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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..! 2 updates..?! awesome...

3 couples... 3 diff perspectives..

akash and payal's r/s is blooming... they are getting comfy arnd each other...sweet couple..


shyam and anjali... he has to tread carefully arnd her, knowing that he has to get into arnav's
good books first.!


arnav and kushi... absence makes the hearts grow fonder...
whatever it is btwn them, one thing for certain is that..
they care for each other...
and since arnav has acknowledged kushi as his wife,
he just needs to let her know...in HER language...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Absolutely wonderful update...so for Arnav and Khushi the absence has made the heart grow fonder 😳...waiting for the story to unfold 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was as usual fantastic!
But what does khushis dream mean? Was the deer mentioning arnav when he said, it seeks to harm the hepless ones??

And oh dear! I m stuck to that line, not unless he wishes them to do so...! What does that mean! On 1 hand, he needs anjali and he even misses the children..but that does not prove that he loves or care for them! And on the other hand he says ...ugh!

Alrite! I will wait to see how the story unwinds...

Ps- i looved the sweet and passionate memory arnav had!
Do update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
you were gone but came back with lovely updates😊
you would have to study to describe all these cattle rearing in detail
Arnav and khushi missing one another
Shyam never gives a good feeling
hope anjali is not the usual bimbo type
thanks for the pm
cheers

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful updts
wtz shyam playng at???
arhi missing each othr ... missed dr moments 2ghtr

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Posted: 12 years ago
She missed his smirk, his honey eyes, his lazy drawl, his husky voice. She missed everything about him

awww

loved the way they are both missing each other :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi. All the 15 chapters were highly entertaining.:-):-):-)
The backdrop of the story is vry interesting :)
i definetly dnt want Anjali to accept Shyamz proposal.. glad dat everyone r pretty cautitious abt him!
luking forward fr the meetin of Khushi n Shyam..! I hope he wnt go lusting over her. disgusting creep dat he is :-(:-(:-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Double uodate...all are aware about Shyam n his interest in Anjali..what is he ploting,something is sure there...Payash are too cute..all are know about them... Now our couples are missing each other... So Shyam didn know Khushi seems like,or is he oretending...why NK is eager to go there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES

I owe you a big sorry and a big thank you and most importantly, the biggest love ya <3 Be back asap !

*EDITED*

Firstly, Im sorry for editing this late..
and secondly, Im even more sorry for not commenting at all for so long, I have my reasons, but still I owe you a sorry eespecially when you've been mailing about all the updates ! And I so love ya for that <3 and thirdly , Howdi ?😃

And as for the way this story has gone, its just amazing !

Let me come to Shyam.. Well dont we always associate this one name with the devil, or well I would even say a not so smart cupid :p But i just wanted to bring out one thing. That one part where he says he wants Anjali, and even her sons, I dont know.. Is he genuinely in love with her and her kids or is it just for the reader's benefit that he's being all goody good now ? I cant make that out, and I guess I'll have to wait for the right answer.

Oh, oh and Madhu, I sooo love ya also for bringing Ela and Aman ! If you dont mind, will you think about writing an off-spin to how their story started ? Pwease ?? I mean all about ela settling in, and her and Aman ki prem katha.. I really wanna read that part..

And woman, your writing *bows down* you are just too good with the west wood styles I would say ! I used to love them, but the way you've written it on Arnav and Khushi, I really really have fallen for this age more .. the proof of it ? Well my dreams, I get dreams in cowboy lands and with horses all around...And Arnav-Khushi's story.. The way you've written it the last 14 chapters *hats off* I really really have no words.. Spell bound would be less too I feel.

But the main thing that I wanted to tell you was ... the dreams.. the way you write them, trying to get in a spirit an connect it ! I really really must say Madhu, that is one part I love and look for in each update, Especially when one is a fantasy fan like the HP league, anything like this makes me get hooked to the story even more ! And the talk that Nani has with the owl.. The owl guiding Nani with the pairs.. that was amazing..

And now this wait that Arnav and Khushi are enduring.. I hope this increases their love, It is increasing their love.. But some kinda warning bells ringing at the far corner of my mind tell me, that maybe, when Arnav returns, there is something dreadful awaited for him and for us... or maybe Im just thinking tooo much. But I love the wait as a reader, so Im ready to wait !

And once again, thank you so much Madhu for the msges all the msgs you've been sending despite my absence ! Love ya, and love this story more !
Edited by -Shobhu21- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaay double update both really good

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