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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Awesome Update M !!

I love the feel of this story , all the formal greeting , the bowing, the sirs and ma'ms aahhh!! Love it !

Oh and so love the name Ela for la ... whats with the exchange between Aman and Ela ...looked like an approval for hiring Khushi... probably Aman wants more than what they share??

So ASR put up an offer to Shashi...whats the mystery behind Box lightening???

Looks like Akash and Payal also shared a little something !

And coming to the Wild wild west rabba ve ... she stumbled he caught and i was like finally it starts!

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Asma

@asmanichatri

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

The setting is so removed from the original, but somehow your writing makes the transition easy. I am totally able to imagine A & K in an altogether another time and place. Nice. Can't wait to read more.

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Loved the storyline...could never think of arnav and khushi in such a setting but it works really well! Great job!
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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

They speak the typical ranch lagnuage! 😆 Awesome!

American setting is wow...!

Awesome!

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

This is such a rocking story...love it..! Finally Aman has a face...and we get to hear Aman's side of the convo...yay...! Aman has googly eyes for Ela...and Ela has the hots for ASR...and ASR is smitten by a lassie who rides a red horse...this is going to be fun..!

Kushi twisted he Sheriff's pinkie on the first day behind the bar...! Want Kushi to serve ASR...that will be a scene o watch...!

Finally here is a fall and a catch...!

Arnav wants to buy the Guptas ranch..? Why..? Some memories related to the past..?

With Kushi at the bar...the people looking for will have it easy...word will spread fast..and the watering holes are frequented by men...but since Kushi will work during the day..maybe some respite..?

I'm totally digging he pace and the plot..!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

😃

Love this fiery Khushi ... 😆

she sure knows how to take care of herself ...

What is between Ella and Aman I wonder ...

Trust Khushi to stubble right into ASR's arms ... 😉

Rabba Vey Wild West style ... Wow ...

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Aman is the sheriff ? And whats with him and Ela ? The cleavage is for ASR and the fiery eyes for Aman.. but she takes his approval before hiring Khushi. Theres definitely something brewing there..

Wild Wild West me Rabba Vey! Bwahaha! Lovely!

Khushi is badass and ASR is quite the gentleman. But Khushi is soft and curvy while ASR as all male and muscular. Wow, Rabba Veys galore!

Plus Aakashji and Payalji have their smile-exchange-program going on :D

ASR wants to buy BL, desperately. Why is that.. and how did Shashi react to his proposal? Ah, I love this story and I can hardly wait for the next update :)