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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Oh the grief and Khushi's pain.. you have written it so well.. Nani shows her maturity and the person with good heart.. she was worried about Arnav's recovery more than anything.. she cared less about any trivial issues like how khushi's related to arnav and all that..

Anji needs to learn soon to stop interfering.. she is behaving like a mother.. who cares for no one but her son.. in midst harming him and the other person involved..

after seeing the condition khushi was.. anji had the heart to say what she said.. without knowing the whole scenario..

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

A very emotional update and so heart warming to read Arnav's vulnerability. Fantastic chapter and you wrote it exceptionally well. You brought out every emotion really well, just fabulous!

Edited by PhenoixTears - 12 years ago

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

It was an intense chapter...

Khushi's sorrow and guilt feeling after hearing Arnav's accident news is portrayed perfectly. Her hesitancy in meeting Arnav's family is natural .

Loved the way u described how Nani consoled Khushi.

And Arnav Khushi conversation was so intense ..It showed how they are emotionally attached . I was even able to imagine how Barun and Sanaya could have acted in that scene. That was awesomely written yaar. I loved it. No doubt it is one of my favorite chapter so far.

Hope u will update next chapter soon.

Edited by ramyarn - 12 years ago

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Silver_Stack

@Silver_Stack

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

OMG such a realistic update

Khushi's turmoil has been written beautifully...That's what happens in real life too...The pain and guilt which khushi is experiencing is quite natural and she blames herself for it...beautifully portrayed...

It's quite emotional to read...Hope Arnav recovers quickly with khushi by his side...

What's up with Anjali...😡...She should learn to let go...

Edited by hyd285 - 12 years ago

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Darshana

@vaidarsh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Hayeee...I cried n still M...people say i m emotinally strongg...Does it rllly true????...

Loved it...yaar...

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Very intense and emotional update...liked nani a lot...aakash stood for arnav and khushi overriding his Di...Anjali should stop interfering in her brothers lives...loved the last part...his vulnerability and her assurance...superb...waiting for part B

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

You updated so soon!😲

The emotions that Khushi experienced were described beautifully.

Arnav's vulnerability which he showed only to Khushi was touching.

👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

You described Khushi's plight over here so well.

This is how it feels when a loved one is suffering.

Nani is so kind and loving.

I sill can't stand Anjali. I know she has her own reasons but stopping Khushi from seeing Arnav is too much.

Loved the way Arbav could show his vulnerability only in front of Khushi. He needed her support the most in order to recover.

I am loving this story for two reasons K. One is the way you write about the two different cultures and their impact on Khushi Arnav and the dilemma Khushi faces between her values and her love.

The other is the medical aspect where Arnav is suffering and Khushi is there with him lending him physical and moral support.

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#699

It was so heart touching :( don't know why I was all teary eyed reading it ! So beautifully written and all the emotional upheaval was etched out strongly.

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

This update is suprisingly early!..
But welcoming! Afterall i wanted to know about Arnav!:D

from the starting itself khushi's breakdown, lack to react to anythng execpt thnking about Arnav! Her not being able to use the key and then her crying all through the ride!

Breaking down in front of all of them.. Blaming herself.. Feeling guilty! She loves him like mad! There is no other xplanation to this! Talking and praying to devi maiyya..!

Payal and Aakash are two ppl i adore the most! Holding on to each other! Supporting each other and evryone else around them!

Anjali's reaction and her actions sometimes prick a lot! Shyam is right, she shud stop interferring in the lives of her brothers! Naniji held up like an elder shud!

But Arnav's vulnerability in front of khushi and not being able to lie to her! His need to have her close!
To see her assurance and support plainly spoke of love he has for her! Hope all this gives him time to realise and access his feelings!;)