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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Poor guptas, just to protect their girl, yhey had to move on and on...hmm...well, thats a relief..she has realised that shyam does not recognise her...

Well, i wish shashi and family had trusted arnav enough to tell him about the killer...but there r insecurities too, sigh!

And thank god NK reached khushi to help her out..phew! Though For a sec i hoped her to crash into arnav, but then the kiss made up for it! He shouldnt hav left her like that with the curt reply,though...it was her 1st kiss afterall...

Dont worry abt late updates...we r soo much into your story that no matter what, we will still be readind and craving for more!

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Firstly, I really love the details you go into - a Western on camera is a lot easier than creating the same with just words, and you do it so wonderfully! Every word chosen carefully, every description apt - just flawless. ...hope sprung like a small desert flower in her chest. I loved that line! Beautiful :)

Poor dear Guptas, they've gone through so much! And the uncertainty and the moving has left them exhausted. Perhaps those days are over? Oh but the story is just beginning... Khushi, she is a lovely adorable darling. And so brave! Till she didn't compose herslef, she didn't let anyone have get a glimpse of the turmoil she was going through. And the Guptas are such a supportive, close-knit family. Lovely :)

First kiss. Under the moonlight. With ASR. ☺️

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

oh khushi is just impossible. she doesnt know what is good for her. all the more reason for arnav to look out for her

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Amazng.
hope khushi dn't misundrstnd wen shyam cum 2 mit anji.
hope khushi tel abt shyam 2 arnav

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

A man is known by the company he keeps.

Shyam keeps the company of men such as Rocky and Manny, which i understand Shashi n Khushi do not know yet.

Arnav keeps company of men such as Aman (the sheriff), NK and Max, this Khushi knows though Shashi doesn't... wish Khushi would give him more credit for that.

They kissed! Not her first kiss. Their first kiss!

I wish them many more 😳

PS- Khushi is quite eager to be Arnav's employee... Wild Bull, Circle R and now she wants to work on the range too... Think kareka padi...

PPS- The washroom requirement bit was very funny 😆

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

I think and hope Shyam really didn't recognise Khushi.

One could feel the relief the Guptas felt when they realised they didn't have to move again.

Arnav had to be the first guy to kiss Khushi.

And that to in the desert under the moon. How romantic!

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

That was really unfair ASR. How is she supposed to protect herself from YOU?

The one thing I don't like about Westerns is the thread of chauvinism and sexism though. It gets on my nerves.

Otherwise, what a CRACKER of an update. Fantastic in terms of movement and adrenaline. The horses running, the chase, the guns, all of it.

I don't trust Shyam at ALL. He may be playing cool. Getting Khushi's guard down. She wasn't really in a frame of mind to judge clearly at the moment.

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

ok, see i am here as promised 10 chapters...

love the whole wild west setting...

HP,JP,Happy all are there and NK woho

Payal and Akash their usual selves ...

I am sure Shyam knows who Khushi is and is just paying to get her guard down. Anjali and Shyam i have a bad feeling but then Shyam kay saath AACHI FEELING ho hi nahin sakti na...

Their first kiss and the bathroom requirement ( kya timing thi)

Arnav needs to teach her how to shoot and she needs to carry a gun now...