Chasing Dreams 4 27B Pg119 NewSS & THd5 link Pg139 - Page 69

That was such a heartfelt scene, when she consoles him after he admitted how scared he was. Too bad the two of them are so deeply rooted in their individual ideologies- they're THE perfect match . I'm glad you've cleared the air about Anjali- it can be difficult to take a step back when you've been filling the position of an absent parent for years. I just hope Arnav gets better and soon, and without any long-term effects.

Haila! Luna got first res on CD?

Beautifully written.

What an intense chapter. I loved how you portrayed the scenes in the hospital. It wasn't a dramatic entry with Khushi running into the room, but a really calm approach. Admittedly I wasn't thrilled when Anjali wouldn't allow Khushi in to see Arnav, however as a his 'Mom' I get it. She's protective and it makes sense. I liked how you handled that as well. Glad that Nani was calm and accepting of Khushi.

Awesome!!! I loved the update... hope arnav gets well soon and all is well between them:)

I came across your story earlier today and since have been so engrossed in it that did not realize where the day has gone by. You have an amazing ability to keep a story going . I loved the way you built the relation ship . I absolutely cannot wait for more.

I love for such update dear...

This was a very well thought of and well written chapter! You kept the drama at a minimum and focused on what was important - which was praying for the recovery of Arnav. This was everybody's focus: from Kushi who matured super quickly and implored, no correct this threaten her Devi Mayya to make him pull through, to Nani who accepted her while praying for her grandson, to Akash for being the pillar of strength the family needed, to Payal for her quiet support to both Kushi and Akash and yes to mother hen Anjali for well looking out for her bro the only way she knows. I said this before this Arnav is a keeper, apologizing and showing his vulnerable side to her. Kudos to you for this brilliant update that could have turned all sappy but instead became a masterpiece on how family pull together in dire situations and how such potential tragedies makes one realize one's vulnerability and in Kushi's case what matters the most to her. Looking forward to the next update soon!

That was such an amazing update, very well written:) Hope Arnav recovers completely. Thanks for the update.