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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Nice update...
Aman and Ela...
Looking forward to the next update..do update soon.

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Awsum update.
aman n la as a pair wow.
ur reader 'll increase coz its a really gud story.
aman n khushi encounter was nce

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

I love the historic feel to this story!

Great update! :)

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Liked how you've sketched Lavanya ...and her and the sheriff ...hint of an interaction there , maybe an understanding ...very subtle . Khushi seems feisty enough , but she's surely going to need some manly -- read Arnav -- backup very soon ...look forward to that.

I am liking the ' wild west ' flavour be it in the settings , the dialogues or the characterisation . Great writing .

Thanks for the pm dear.

PS : the forum is my preferred reading space but perhaps you can do both , if that suits .

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Something going on between aman and lav

khushi deals with one man brilliantly and falls into the arms of another :)

nice update

thanks for the pm

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Awww Khushi falls in Arnavs arm 😳
loved d update dear
thanx 4 d pm 😊

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

loved the update...khushis getting a job at ellas place...cool...now i guess arnav would be a much frequent visitor...so amna and lavanya hah...cute love to see their acceptance over feelings, though both havent even felt about it yet...

so arnav wants to buy khushis cottage...why???even akash was confused so i guess it has more to it...a background story...

payal and akash have met and are in good terrms...thats nice to see...

loved the update...and the finally hold...so will arnav answer the question...

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Finally had time to catch up

loving the concept, very different

and story is going fab so far

love how Khushi can stand up for herself and how she treated Aman

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Elaine sure fit in the saloon setting with a sheriff to boot. What's the mystery with the Lightening Box and Arnav? Why does he want to buy it? Was that a disappointed sigh at not finding the red horse? I am sure Sashi won't sell but then sounds like they need the money if Kushi is looking for a job. I hope el puma goes for his coffee fix every day there. And he caught her again! Looks like some sparks are happening there but why is Kushi mad at him?