautiful young couple Mr and Mrs Raizada on their 10th wedding anniversary."

The spotlight was shifted to a corner and a couple well dressed and looking etheral were entering the stage with their hands linked.The faces were not visible.It was a beautiful silhoutte of a well built man and a curvy and beautiful woman.The crowd was spellbount at the effect created by the entry of the beautiful couple as a slow romantic song played on the background even though the couple's faces weren't clear.Kushis friends were waching with bated breath to see the face of the couple who looked so perfect with each other even in the dark.Slowly the faces were becoming visible and a collective gasp was heard from the guests...

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