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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

awsm...
the updates were worth da wait for...
enjoyed reading every bit ov the writings...
plxxx continue soon...
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thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#652

For chapter 13-

Yours is the first story i started reading once i came back.

But now i can barely keep my eyes open. So all I'll say is All is well that ends well.

But I'll miss Arnav too... for a month...

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

awsumm update

loved it

thanks for pm

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

First of all apologetic for the delay….Brilliant as always Madhu!!!!

Shyam is carrying himself in front of Anjali and other Raizada is wonderfully.

But Arnav does not like him…

The description of how they are missing each other is superb…

The conversation between Anjali and Khushi is awesome.

Cheers for the PM.😛

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Double updates...made up for your absence...

Arnav and Khushi...both acknowledging their feelings at least to themselves for now...they are drawn to each other in all ways and at all levels...brilliant! I can feel their yearning for each other...she paying heed to his advice and staying safe!

Is the coyote Shyam?

Shyam he does seem to like Anjali or at least be attracted towards her...but he is a complex person...he realises Arnav has his eyes on him and he is suspicious about him and so trying to get into his good books and so I wonder if his neighbourly gesture has anything to do with Anjali ...knowing how her brother can influence her decision !

I am glad Arnav and Anjali have that talk and she values his opinion and hope she pays heed to his advice and not complicate matters and her heart further...

NK ever so reliable...glad he is around !

Shyam and Payal...oh they are such a contrast to the couple...this one is calm and the other tempestuous ...their love for each other is sweet and adorable the other two passionate and intense !

Anjali and Khushi are forming such a great bond just like sisters and now Payal too...it's lovely...

Even though Arnav and Khushi don't meet in this update they made their presence to each other felt...He feels her presence everywhere, as does she...!

Waiting for them to meet after what will be a long month !

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

For chapter 14-

Storm clouds indeed in the form of Shyam, be it Arnav's home or work. Shyam seems to be genuinely interested in Anjali but he's a shady character. Bas!

By returning Arnav's cattle he's just trying to get into his good books...

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Thanks for the PM.
Lovely update...I could visualize the stampede scene..very well described.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

For chapter 15-

Though i want Anjali to be happy i don't want it at the expense of Arnav's well being, happiness and prosperity. Yes I'm selfish that way.

Aakash n Payal... her family knows, his family knows, La and Aman know... inki toh life set hai :-D

Arnav and Khushi... you write their scenes so well. I literally sigh...

I so wanted a flashback about their actions after the kiss. Thank you for writing that.

I'm eagerly waiting for more chapters