ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N #2 (Thd3 Link - Pg 1) - Page 74

awww as much as liked the other version, simply can't help adore this! So cute and sweet. And love how slightly other feelings started nudging forward into the ease and comfort. Nothing dramatic. Am really liking this. Oh must mention that Sheetal moment of fangirling over khushi was epic! Lol.
Oh and that forehead kiss thrilled me as well, there's just something about it that depicts tenderness, affection and care.

iim loving this new transformation!!!
they r gradually progressing :D

am i allowed to say, i preferred the earlier version? this seems very superficial in its treatment of the characters. emotions are messy but they are the heart of who we are as humans. in the earlier versions, emotions were involved, good and bad. it made it more real. this seems to me like an episode of the "lifestyles of the rich and famous"

Awesome updates.
Loved them alll.
You've written all three cahpters brilliantly!

Hey! You're back.. With a bang!
1 OS and 3 chapters for PERFECTION seems a good way to start my day ;)

Chapter 11: Arnav and Khushi are getting comfortable with each other and welcome each other's presence in their lives.

Chapter 12: Aww! Khushi went alll tge,way to surprise Annie. The theme was perfect! Well, we are talking and reading about perfection in here.
And Arjun is one naughty kid!

Chapter 13: You know.. I really love K's dresses and her style. They're perfect(again!)
NK is such a sweetheart! Looking out for his friend..
Seeing Arnav and Khushi like that in the end, was wonderful..
Picture perfect :)
Do post chapter 14 soon :)

Really good chapters

Khushi is so nice to payal even though payal isn't

I loved all the romantic moments

Originally posted by: segad

am i allowed to say, i preferred the earlier version? this seems very superficial in its treatment of the characters. emotions are messy but they are the heart of who we are as humans. in the earlier versions, emotions were involved, good and bad. it made it more real. this seems to me like an episode of the "lifestyles of the rich and famous"

Of course you are allowed! :)

But I only said that the previous Payal chapters weren't supposed to happen, but that doesn't mean I won't be bringing in the bad. Albeit it'll be done differently.

But if you look closely I am bringing in those bad qualities through their jealousy and such.

Superb updates... Khushi n arnav going with the rhythm... They both planned parties for their loved one arnav is jealous over rahul... But never let khushi to know this... Handcuffs part is awsome ... N funny too seriously my gutter mind is activated... Luv the gautam character here ... The fariy tale party slash annie b'day party is cute the way you described... The convo over dressing sense and after that the mingling with family talk on bar with khushi where arnav leave khushi for jiffy and felt something desribed very well... Payal party is cool... And the kisss is nice ... Finally arnav showing possessiveness... And forget sheetal entry... Jst thoughtful thanx for the pm dear

Thank you foe the awsm updates