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Posted: 12 years ago

NK too finds it odd that Shyam turning up at Circle-R so often! And NK's pertinent does it have anything to do with Anjali or Khushi makes Arnav wonder is everything so obvioys. Things do have a way getting around!

Arnav sells cattle at the right price whereas Shyam skips it and goes in the easy way to keep himself close to Anjali when Arnav is away! Is Shyam after the family holding Circle-R and Box-Lighting other than lusting Anjali?

Anjali and Khushi are on the same side as far as their siblings are concerned! Akash's continuous attraction to go to Box-Lightning is the butt of their joke.

Arnav has instructed for Khushi's safety and the stable hand Rusty in charge? Well after all, she is his shi'aad.

Well, Ela seems to be a good friend. Egging Akash all the way.

So Shyam hasn't met Khushi and doesn't know her yet. But this line is quite omnious.

They'd learnt their lesson, though, he thought with a grim smile. They wouldn't be doing anything to anybody close to Miss Anjali in the near future. Not unless he said so...

So he is getting ready to propose to Anjali! Doesn't Raizada matriarch get any bad vibes of Shyam???

So at the end of the day Arnav gets relaxed with his memories of Khushi at wigwam.

Thoroughly enjoyed the update and loved it.

Looking forward to the next update.

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly sorry for delay in comment...
read all updates in one go ..
loved it..
waieing 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both Arnav nd Khushi missing one anothr...
Nd Shyam missng Anjali...!!!!
So he lov her...
Nice update...Cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
aahhh loved both the chapters...
i m liking the pace arnav and khushi are getting into
u r really blessed with words writer :)
keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know u said tomorrow .. But bookmarking... I just love this story..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry madhu for late comments was out of town

Super update and both missing each other

Dil ko dikha, dil ki shakal ka koi,

Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi,

Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi,

Bukhaar hai, kyu beqraar hai,

Shayad yeh pyaar hai,

Pyaar hai shayad,

Jadoo sawar hai, naa ifteaar hai,

Shayad yeh pyaar hai,

Pyaar hai shayad,

Pyaar hai shayad..

Kuch khaas hai,

Kuch paas hai,

Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,

Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,

Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan

So cute and dunno whats shyam up to when he sees khushi

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Posted: 12 years ago
For chapter 11-

Her touch is natural to him. Her pain is his. Her kiss keeps him awake at night... Sigh... I had this goofy grin on my face reading it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

For chapter 11-

Her touch is natural to him. Her pain is his. Her kiss keeps him awake at night... Sigh... I had this goofy grin on my face reading it :)


Are you back?
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Posted: 12 years ago
For chapter 12-

The dream shows them each other as if telling them ab bohot hua, high time you accept what you mean to each other. Morning star, shikha and shiaad too.

You write a kiss like that? Main toh teri aur bhi badi fan ho gayi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Madhu... Aa bhi jaa... Aur saath mein shikaa ko apni shi'a ad ke pass le aa..

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