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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Reading your work for the first time and i must say that you are an awesome writer...The emotion's a person goes through at every phase of his/her life was depicted really well...!!!!!!

But at the end i am a Taarey fan,so yea Rey going back to some other girl and making Taani a friend unlike before when they were in a relationship didn't go well with me...I am not complaining you for any reason but this couldn't actually be named as a TR story when Rey leaves her and suddenly just start's considering her as a friend and nothing more...

The way you wrote it,eveything was good but am a TR fan at the en of the day... hope you understand what i am trying to say:)

And as you are the mod one request.Do look into the comment's were word's are being used against Taani by the other fanbase...

You are an awesome writer,keep writing:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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At first I was like 🤬 but because you said it's got something to do with Guzaarish I knew it wouldn't be too bad so I read and it was actually pretty good
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
i loved d part by keeping taani of ur creations in guzarish in my mind.. loved d update.. u showed taani's feelings n rey's care for her brilliantly.. loved d update... i love taani of ur creations a lot..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

Reading your work for the first time and i must say that you are an awesome writer...The emotion's a person goes through at every phase of his/her life was depicted really well...!!!!!!


But at the end i am a Taarey fan,so yea Rey going back to some other girl and making Taani a friend unlike before when they were in a relationship didn't go well with me...I am not complaining you for any reason but this couldn't actually be named as a TR story when Rey leaves her and suddenly just start's considering her as a friend and nothing more...

The way you wrote it,eveything was good but am a TR fan at the en of the day... hope you understand what i am trying to say:)

And as you are the mod one request.Do look into the comment's were word's are being used against Taani by the other fanbase...

You are an awesome writer,keep writing:):):)


Just replying on behalf of Khushi here. This is part of Khushi's rendition of D3 called Guzarish. It wasnt like TR were together & Rey left her. They were just friends from the start:-)



And we didn't bash Taani, everyone just said that they are reading this only for Guzaarish or that they dislike her:/ That much is also against rules?
Edited by ..DamonCrazy.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

Khush, new OS from you and I forget I have assignments due today and I have to still start on them. Reading this and keeping the Taani you gave us via Guzarish, I would say I loved it. It's like D3 never existed, it has always been Guzarish only. And I kind of like that. You keeping the originality alive that made me fall for this story in first place.


Keep it up Sissy. You rocked it as always and you know that. Congratulations on one more brilliant piece and keep on writing. Waiting for an Guzarish update 😳


Aww, why do you always do that?? And then you crib the whole day that you have stuff you do! Wow, thank you so much sissy!! That's one beautiful comment <3 Writing, that I always will - no matter what xP Guzarish. . . . . soon. . ? . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: asmamember

Awesome,loved the carying rey.loved taani my sweety.

I haven't yet read the guzarish but soon going to read.


Thanks a ton dear!!
Hope you like it too :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..DamonCrazy..


Ah yes...I know. For a change, your PM came when I am not coincidentally doing my PCM under the hawk eyed random checking on by mother🤣. Waiting for Guzarish Paagal! 🤣

PS...I had absolutely no wariness before I started to read. I knew I could trust you & your writing. And my absolite love for it<3 Aww, that means a lot <3 <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yogini64

awww... khushi..

must b so difficult for u to write it like this 😳

moreover .. putting notes to convince us..to read..

knowing some will not read it that's the hard part...

but... as u have to go wid the flow of story..

the way u must've planned it... its nyce 😊 thanks! Like you said, it's the story that should matter.

she seems furious wid kriya's return.. highly upset n disappionted..🤢 upset and disappointed- yes. Furious- not likely.

even if rey got his love back...

he just can't stop caring for her...

saving from the cruel nest of shivam...her savior 😛

hope his care does'nt go beyond dat...😆 No matter what, we know we can trust his friendship.

coz i love kriyaansh.. 😉

& I knw.. u too won't do dat... coz u love kr too 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

when i read that its gonna be a TR OS...I ws actually like... "WHAT THE *edited by Khushi* IS THIS... HAS SHE LOST IT..?? 😡 " ... Bt since its gonna b included in guzarish aooner or later..so i read it...and trust me it ws pretty hard for me to even start reading it...cz i have EXTREME HATRED towards Taani... No issues wid Rey..but Taani...i jst hate her like anything...

This ws different...though my hatred for her can nvr decrease...still i liked this OS... Rey's concern towards her as a frnd n all...it was nice... Lets see whn u include it in the story...


Yup, I've lost it! Like I said, don't pay attention to Taani of D3 because you know that's not the one of Guzarish!! Anyway, thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Nice 1 khushi. . . .
Realy a gud 1. . . .
*keeping guzarish wali taani in mind*


Thank you so much! 🤗

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