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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Woooww, Fall & Catch

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nhrb

@nhrb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

wow .. a Arnav & khusi's story in a completely new background.loved it.

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

I am loving the story..very intriguing 👏 👏

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Nice update.. He want bought that property but why?...

N khushii fall he was there for here first fall

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Read the last two updates...loved them.

Your story is unique and love the way it's shaping up... Awesome writing..

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

I liked it..

Call me slow but I now got the meaning of circle R... And box lightning...maybe..

Why does Khushi want to work in a bar... Wants to do something..but did good girls worked in the bar those days...

I love the scenes in the bar and also box lightning.. Seems Arnav was looking for somebody... Finds her on her way back... Will he like it she works in a bar

Edited by msin - 12 years ago

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

So interesting I love this story already. I feel like this had never been done before like very deep southern maybe that why people haven't given it a chance but once they do they will love it. please don't get discouraged this story has a potential and I want to see how you take it further.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

I LOVE this story but i HATE blogs. Pls don't move it out of here. It's so easy to comment here... Please...

Rabba ve the Wild Wild West way!! Aankhein taras gayi thi yeh dekhne ke liye. Thanks :)

What is with La n Aman? She flashes her dimples for ASR and scowls at Aman yet takes his silent approval before hiring Khushi...

So ASR wanted BL but Rudi didn't sell him. Instead he disappeared one day after selling it to the Guptas. Now he wants to buy it out from Sashi... Either this or Khushi's job... ArHi ko toh milna hi hai :)

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

El Puma huh? Badhiya hai😊

I was so expecting a salon setting soon; I'm confused about the La-Aman scenario though. Between the eyes flashing black fire and non verbal message conveying, there' much more to them than what meets the eye

That this Khushi can ride like a man and shoot like one says all about her; not to mention her handling of Aman as well.

So khushi fell in Arnav's arms😳...they were Arnav's arms right?😕

I would prefer the story to be posted on IF😊

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago