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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing one even I got surprised...
Plz pm me too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one.

I have read chapter 1 and character sketch.it was amazing.

Sorry my like button is not working so couldnt hit the like button.

Will tell u about other chapters when i will read them later.

Do continue.

And pm me if u send them out.

I m thankful to AGirlofGold for recomending this story.

Take care,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all, thanks a lot to AGirlOfGold for suggesting this story.
Read whole 5 chapters in one go, well written, loved reading it. Khushi's character s really interesting. Khushi is married to arnav for 10years, that was suprising. She definitly owe an explanation to payal. Wonder wat led to their childhood marriage and waiting for khushi's secret.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey! Nice story dear wld love to read more continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Here goes the next update,i'll be giving arnavs character sketch shotly.Thank you so much for the response 😃
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CHAPTER 6

After their dance Kushi and arnav were moving around and greeting the guests who were showering them with love and best wishes. Arnav didn't leave kushi's hand even for a millisecond. He went around introducing her to all his business associates.The established businessmen were always amazed by this young boy who was only 19 who was still studying but still could manage a multi billion dollar worth business. He was known in the business world for his extraordinary caliber and manipulative and calculative decisions.They all wished to have a son like him.But this arnav who stood in front of them was not a business tycoon but was nothing but a doting husband whose love for his wife could be seen by the way he was holding her on their 10th anniversary celebrations.The elder couple felt their affection increasing manifold towards this boy whom they already adored for the love and commitment they were sure he was showing towards this marriage which was surely a child marriage.All the ladies were pleased seeing the porcelain doll who was so loving and down to earth.

A little while later

Arnav:Kushi lets meet your friends.Don't worry I'll stand by you and I'm sure they'll understand us sweetheart.Lets get things cleared.

Khushi:Arnav I'm scared.I'm not worried about other's but what about Payal? And akash he'd definitely strangle the life out of me for lying.

Arnav:I'm sure Payal is very understanding and about akash '..do you think akki would take the risk of strangling the neck of his best friend cum family friends only dear wife .(chuckles) Come on shi lets go towards them.

Khushi: I'm most scared about the fact that I dint tell him that I'm your wife of that I was his bestie his Barbie doll whom he adored when he was small and probably adores even now.I'm in fo a great trouble for sure and u!!! you Arnav Singh Raizada has the guts to stand here and chuckle when I'm freaking out here.(glares at him)

Arnav: NO!!! Pls Mrs.Raizada dnt show others how u control me even after 10 years of marriage.I have a image and reputation to keep up. (winks) .I'll get you your favourite designer dress if u want please'''dnt get angry

Khushi melts seing his puppy dog face which looks so adorable and complete with that pout.

Kushi pulls his cheeks naughtilly for which she receives a glare but she pulls him towards her gang of friends.He knew how nervous she was as they were covering the distance.He sqeezed her tiny hand assuring her that all would be well.

Edited by annanyaleya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Nice update.
Waiting for how will be her friends reaction when they will introduce themselves😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For pm's pls buddy annanyaleyapms.I cannot pm links only notification can be sent 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
Arnav n khushi are so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Awesome update.
Arhi are so cute, loved their understanding. So akash s arnav's best friend and khushi's childhood friend, interesting. Waiting 4 d confrontation. Can u pm me ur updates?

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