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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

An amazing one!

The love story of Arnav and Khushi is recreated again in a beautiful way!

How many of us will be able to give up a blue chip company job and get into horticulture or something!? May after a certain point of time, money doesn't hold a prominent position in our decision making...

Khushi surely regretted her spur of the moment decision on walking out on him... How could she give up on a 10 year old relationship?

This little JP is so matured. Who said education makes you prudent enough? It comes naturally... What Khushi couldn't understand or bring herself to believe in, Jay summed up in just 3 questions and there was nothing more to say!

Arnav and Khushi had to meet!

Loved the quote with the pic in the beginning! No pain, no gains!

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hoopoe

@hoopoe

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Brilliant writing ...👏 Loved reading it... 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

very well written Kalyaani...beautiful..the emotions were portrayed perfectly well...really liked reading this one-shot...😊

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Loved it Kalyaani.

A very insightful one.

The love saying forever and Arnav being one who speaks very little does things for her behind the scene.

Loved it ! Arnav says only I do in the entire OS!

Its Khushi's inner turmoil that is being shown!

The church bell ringing and both saying I do the second wedding!

Brilliant dear!

Loved it very much.

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

I would explain it in one word.
Beautiful.keep writing awesome stuffs.

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

vry nicely written.. love jay.. his maturity... but i have a question.. wat 4 was she asked to say "i do"?? and why did he laugh? thanks for the PM... :)

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

K- here you went to a very deep level in the psyche...the place at even we do not want to explore because it is too painful. This story is about admitting the real truths of life...whether you like the or not and then making peace with them.

Without giving him much dialog, by his very actions, you managed to show a love that is as deep as the ocean he is named after.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago