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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

This is b0th extremely beautiful and brillian, ign0re my grammer. This deserves n0thing less than tears fr0m the eyes of the readers. This chapter just t0uched the strings 0f my s0uls dear, this did s0mething t0 my heart, s0mething that is s0metimes bey0nd any explaination, s0mething that wants me t0 curl up and cry myself t0 sleep

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

awesome.. Emotional update.. Glad that arnav is fine.. Luve it.. And waiting for next update eagerly ..

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

I can't express my feeling in words after reading this great piece of writing

it was far more what actually I was expecting touched my heart

I loved it even more then love

excellent piece of writing

emotion that'd feel

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Chapter 26 Part A

"Someday you're gonna look back on this moment of your life as such a sweet time of grieving. You'll see that you were in mourning and your heart was broken, but your life was changing..."

Khushi surely means something to Arnav. The way he feels about her makes it pretty obvious.

"Sometimes life has a cruel sense of humor, giving you the thing you always wanted at the worst time possible."

Poor Khushi. Didn't even get to bask in her love for him.

But glad she made up her mind. Better then the torture shewas going through. Yes her way was wrong but hey, she is in love. It's justified.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Chapter 26 Part B

"Lost love is still love. It takes a different form, that's all. You can't see their smile or bring them food or tousle their hair or move them around a dance floor. But when those senses weaken another heightens. Memory. Memory becomes your partner. You nurture it. You hold it. You dance with it."

Moving on isn't easy and you have explained it so well. The urge is always there but one has to be strong enough to fight it.

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Awesome update that was 👏 the way u wrote khushi's emotions and her fear...wow...
The scene between Arnav and khushi bought tears...the way he said he is scared... 😭 Am sure this accident wil bring them closer and hope Arnav realises his feelings for her...
Nani supporting khushi was superb...
Such an intense update...waiting for the part B 😊

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Chapter 27 A

To see your loved one in pain is terrible. Knowing that you can't do anything to help them is so frusturating. An emotional chapter. I know how it feels because ive seen my Grand Father suffering. He raised me and was more of a father to me. It's just so painful to see them going through so much while all you can do is pray and hope for the best. One takes refuge in anything which offers comfort and hope. All you want to do is to take their pain and it's such a helpless feeling when you know that nothing is in your hands.

The best way to tackle this is to pray because only God promises miracles. If He gives pain then surely He will make things better.

Writing this comment just made me very emotional. Whoever is reading this, id request you to please say a prayer for my Daddy who passed away after a strong fight with his illness =)

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Thx 4 such a long update A sad but vry crucial 1 beautifully written esp their way of going through separation it was heart break 4 us also wats wrong with khushi why it z always abt her facts n needs does she ever think abt arnav (as 4 people in relation they do think abt their partners viewpoint) i know khushi z new to all dis bt she behave vry immaturely n flick her decision wn it comes to arnav if she had been honest to arnav be4 they wouldn't hv been suffering from d pain of heart break i always liked d maturity n professional level he sets bt his act with khushi wasn't appropriate bt i think it was a quick action of his pain hv to wait wat turn arnav's accident brings

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

loved this update...i have always seen and read about arnav as a strong man who doesn't talk about his fears...but this arnav is more real and ahh human i feel...

this is exactly the way a person feels when he has underwent such a traumatic accident and even difficult surgery..its a painful and spine breaking time even for the toughest of people...and i wish that no one has to go through this...

it was a difficult chapter to read for me too...i have recently seen a very close person to me undergo all this...not the accident but life threatening condition nonetheless...and believe me when i say who described the feelings of the family members, khushi and arnav perfectly...i actually read less and cried more while reading this...

awesome job done with this update...standing ovation from me...

continue soon

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#670

First things first... I love that song... brought back some memories... so thank you...😊

Loved the update especially the way you described Khushi's emotions... when someone you love or care about is in trouble, you tend to tell yourself to be strong and fight back but there are moments when the fear of losing that person or things getting worse creeps in but again you pull yourself up... this is a vicious cycle and anyone who has ever been in such a situation would understand it...

Anjali's behavior... Im not sure what to make of it... she is obviously a concerned sister but she needs to stop meddling... N i say this not just because she stopped Khushi from meeting Arnav but because when a third person interferes in a relationship, what those two people involved actually want gets lost in the process.

Loved it😊