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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Even without Kushi, I love this update. It is setting up the key players in motion and how they will each play an important role - roles that are intertwine with each other. I am not sure what to make out of Shyam yet, he clearly has been plotting something for a while - is it to get his hand in the land surrounding his or is it to win over Anjali Raizada? Can't make it out like Arnav and NK I am confused. Did he take the remaining cattles or is he simply returning those he found? One thing for sure, welcome back as I have been stalking this story like a hawk going though deprivation.

As soon as I posted the first part, you posted the next chapter and I was so glad that it had Arnav and Kushi in it even if they were not physically together. It seems they have made peace with each other, at least about the part where they accept the other one as their chosen one. The deer's parting words hav eme worried though. Who is the coyote? Shyam? Is the shooting piece going to be the secret between them? Will Shyam remember and blackmail Kushi and try to get his hands on their homes respectively? I am sitting on red hot coals trying to guess the coyote part . . . Pls update soon

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Res. be back in a while. Near and far indeed :)

Edited:

Apologies for the late un-res - busy weekend.

That was a lovely description of the storm - I could almost see the sand whirling in the air as the beasts ravaged everything in their surrounding, the scent of fear and anxiety for loss and damage almost real where I sat and read the update :)

The description of how they are both missing each other was also splendid - of all things warm and fuzzy - like the other "tame" love story that is unfolding between the doctor and the dress-maker

And Shyam - he is the maker of intrigue indeed!

Bring on more!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Brilliant and more...will come back and write!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Chapter 14:

There's something about Shyam; as a reader we know he has killed a person (and I'm guessing its Anjali's husband) but the way he carries himself in front of the Raizadas is marvellous. he seems to be serious about Anjali but I'm still wary, knowing that it could as well be a trap. But its heartening to know that Arnav sees the undercurrents of evil in him and is alert as well.

Loved the description of the storm, the resultant stampede.

My thoughts exactly on what NK thought...seems like natural calamities have come to the rescue of Shyam.

Chapter 15:

It was indeed a sweet moment for Anjali and Khushi to be talking about their brother ans sister respectively😊

Akash is head over heels for Payal, isn't he? I mean his riveting towards Payal and Payal alone despite the presence of Ela...

its an entirely different Arnav that we see when it comes to Khushi, the softening of him is so evident; looking forward to his return😊

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

I have seen the Patagonia mustering, it made me just keep my lip tight. Handling the animales is not easy, especially when the livestocks are used to graze freely. So I can understand the return of arnav will take time.

Both are missing each other and are thinking about other, isn't it cute, but the deer... Hope nothing goes wrong.

Regarding marking the territorial boundary I have a doubt, I can guess the terrain, but how the S and R are marking thier boundry? They have just mounted posts or had fence

For cattle muster
(como dicen en modismo)
!!!!! VAMOS ARNAV MIERDA!!!!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Another chapter ... 😃 Thanks ...

Very aptly named chapter ...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Hmmm Wonderful.

Thanks for the PM.

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

wow...you are back and two updates back to back...loved both...

so khushi and arnav are acknowledging their feelings...specially khushi..her missing him and visiting the place where he hurt her was beautiful...their love is always unique...they have found solace in pain and reading about them makes me real happy...

so the dream...but what was it...it is kinda upsetting...who is the coyote and who is helpless...

so arnav and akash both are having their doubts about shyam...good seems like many doesnt like him and are just cordial for the sake...and what is he planning...he doesnt know khushi right...but what is this plan of his..is it getting arnavs property...but anyways would let you bring it on...but he loves anjali too...its hard to figure out his character...

akash and payal are in the cutest stage...its lovely and i love ella too...just the perfect friend who teases...

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

I just love your dream interludes ...oh how you weave a story...I just can't wait for Arnav's return...I hope Shyam does not get to do ant mischief meanwhile

I am guessing he meets khushi in the next chapter?