ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N #2 (Thd3 Link - Pg 1)

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

I am new reader to your story…Loved all the chapters…I don't like Payal in this story….But loved the friendship between NK and Khushi…I loved the bonding between the Siblings (Khushi and Gautam) and off-course Arnav and Anjali….I always loved it whenever I see Arnav is being Jealous of Khushi…I don't know but I loved it….all the parts of this story are P.E.R.F.E.C.T….as PERFECT as the characters….Arnav and Khushi are made for each other.

Thanks for the lovely story…Continue soon.😛

Edited by sunitikapoor - 12 years ago

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Seriously loved the update

I would comment longer but no time

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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

PDA is what i was expecting from them as they never give thought of who is seeing them...and also who the other four who got thrill to see their closness of ArHi...

little guess----- NK , Gautam, Arnav's mother and forth one may Khushi parents or Aman

anyways loved the update

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ZohaAli

@ZohaAli

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

I love the re written version so much more. I didn't want payal to be such a negative character. And the progress that you've shown between arnav and khushi's realationship is great.
Annie's birthday update was a joy to read :)
waiting for the next update.
Keep up the amazing work :))

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

loved the re-written chapters

loved how their relationship is evolving

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Read all the pending chapters

well written

khushi dressing Sense is really good...

The theme s fantastic

arnav has become naughty...he s gng fr PDA...

Thnx fr d pm...

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

MAKKHAN FLY AP ...THIS WAS BEAUTY

ALL 3 CHAPTERS ARE SO FULL OF THE SMOOTHNESS

FLOWING IN THE FORM OF LOVE N AFFECTION N CLOSENESS

BETWEEN THE TWO

LOVED EVERY WORD

THANKS FOR THE PM

ALERT ME

KKKA

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

amazing updates
loved it

thanks for the pm

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

I love this new version.
All the chapters were superb.
Loved Khushi's excitement for
planning both the picnic and the party.
Jealous arnav is a treat to read.
Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

I am glad that you have chosen to follow your plans with the writing. As far as I am concerned, you can turn this story any way and I will still be reading it.

Khushi is such a wonderful person, inside and out. Despite being such a successful actor, she has not let stardom get through her head. She is ready to drop any work instantly, if her friends and family need her. She is such a simple girl in heart. Payal really needs to learn a thing or two from Khushi.

Arnav is head over heels for Khushi, isn't it? He is catering her every needs, and it feels like they are already a married couple. His jealousy is a sight to see! I mean to rush to Khushi's shooting just because a guy picked up her call is a proof for that!

The party was a success, isn't it? When has Khushi ever gone wrong? ;)

I see that their relationship is finally taking a turn. It's not just friendship anymore, it's a little more intimate than that. It's going to be really interesting to see them interact with each other! :D