ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N #2 (Thd3 Link - Pg 1)

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

awww as much as liked the other version, simply can't help adore this! So cute and sweet. And love how slightly other feelings started nudging forward into the ease and comfort. Nothing dramatic. Am really liking this. Oh must mention that Sheetal moment of fangirling over khushi was epic! Lol.
Oh and that forehead kiss thrilled me as well, there's just something about it that depicts tenderness, affection and care.

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

iim loving this new transformation!!!
they r gradually progressing :D

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

am i allowed to say, i preferred the earlier version? this seems very superficial in its treatment of the characters. emotions are messy but they are the heart of who we are as humans. in the earlier versions, emotions were involved, good and bad. it made it more real. this seems to me like an episode of the "lifestyles of the rich and famous"

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..ashiya..

@..ashiya..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Awesome updates.
Loved them alll.
You've written all three cahpters brilliantly!

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-tardisblue-

@-tardisblue-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Hey! You're back.. With a bang!
1 OS and 3 chapters for PERFECTION seems a good way to start my day ;)

Chapter 11: Arnav and Khushi are getting comfortable with each other and welcome each other's presence in their lives.

Chapter 12: Aww! Khushi went alll tge,way to surprise Annie. The theme was perfect! Well, we are talking and reading about perfection in here.
And Arjun is one naughty kid!

Chapter 13: You know.. I really love K's dresses and her style. They're perfect(again!)
NK is such a sweetheart! Looking out for his friend..
Seeing Arnav and Khushi like that in the end, was wonderful..
Picture perfect :)
Do post chapter 14 soon :)

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Really good chapters

Khushi is so nice to payal even though payal isn't

I loved all the romantic moments

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: segad
am i allowed to say, i preferred the earlier version? this seems very superficial in its treatment of the characters. emotions are messy but they are the heart of who we are as humans. in the earlier versions, emotions were involved, good and bad. it made it more real. this seems to me like an episode of the "lifestyles of the rich and famous"

Of course you are allowed! :)

But I only said that the previous Payal chapters weren't supposed to happen, but that doesn't mean I won't be bringing in the bad. Albeit it'll be done differently.

But if you look closely I am bringing in those bad qualities through their jealousy and such.

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barun ki deeewani

@.aarnav

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

totally different chapters...i liked this version

its nice update

continue soon

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

Superb updates... Khushi n arnav going with the rhythm... They both planned parties for their loved one arnav is jealous over rahul... But never let khushi to know this... Handcuffs part is awsome ... N funny too seriously my gutter mind is activated... Luv the gautam character here ... The fariy tale party slash annie b'day party is cute the way you described... The convo over dressing sense and after that the mingling with family talk on bar with khushi where arnav leave khushi for jiffy and felt something desribed very well... Payal party is cool... And the kisss is nice ... Finally arnav showing possessiveness... And forget sheetal entry... Jst thoughtful thanx for the pm dear