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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

-Verrry nice !

A little bit of insight into Shyam's motivation ...he wants her ! An honest emotion per se , until someone or something crosses him that is . And then all bets are off , that much is evident . And Khushi is going to be his biggest cross to bear unless he decides to do away with her ...and this is where he will come up against Arnav and the resultant conflict puts paid to his plans for Anjali ...

What choice does he have , really ..?

And the little nugget abt ' the morning after the night before ' --- in a manner of speaking 😆----

Loved the little flashback ; the gentleness , the caring ...the implicit understanding of a new relationship , unspoken yet deeply felt ...loved it all .

Thnx dear for the pm

Oops ! Missed 14 , went straight to 15 ...

The Stampede : the power and the strength of the hoard as they go berserk , the Herculean efforts it takes to manage the stampeding cattle ... You made it all come alive .

Shyam is on a mission and he will go to any extent to curry favour with Arnav ...is Anjali going to turn mulish on Arnav abt Shyam ...

Loved the sheriff ...two strong , tough men in the same milieu and neither takes away from the other ...great characterisation .

Edited by annieK - 12 years ago

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

It's beautiful Madhu, read chapters 14 and 15. Thanks for the pm.

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Kushi is back up on her feet...and back at Circle R.Arnav finally broaches the subject of Shyam with Anjali...and I'm surprised that the men..Aakaash and Arnav are thinking on the same lines but Anjali feels differently...!could it be that Shaym is a different person with Anajali...and she is unable to see beyond what he is showing her.

So Shaym is reining in Rocky and gang and will unleash the when he feels the time is right. He will not hesitate to let loose even on Anjali...! As long as everything works as he wants till then it's fine...if not he will show his true colors...! Says a lot for his intentions towards Anjali. What I do not understand is what is he after...it cannot be only to bed Anjali...! So I'm guessing Shaymis the coyote...and since this vision came to Kushi...perhaps a warning for her and she will be able to recall at some point in the future...!

Shyam played his good neighbor card by returning circle R's cattle to them...since this time Arnav is also mustering Box lightining's cattle are they the ones that are missing...Shayam played his cards well but returned only Cirle R's cattle and is holding onto box lightining's cattle to used at a later day..?

I'm glad Arnav voiced his reservations about Shyam..at least Anajli wil not jump into any decision regarding Shyam.

Both Kushi and Arnav missing each other...awww...!

Now the meeting between Shaym and Kushi is left...wonder what will happen..!

Aakaash and Payal has gotten only as far as shopping...they need to move further...everyone knows they like each other...Aakaash next step...sweep Payal off her feet...!

I'm glad Aman is a strong sheriff...and does not mince his words...if Arnav were not there...I'd love,love Aman...very hot..!

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

How come I missed that banner of the chapter suena, the horn and hooves are slicing, the illusion in the eagle is stunning.

PS after updates I am so used to read the comments of vegidin and Rasgulla, for some reason both are missing :(

Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

For chapters 14 & 15:

Welcome back, M :)

What is with Shyam? He killed someone, has rowdies working for him, and is definitely fishy. But what he feels for Anjali and the kids seems to be true too. Now what is with the guy..H'm like you say, I will wait and watch :)

They miss each other! Awwie :D Now just waiting for the sweet sweet reunion :P Aakash and Payal are just so very sweet, its such a charming and simple romance. Makes me smile-sigh. What intrigued me the most was Khushi's dream. What was that about? Who's the helpless one?

Oh, I enjoyed reading that stamped in the storm scene. It was fantastic could really picture the huge herd of beasts literally locking horns. Brilliant :)

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Awesome updates...thanks for the PM

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Qwertyui

@Qwertyui

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Loved it awesome plz update and pm me soon :)

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Qwertyui

@Qwertyui

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Loved it plz update and pm me soon:)

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

beautiful title😃
awesome upd😳

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#640

Ohmygod! I can't believe I missed so much! Damn. But on the bright side, I got to read three chapters at one go.

Shyam is so shady, HOW does Anjali not sense it? Alright never mind. She's obtuse like on the show. How does NANI not sense it? And I wonder if how Shyam feels about Anjali will change when Khushi appears on the scene.

Akash and Payal are adorable. They are BEYOND cute. And I love how everyone knows about them and they still try to keep things under wraps.

And just like on the show, Arnav and Khushi (despite their blazing chemistry) are the secretive pair.

Although I guess the Circle-R people suspect that there is something amiss.

And finally Arnav and Khushi. Their love story is unfolding bee-yoo-ti-fully! I love how they think about each other and miss each other-- if they didn't it wouldn't be love, would it? And then Arnav's possessiveness is very in character.

I must mention that I really appreciate all the research you put in. Special interest or not, there is clearly a lot of effort put into this story! And it really pays off-- the imagery, the little details-- they really add to the reading experience.

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